Zhengxian Wushuang

In fact, in many novels, the author's ideas are good, but his writing skills are not good enough. He writes everything down to the smallest details, with the same running account, and does not know how to cut out the complex and simplify it. He writes many chapters without any useful plot. But by this time the readers were already impatient.

Inexplicable male protagonist, inexplicable love, inexplicable love plot, can't you cultivate immortality and become stronger?

This is the most self-righteous male protagonist I have ever seen, a ghost Yang who looks like a dragon.

I have never seen such a disgusting male protagonist. He is so self-righteous. I want to curse when I see this disgusting man appear.

I really like reading stories with a male protagonist, but this male protagonist makes me really sick. He appears out of nowhere and becomes clingy as soon as he comes out. I really want to hit him. This story might be a lot better without a male protagonist.

You are so awesome for writing so much. I've only written 50,000 yuan and I can't hold on anymore. I won't say anything more, I support you, come on, I hope the book becomes a hit!

So far it looks okay. I checked the book review section and it is said that it has a romance, but I haven't seen the male protagonist yet. In fact, I personally don't like long stories like this to have a long love story or a male protagonist appearing too early. It would be nice if they were together at the end. This is purely a personal opinion, but I still want to give it a thumbs up

This book poisoned me. Although it is not easy to write so many words, the word count for a good book to get good results is not about the word count. In the plot, there are too many clues and I have been forced to quit. But I really want to give the author some advice: There is no need for inexplicable feelings. You have marked the story about a strong female character. However, the heroine throughout the book made me feel that she cannot judge the situation and only blindly pretends to be cold. , It's okay to pretend, but the heroine's pretending makes me sick with embarrassment, and her character is always broken, and she does a lot of stupid things, sometimes cold and sometimes holy, I'm really drunk, and the male protagonist and male co-star are also... It feels like it's love at first sight, the love comes so inexplicably, I originally thought it was a good strong female cultivator, but this plot makes me feel like the heroine is like a novice, too immature. The writing style is great, and some of the descriptions are pretty good. I really like the setting of the white useless soul piano player. Alas... I quit.

Author, please give the male lead less of a role. It's so disgusting. He's so self-righteous that it doesn't help at all. It's all trouble.

When I first traveled through time, I had an expression that was cold and unapproachable. With such a drastic change in personality, everyone would find it problematic, right? Don't you keep a low profile when you first come here? Offended one after another, obviously unable to withstand my family, and still showing off my sharpness. If I don't eradicate the roots, I will be damned. Her mother feels that she was indirectly killed by her.

I read the comments and there was a male protagonist who suddenly lost the desire to watch it.

Why do so many people like the heroine inexplicably? Protagonist halo?

The fox is a bit mysterious. It was also the one who howled and melted the corpse with black before. There should be no problem with the heroine's life experience, so why did it save the heroine and choose to follow her? If I guessed correctly, this guy should be the hero or something. He couldn't be inexplicably trying to get close to the heroine. Another thing that makes me a little intolerable is whether it is possible to write a few villains with online IQs. They are all idiots who are the second child of the world and the third child. The reason for conflict with the protagonist is always a bit inexplicable. Everyone should be different. No matter what their temperament is, the children of a big family should always have different insights and brains from the gangsters in the market. If they are all so powerful and shouting to offend people at will, it is not expected that the protagonist will offend some hidden people for some unknown reasons and bring disaster to the family. There are also those members of the demon group, especially the leaders of large groups, who have the magnanimity and foresight of a group leader. Are they recruiting people or making enemies? Why do they feel like a playboy? It doesn't matter if there is a villain, but people of all identities cannot be so stupid. For example, if the previous recruitment was with contempt and coercion, then you can use inducements later. If the recruitment turns into offending, then you can also adopt the method of erasure. Logically speaking, such a style makes Fuhe a capable and not so decent leader. Does she have a temper that is easy to give in? As the leader of so many people, do you not have the ability to recognize people? If you force her to surrender automatically, are you sure you will end up with a help rather than a disaster? Where is your brain? Speaking of this, I also think of the forced marriage part. If they really used the method of blackmailing the heroine's mother to get the heroine to agree to marry, they would not be afraid that the heroine would give birth to a high-quality child and deal with the family. I am really speechless.

There has been a book shortage recently, so I flipped through hard and found this book in a nook and cranny. You won't know if you don't look at it, but you will be shocked when you look at it. The heroine... Is a domineering boss... Sb, completely ignorant of what she means. Of course, I am only targeting the female protagonist. The author's writing skills are good. I just want to say to the heroine: Arrogant and arrogant. There is no rules for accepting people and things. And what I can't accept the most is that the heroine actually has a Mary Sue physique She jumped off a cliff and survived, but was saved by a black fox The heroine was not only ungrateful, but also wanted to kill her savior! ! ! Performing revenge to the extreme. The most ridiculous thing is that the black fox actually fell in love with the heroine. What kind of fairy tale is this? ? ? To be honest, with the author's writing skills and a slight change in the heroine's character, this book will not be left to gather dust in nooks and crannies.

It feels good at the beginning, like a cold and classy heroine, and then later on when the heroine encounters trouble, she can't kill others and has no desire for revenge. She helps everyone regardless of past grudges. She's a bit like a holy mother. I can't stand it anymore.

If you think that the author's articles will get better and better in the future, then you can rest assured that they will always be stable without any changes 🤔

That demon lord should not be the male protagonist, he is obviously a villain

Write the male protagonist to death, this male protagonist really has no eyes to see

The comments are correct, the content in it is really disgusting. It is not good to choose any kind of male protagonist. I have to choose a man with a tendency to domestic violence and a bad temper. I feel sad for the female protagonist when I think of the female protagonist in it having to stay with such a male protagonist for tens of millions of years. , In real life, a woman can get divorced if she meets such a bad-tempered and domestically violent man. But the heroine in the novel actually has to stay with such a man for tens of thousands of years or even longer. I feel really sad for the heroine.

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Has the author written any other books?

The chapter titles are getting better and better, and the content is getting better and better. But I want to read the content of Reshaping Tianling first, but I don't want to give up the current content. It's so sad and I can't stop.

Book lovers who are attracted by the title and introduction of the book should not read the comments, they are too disturbing.