Dreaming into the Red Mansion

The plot of assassinating He Shanbao to the point of kneeling is a bit retarded. You assassinate the chief minister of the dynasty and want to kneel down to beg the emperor to avoid death? ? ? ? ? ? It's good that the emperor doesn't suspect that you were the instigator. The murderer is exempted from the guilt for no reason. How do you ask the emperor to explain to those officials? Will he assassinate officials in the future? If they all kneel down, they won't have to die? ? ? This plot is really **, and the author even said it was abuse. You are just feeding shit to the protagonist, causing his IQ to drop to the point where his brain is full of yellow.

I originally liked this book very much and subscribed to more than 400 chapters. However, I was defeated by Wu Xian'er. It was extremely poisonous and I gave up. I guess it was just the author who felt comfortable. You can't forcefully subdue your wits when writing novels. I don't see why Wu Xian'er can survive. Let's popularize science for newcomers. Wu Xian'er is a female ex-religionist of the White Lotus Sect. She has an ambiguous relationship with the protagonist. The former leader was stabbed in the back by his subordinates and put under house arrest. Wu Xian'er Er asked the protagonist to help save people The protagonist happened to go to Jiangnan to overthrow the White Lotus Sect on orders. Wu Xianer helped the protagonist to rebel and kill all the top officials of the White Lotus Sect. The price was to kill only the culprit. The first poisonous point came In ancient times, the imperial power would kill all the rebels. How could they care about human life? They would always kill the wrongdoers without mercy. If you don't believe it, go and see the fate of the Yellow Turbans and the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom. The emperor actually acquiesced and only punished the first culprit? The protagonist also saved so many beautiful female rebels? The second poisonous point is that no matter how capable ministers or officials are, once they get involved with the rebels, they will inevitably die. The emperor knew that the protagonist was having an affair with Wu Xian'er and he didn't do anything? The third poisonous point is that the emperor initially promised to kill only the chief culprit, but because he wanted to get rid of the emperor's spokesman, the chief assistant, the emperor directly lowered his dimension and slapped him in the face, letting the chief assistant supervise the beheading and kill all the White Lotus believers. The protagonist felt that he had broken his trust with others, so he had to go Assassinate the chief assistant, but Wu Xianer was afraid that the protagonist would be implicated, so he did it himself and was caught. The protagonist actually went to the palace to beg, and was finally replaced by a water-soluble agent. I think without the emperor's nod, such an imperial convict would not come out, right, just to win over the protagonist? First, the protagonist does not have any extraordinary talents. This is not a troubled time. There are many talents. I am the emperor. I like the protagonist, so I will imprison the protagonist and kill all the relevant rebels. Then I will send the protagonist to a remote area to avoid the whirlpool. At the same time, it will also sharpen the protagonist. If the protagonist can understand the emperor's painstaking efforts, it will be of great use in the future. If he has a resentment and kills him as in the next chapter If I were the Supreme Emperor, I would not only be a leader of the White Lotus Sect. If you die, the protagonist will die too. Dare to kill my spokesperson, and then the protagonist begs for mercy. If you don't kill such a rebellious minister, how can you take care of your younger brother in the future And the protagonist only wants to save this Wu Xianer, regardless of the family members who gave birth to him, and is selfish. The protagonist once had the heart of resentment and revolution I don't want to think about why. In the environment at that time, as long as the protagonist has objections, his subordinates can kill him. You must know what the protagonist's weapon is to check and balance his subordinates? It's his title, which was given by the imperial power Since ancient times, there have been people who have cultivated their own power, but they all require long-term personal efforts and decades of continuous efforts, such as Sima Yi, or family + personal efforts for decades, such as Wang Mang. The protagonist entered the Jia family at the age of four. In seven or eight years, he wants to change the world? Or in peacetime?

To protect Daiyu is to marry a bunch of concubines. . Why do so many illiterate people not know that flat wives do not exist? . . Everyone has become a red building bus. . . Everyone is on board

The new book "The Noblesse of Red Mansions" has been released. It restarts Red Mansions from the perspective of the real protagonist Jia Baoyu and witnesses a more beautiful dream.

I feel that the character Wu Xian'er is really unnecessary. It affects the reading experience and is extremely toxic. It involves a lot of mess inexplicably. The protagonist's IQ plummets once I encounter her.

First of all I really like this book. Why? 1. The character setting is very good: Jia Qing, as the illegitimate son of Jia Jing, is likely to ascend the title of nobility. It is natural to write a harem story, because if the protagonist becomes an earl, there will be one head wife and two common wives, such as Xue Baochai, Lin Daiyu, Shi Xiangyun, etc., Who can be included in the bag. Furthermore, the huge tragedy of Qin Keqing was resolved without any violation, which makes people feel that it is not very demanding. Moreover, the character Jia Jing is only mentioned in the book as being obsessed with seeking Taoism, but his character is not mentioned, so there is a lot of room for development. The author handled it perfectly. Because of his guilt towards the protagonist, he loved him very much, and it became logical to adopt the title of nobility. 2. The author imitates the original book to add a magical color, making the book much more interesting. A piece of jade owned by Jia Qing also lays a huge foreshadowing for the author's imagination. What follows are some of my suggestions. 1. I hope the author writes harem stories, but I personally don't like harem stories. However, because of the tragic endings of the girls, I can't bear it, and I feel a little uncomfortable when I see others marrying them, so it's best to write about harems. Maybe it's our men's perverted psychology that's at work, and I believe it's the same for everyone. 2. I hope the author will definitely marry Lin Daiyu. Anyone who has read A Dream of Red Mansions knows that Daiyu cried to death when Baoyu got married. When I saw it at that time, I just felt so desolate and wanted to protect her from that world. 3. Looking at other Dream of Red Mansions fan fiction, Jia Baoyu is written in an overly negative light. Xi Jiangyue is right, but the only good thing about him is that he is extremely gentle when leading people, especially like-minded people and beauties. I hope the author will not write biasedly. 4. Can the author increase Qingwen's appearance rate? How about letting such a great beauty hang out there? At least tease him a little to increase our affection. I hope to take him as a concubine in the future. 5. Xue Baoqin hopes that the protagonist will accept her, after all, she is the most perfect person in Dream of Red Mansions. You can write like this: When Mei Hanlin took office, he regretted the engagement because he disliked the decline of the Xue family. 6. I think you, the author, are not verbose at all. You wrote it slowly and bit by bit. It is best to write 5 to 6 million words. 6. The author can write more about the daily scenes of playing with brothers and sisters, and about Baochai. Daiyu's ambiguous affairs. Hope to adopt. 🤭

A small suggestion to the author 🙂, I think the protagonist is too used to Xian'er. Luzhu came to kill the protagonist, but she said she would spare Luzhu, and the protagonist hasn't spoken yet. Second, if Luzhu not only intends to take revenge on the protagonist, but also on the relatives around the protagonist, and there is no one to protect them, what if they are injured and frightened? I think the protagonist has brought enough excitement and worry to the people around him recently. Home and family are still the most important. Of course, this is just a suggestion. If it doesn't suit the author, or the author has already made arrangements, just ignore it. 🙂

Personally, since watching Red Mansions, I have always felt that it is Sister Bao who is the one to marry, and it is Sister Lin who is the one to fall in love with! Because their personalities are there! It is impossible for Sister Lin to imitate Sister Bao's appearance, and it is impossible for Sister Bao to change the personality of Sister Lin. Marriage and love are completely different things. You can be abused thousands of times in love. After marriage, everyone wants to be stable. This is a man's mentality! 😏 As for the thoughts of the majority of female compatriots, I don't know!

The term "flat wife" was invented by some people from the late Qing Dynasty to the Republic of China to cover up ugliness! From the emperor to the footman, there can only be one wife in this position!

The plot is childish, licking a girl and kneeling down, sperm on the brain

I feel that White Lotus Sect Wu Xianer was the biggest failure.

Xian'er is definitely a failure. The author added this character outside of the Red Mansion. He was completely unprepared. Moreover, the protagonist was too obedient to Xian'er. He even tried to please Xian'er's maidservant, and assassinated the protagonist several times. He even said that he would forget about it. Regardless of the safety of his family, how could he simply hide the White Lotus Sect and not mention that Wu Qi was the leader? Suggestion, you must know that Xian'er didn't clearly like the protagonist at the time, and even Xian'er's maid was dissatisfied with the protagonist's annihilation of the White Lotus Sect. She was also drunk. The protagonist is really unable to walk when he sees a woman, and he can't even be cruel. The novel is really unrealistic. Calling the leader of the White Lotus Sect whom he met for the first time a foster father, the protagonist is really capable and awesome. You must know that at that time, Xian'er and Xian'er were not even close to each other, and even his confidante was on the throne. It's disgusting.

The part written by Wu Xian'er is really disgusting. The author wanted to forcefully sensationalize it. I was really disgusted.

Why do all these people who write about Red Mansions like to write about cowardice? In ancient society, men were superior to women. It's disgusting to be cowardly in front of a few women. Go to the women's channel and write it.

Great Noblesse is very good, but why does Jia Qing look like a mentally retarded child in this book?

It's pretty good-looking. It would be better if the character Xian'er didn't appear.

Witnessed the beginning and end! Thanks to the author! 🌹🤭

It's good-looking, but Wu Xian'er is speechless. Doesn't the protagonist have any temper at all? I feel weak for the protagonist,

The pig's trotters have become a breeding code. It is estimated that more than ten women have taken advantage of it. There are too many, and there are also Xian'er from The Best Butler, Wei Xiaobao's Jian Ning, etc. It is probably more interesting than Jia Zhen in Dream of Red Mansions. It is exactly what Liu Xianglian said: There is nothing clean in the Ning Mansion except the two big stone lions at the door (although it is an exaggeration, but it still means this)

Everything was fine in front of me, but when I got to Xian'er's place, I was straightened out. . This woman and that green maid must be having sex with each other. .

It's been a while since I've read a novel in its entirety. Thank you.

I like the pornographic novels written by the great aristocrats of the Red Chamber.

Re-reading it for the third time, I still saw that I went to a brothel when I was less than ten years old, and then got involved in the Jianghu forces, and then I saw that women couldn't walk. I also read the table of contents later, and the protagonist quickly went to Jiangnan and became acquainted with the saint of the White Lotus Sect (see the table of contents, it is the Xian'er girl from the brothel). I don't know how the author grasped the plot, but this book, I'm quite looking forward to the character design of the protagonist, and the writing is also very good. So why is the book still half-dead and not popular? The author should think about it. Under the conditions of reasonable plot logic, the protagonist is going to become a noble and an official. He comes into contact with the White Lotus Sect who is destined to rebel. He treats the saints of the White Lotus Sect with the same attitude towards the beauties of the Jia family. In fact, it is us. The current lieutenant general (who has ideals and abilities) is just like the daughter of a terrorist boss (this daughter is not a simple character, she knows about her terrorist activities and is doing terrorist things). Seeing this, she feels awkward and contradictory. At this point in the plot, there is no collapse because the protagonist is still young, and there will be more to come. Wait, but the Jia family seems to have been implicated in treason and had their homes confiscated. Author, you love beauties so much that it will give you a fever to create a woman with this background. There is a reason why the book is not popular. The author's book is creative, the writing is okay, and the protagonist's character is okay, but the plot is not enough, so the author should not let down everyone's love for the book.

I'm not telling you, this book is really rubbish in comparison.

Suddenly I discovered something. The first generation Jia Yuan and Jia Yan are two brothers. Their respective sons are the second generation Jia Daihua and Jia Daishan, and then the third generation Jia Jing, Jia Hao, and Jia Zheng! And Jia Qing, Yingchun, and Tanchun are the fourth generation. Does this mean that Jia Qing can legally marry Yingchun and Tanchun? They are three generations apart. I don't have any other meaning, I just thought of this. I don't know if it is correct to understand "three direct generations" this way.

After reading Chapter 20, Death by Poison, the protagonist gave the impression that he was a pedophile, a brain-dead man, and a nymphomaniac.

The writing style of this book is quite good. "Struggle in the Red Mansions" mainly talks about the officialdom and is not close to the life in the Red Mansions. This book is closer to the life in the Red Mansions. It arranges the scenes of life and officialdom in a detailed and appropriate manner, making it easier to read. I have read it for a long time and I feel very good. Other Red Mansions are basically too depressing and cannot be read all the time. This book can be used as a soothing agent in life and can make everyone relax. I recommend that you read it and savor it. If you feel you can't stand it, you can complain to me, but I hope I won't blame the author. Thanks. 😁

With your update speed, I haven't given up yet. It can be said that what you wrote is really to my liking.

Xue Baochai's mother makes me feel so uncomfortable

，：      ，，， Personally, I think the book Red Mansions and Jiuwu are the two best-looking books from Qidian. If the author had corrected the bad points in the early stage, I believe this book would have done better. I was really dissuaded from it in the early stage. It's getting better and better after getting through the early stages I wish the author all the best. It took a lot of effort to write this novel. It can be seen