Pokémon's Elf Controller

I'm wondering why it's not popular. This book can be said to be Pokémon Plus. Based on the current knowledge of Pokémon, it once again upgrades the world view and background. In my mind, it can be said to be one of the masterpieces of Pokémon.

The worst Pokémon novel I've ever read, bar none

The author has been writing for several years and abandoned the book a few months ago. This one has stayed with me for half a year. After I got a girlfriend, I no longer have the energy to pursue it. I have to say that it has many poisonous points, but it still cannot hide the excitement hidden in the rough shell. Now I have forgotten a lot of the plot, but the main line is still quite familiar. The author has a great imagination, super big! The worldview is also outlined with a lot of pen and ink, layer by layer, slowly revealing the mysteries of history and elves. If you are talking about old themes, look at when the author started writing. At that time, the pm novels were either World of Warcraft or competing with the protagonists of the past. The style is like this, and the abuser is definitely Yes, but this is to bring readers' emotions, in other words, to arouse our emotional resonance, and also to reflect the author's good writing (although he will get sick from time to time). Now the author can update as he pleases, and the passion at that time has also dissipated. You can read it if you are cute, but hold back your curiosity! This book is barely considered a masterpiece

The writing is too slow. The author probably wanted to write a parallel world of Pokémon, but he also had to move some of the original Pokémon champions into it. As a result, the settings were super modified and the writing was not good. ① Set diarrhea: In the early stage, pet talents were divided into 1 to 9 stars, and understanding was also divided into 1 to 9 stars. Even skills were divided into 1 to 9 stars. Even if you separated ordinary skills and secret moves, they were divided into 1 to 9 stars. They also said that pets with six or seven stars and above were so rare that you could not find one in tens of billions. Then you wrote about the 8-star unparalleled king whose talent is 10 times the combat power and 15 times the combat power at the same level. Can you tell me what this is? What is the reference? No matter how powerful a Pokémon is when faced with a fellow Pokémon of the same level, it cannot be more than 15 times stronger than him without the help of external objects. Does this have anything to do with Pokémon? ②Magic modification of the evolutionary system: Those who have super evolved from dragons to hidden dragons are here. Various Pokémon have also been super evolved. A bunch of self-designed pets have been added, and there is also a super brainless setting of the will of the world. After reading a hundred chapters, you will find that the author's left and right brains are completely fighting each other, and his own settings are fighting with each other. ③The law of whether the protagonist group will be injured or not die: When the protagonist group faces a dark trainer who is much stronger than themselves, the Pokémon of the main characters will not die no matter how much they are injured. At most, they will be seriously injured, near death, comatose, and then return to the Pokémon ball. The villains who are stronger than them will kill several Pokémon in the fight, two Pokémon in the fight, and two Pokémon in the escape. Either you are not going to die, or if you are going to die, then you can write it normally and just protect the protagonist. The supporting Pokémon around you cannot die, and they can survive no matter how injured they are. The self-destruction of the universe can be blocked by the supporting elves without any casualties. ④The plot is too much, and there is no joy without girls: The protagonist is reborn as a peak champion. With the system and family resources to cultivate, he goes out on adventures by himself, but rarely goes to level up. He has to participate in ordinary competitions with the level of the Pokemon and get useless rewards. I don't know what the meaning is. What's amazing is the protagonist. There is almost no leveling content, but when you encounter an enemy, the elf level immediately rises like a rocket. With only the strength of the elite, he keeps running to get involved in the battles of those kings and kings. He does not overestimate his own capabilities and has no self-awareness. According to the author's own settings, his elite level and the king's combat power are at least a thousand times different. The result is that the attacks of those king-level elves can be blocked by his elite-level elves. (Written by Gou Shi Yi Tuo) We haven't even reached the first 10 chapters. As soon as we went out to practice, we met a woman. Then the woman was a virgin who had to protect the wild elves with her own life. She was seriously injured. The protagonist got interested and got semen in his head. He used the very precious Miracle Star prop to save an unknown woman without getting anything in return. After writing more than a dozen pages, the woman lost her temper and ran away. Then it couldn't work without a woman. After a few chapters, a female host came. Later, I met Zhulan (a half-female protagonist) and wrote dozens of pictures. Three more sisters came in. I couldn't write without a woman. [No discrimination against women, mainly the plots related to these female characters have no meaning for the protagonist to become stronger. ⑤The content is embarrassing, unreasonable, and fighting with your own settings. I have read five or six hundred chapters, and to sum up, it is a fantasy beast-controlling novel in the guise of Pokémon. People can live for thousands of years, and the strength of ordinary mythical beasts is infinitely magnified. There are no secondary gods with authority in the Pokémon world. Many mega evolutions and quasi-divine pets can fight. In this story, all the mythical beasts are just ants.

When I first read it, I thought I was reading a fantasy novel.

First, if there is a heroine, please type it in the title and mark which one it is, otherwise you will have to guess when you read it. Second, I hate the one called Mengyueyue. After watching Zhang Chun for more than ten years, I found him unhappy. The protagonist also seems to be unable to walk after looking at women. Is he still a man who has been reborn once after doing this? Third, please set up a good character. If you kill decisively, you will kill decisively. When you meet a woman, you will be soft-hearted. Make it as if men should die. The fourth Pokémon article is to communicate more with Pokémon, share each other's thoughts, and understand each other. Instead of falling in love with a passing girl. The fifth person who is the same age as the protagonist is only 14 years old. They are all underage. They use such metaphors as pure and pure, eyes like stars, laughter like silver bells, skin like jade, etc. Those who don't know think you are describing some fairy. Anyway, I am disgusted, no. PS: The above are my personal views and opinions. If you have any opinions, they are also personal opinions. This is just my personal opinion.

Are there any similar non-traditional evolutions?

Yesterday, I found more than ten Pokémon books at once and read them one by one. I found that none of them had their own settings and plots. They all followed the original Pokémon books and had nothing new. The author is good at this. Except for the basic settings such as elf types, elf balls, and treatments, which remain unchanged, most other settings including the construction of the world background, the establishment of the upgrade system, the direction of the plot, etc. Are all his own creativity. It not only maintains the original feeling of fighting, becoming stronger, and growing up with partners in the elf flow, but also is close to the style of the current mainstream fantasy and system literature, which is eye-catching.

My little Qi gave birth to, haha, four kittens. Rewards and fun😁😁😁

What about the author? When will the additional updates be returned?

I was so embarrassed at the beginning that I used my toes to draw a Barbie dream mansion, describing an underage girl with such a beautiful body and beautiful body. Is this a Mary Sue heroine novel from an early female channel?

After reading about ten chapters, my scalp was numb with embarrassment. The protagonist is fourteen years old and still a little kid. I met the Holy Mother just after I left the house. The protagonist feels disgusted by the Virgin's behavior of causing trouble for him. Gradually, the protagonist feels that the Virgin's behavior of saving the elf in the deep forest even if she risked her life is too Virgin. So touching. She is really shining. Our Lady is dying. The protagonist gave a share of his super, super, super precious three-point miracle power to the Virgin. Then they are attracted to each other. I don't know what's going on behind the scenes, it feels a bit too retro. Their names are a bit like names from when they were not mainstream and popular decades ago. The male protagonist's mother Bing Lixue. The name that appeared most frequently for the heroine in romance novels in the past. The male protagonist Bai Yuling. The Virgin dreams of the moon. Many years ago, there was a spoof of "The Legend of White Snake" in "Never Expected". For example, Xiao Qing called: Xiao Liuli loves Meng Lianli, Ice and Snow, Li Mo Meng Luo Li, Qian Mengran... It was originally a spoof of the non-mainstream. I didn't expect that the author likes to learn from non-mainstream sources. Our Lady feels that the 14-year-old protagonist is really a "strong man who is careful and gentle". Chapter 14, the description of the little Virgin is, perfect ice muscles and jade bones, perfect face, pure and holy. ? ? ? This reminds me of the goddess Athena and her licking dogs. As well as in The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, the female disciples in Cihang Jingzhai all take the world as their own responsibility, are pure and holy, and have the character of a holy mother. In short, it feels like the author is playing retro.

I'm so fucking stupid, are you sure this thing isn't here to taint my eyes? The second one in the catalog is The King of Seven-Star Monsters. It's the same mainstream fantasy routine from many years ago. Isn't it disgusting enough? The first few chapters directly persuade me to quit, but I can't stand it.

The game officially started. The Big Rock Snake first used Harden, and the Armored Shell was scared. Then the Big Rock Snake used Gigantic, and the Armored Shell used a water gun. The Big Rock Snake used the Horned Drill, which hit the vital point. The Armored Shell used Shout, and the effect was outstanding. The Rock Snake fell, and the Armored Shell lost its ability to fight.

After reading it for so long, I would like to express my opinion. Although this novel is classified as a Pokémon fan, I think it is a fantasy novel that borrows the background of the Pokémon world. Its background design is very large. It is best for newcomers not to bring the concept of the Pokémon world into it! . Under the author's framework, he has written his own story. If you like it, support the author to continue reading it. If you don't like it, go find a book you like and read it. Don't mislead newcomers in the comment area.

The author's writing is pretty good, but I think it's a bit weak. It is recommended to re-open a book. With the author's ability, he should have good results in the beast-control style

If you don't interrogate me, I'll smash your windows🙃🙃

Author: How many chapters does it take for the protagonist to reach the level of King of Heaven?

At first glance, I almost thought it was a novel by Philo. If you write about Pokémon and add so many strange things to it, you might as well write a book about another world, and then bring in a Pokémon system so that the elves can be alienated in that world. However, in the orthodox Pokémon world, it is very embarrassing for you to write like this.

Dear author, just ban this person who is "very demanding" permanently. If you post random comments, read them carefully before you criticize. The heroine is saved by the protagonist. The heroine's purification power is an unprecedented miraculous ability. It is explained clearly later, and the protagonist saves the heroine because of this ability. It is not the Holy Mother you mentioned, just know how to criticize.

I remember I put you on my bookshelf 2 years ago. It's been almost 3 years... Why haven't you finished it yet...

This is a pinnacle work - in my mind, it is no less than "The Charm". The author gives me the feeling that he is not creating, but telling! Tell us about a wonderful world! I'm really cheering for you!

What I read on other websites is really poor, not enough to read 200 chapters. His writing is really not good. Overall, I feel that only the names of the elves can match the original work. The other changes are very strange. I can accept it if you change the level. I really can't stand the evolution after one meal. It is quite impressive to be able to write so many words.

There has been a serious book shortage recently, and I really have no Pokémon fan fiction to read, so I have no choice but to open this book again, but! ! ! Sorry, I really don't have any motivation to read on. Although I can't write a book, this book really made me feel embarrassed and almost cancerous! ! !

It was really uncomfortable to read. Not to mention the cliche plot, it was also extremely confusing. I didn't even understand a lot of the data (~_~;). No wonder no one supported this book.

I stayed up late at school watching it when I was in high school. Although it doesn't look good to me now, it was really good at the time.

It's a good book, don't let typos ruin the reading experience. I have read more than 400 chapters, and the word "other" makes me speechless. Otherwise... Hope the author notices the typos.

The writing is very good, but I feel that not many people read it. Good books will always become popular. Come on, author 😁

Chapter 27 reads, "Being in the top 100 in the elite regional league competition will only reward you with five energy stones! With one hundred energy stones, even the king will be tempted!" Chapter 181 Lin Xingxue looked at Senior Zhan and asked again. The opponent was very strong. If he lost, he would not even have the chance to advance. The loss would be too great for Senior Zhan. Senior Zhan was among the top 100 in the preliminary round of the last elite league, and he has the strength to compete for the top 100 in the official round to get new rewards! The reward for the top 100 in the official competition is a thousand energy stones, which is enough to quickly push an elf to the peak of the king!

@, How much is the reward for extra updates?