The Ancestor of Physical Training

This book is not suitable for bookworms over 3 or 4 years old.

I have read 60 chapters so far, and I would like to briefly comment on this book 1. It is similar to the beginning of traveling from modern times to ancient times + the beginning of the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. The plot of the martial arts and martial arts period is not attractive enough. The book does not have enough depth in the early plot conception. However, this is the author's first book, so it is excusable. However, the early characters, plot advancement, and environmental rendering all determine the performance of the novel (most importantly) is the novelty and perfection of the basic setting); 2. Now let's talk about the core idea of the novel. The name of this book is the ancestor of physical training, so the key question is the basic setting. The ancestor of physical training is obviously the protagonist created by the author, and what is physical training? Well, according to what I have seen so far, physical cultivation is a person who is similar to an immortal cultivator and is formed by the main character using the Vajra Art, a martial art that can absorb spiritual energy into the human body, as well as golden fingers and modern exercise ideas to create a method that can absorb spiritual energy. In fact, the setting here is vague. Why can immortal cultivators absorb spiritual energy? Because of spiritual roots + immortal cultivation techniques. The protagonist, the ancestor of physical cultivation, is different from traditional immortal cultivators in that physical cultivation actually stores spiritual energy in the human body, rather than the physical cultivation in other immortal cultivation novels. In this way, spiritual energy can be stored in the Dantian. Speaking of Dantian, this thing is actually a setting in fairy novels. In fact, I think the setting of the author of this book is that the human body is equivalent to the Dantian, which is nothing new, and the explanation is far-fetched and awkward. In short, it is still in the category of fairy novels, and there is no innovation.

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I feel that there is a bit of lack of passion in the front_(:з∠)_, but the content in the back actually has that flavor a little bit, not bad (ﾟ∀ ﾟ)

Make a complaint, I will delete it after a while if the response is not good. 1. After reading more than two hundred chapters, Lu Kun's sect was wiped out. It felt like watching a prequel to a movie, not like reading a book at all! There are still spoilers for the narration! 2. The author's words and sentences are somewhat vernacular, colloquial, and immature. "Immediately", "Not long ago... I died a long time ago", I let you live... Just to let you avenge the sect, "He (she) doesn't know, he has found a life-long enemy for himself" "I don't blame her, she has her own reasons" but she will fight when they meet. Reading it feels like taking poison 3. It's a cliche, is it the same as publishing books from Qidian now to pirated ones? All kinds of typos! Come on, we've been talking about typos since the beginning of literacy, but now you're asking people to pay money to read books with such low-level typos! Principled! Mistake! 4. I don't understand why the author rewards himself for the pictures. Does this make sense? After all, novels are literary works, and they should have some ideological value in them, right? What does this book reflect? I'm trying to find the reason to continue reading after the limit is over, or what about other book lovers?

The character's inner monologue... Is so awkwardly written. It's always a way of expressing one's inner feelings. Fortunately, I've almost never watched Xian Xia, so I can continue to watch some conventional routines.

It doesn't have to be free, it's not worth it. Why don't I get a monthly pass after I top up? Can anyone help me with the answer 😂

Comments from a prostitute Let's talk about the shortcomings first The artistic conception of cultivating immortality is gone. After reading this book, I feel that it would not be inconsistent to rename this book "Biochemical Mad Body". Xianxia works are a unique cultural form in our country, and there is really no oriental romance in them. The meridians, acupuncture points, Qihai Dantian, etc. Have nothing to do with the physical cultivation of the protagonist. Martial arts also pays attention to skin, blood, tendons, bones, essence, spirit, etc. Even if you want to create a system of your own, muscle training in the world of Xianxia is really weird... In general, the system is not perfect enough. Let's talk about the advantages The story system is quite good, breaking away from the one-line narrative style in traditional novels (upgrading - abusing food - changing maps). The content is still very full, and the characters are also carefully drawn without being clumsy. Although it is not lifelike, considering it is the first time to write a book, it is actually very good, and there is still room for improvement. Come on＾0＾~ PS - I always feel that the main character's style of painting is weird PS's PS - please write a western fantasy, I support you

Well, let me ask weakly, isn't this novel about the ancestor of physical training? But the protagonist already had physical training before entering the other world, and he is not weak, so shouldn't this novel be called The Strongest Physical Training 🐷🐷🐷

The protagonist has no sense of existence, and the plot progress is a bit strange. Time travel is only mentioned at the beginning, but it takes a lot of effort to write it like that.

This book is not bad. The first 40 chapters are a bit jerky, but the rest are quite interesting.

I have always wanted to find a good book about mortals, and this one is really to my liking.

I suggest that the author change the cover: one with a man in ancient costume and an imposing one.

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This book shouldn't be ranked like this. I've read about half of it.

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One mouthful of milk is not enough, so I will give myself another mouthful. All Taoist friends who have given up on physical cultivation because of slow fever, please come back. Physical cultivation has been fattened, and the update speed will be accelerated this year! PS: Taoist friends who came in can gain experience in this post.

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I read "The Group of Physical Training" a long time ago. At that time, I thought this novel was quite to my taste. I had a good impression of "The Physical Training". The protagonist is low-key and calm, the supporting characters and the villain's IQs are basically online. The writing style is simple, the plot is reasonable, and there are not too many poisonous points. It is readable compared with many white-knuckle novels nowadays. Sex is really much better. Unfortunately, this book has never been good and updated slowly, so I gradually stopped reading it... Until now, I was directly bombarded by Silver Alliance, and the author personally rewarded it, so I decided to read it again and subscribed as the reading progressed! In order to show my determination to support, I have decided that from now on all my votes will be for "physical training"! 🪖🪖🪖

What kind of novel is this? Starting from physical cultivation, he first cultivates immortality in a thrilling way in the world of martial arts, and then joins an immortal sect to steadily learn the way of physical cultivation. However, when he enters the celestial sect, the sect is undergoing changes and is destroyed by the hostile sect. The protagonist develops with the inheritance of the sect, and develops disciples with his own cultivation system. During this period of development of the sect, he introduces all kinds of mithril in the world, and the world The structure of the book is very good, but there are some small errors in very few places, but it does not affect the reading experience. It is a very logical and thoughtful book. The reason for the poor performance is more serious. In my mind, this is a sacred book. I can see the shadow of two novels, Zhu Xian and Zhang Men Lu, but the author just takes the essence and removes the dross. It is a great job. Come on.

This book should have the characteristics of being as popular as Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. After looking at the past, I found that there was a little missing, happy grudges, decisive killings, and all the good things are mine For example, during the training process, five people beat the monster and were plotted and robbed of their benefits. If a girl manipulates the skills, she should be silenced later, but are you in love with her? Later, because she wanted revenge, she needed to sacrifice you and be harvested. Would Halo still be alive if she wasn't the protagonist? Later, she was hunted down and she accepted a troublemaker as her disciple, a disciple who liked to cause trouble. On the way to being chased, oh my God,

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Other books on physical training are simply rubbish compared to this one. It can be regarded as a representative work on physical training. It explains the process and system of physical training and improves the system. It has made a great contribution. I hope the author will stick to it. 👍👍👍

It is a really good novel, a thesis-level novel in the field of physical cultivation. It specifically combines the formation of each realm of physical cultivation with modern physics, medicine, and biological knowledge. The explanations are clear, coupled with the wonderful fighting scenes, it is not easy for human beings to survive. It makes every individual cultivator understand that today's happy life is obtained by the lives of the predecessors. The spiritual world in the back and the immortal world in the front have given a lot of foreshadowing. They should be combined with ancient Chinese mythological stories and, through the hands of Lu Kun, solve the mystery of time travel and the disappearance of mythical characters. Stay tuned for updates from the author

The comment area is very lively, let me talk about the shortcomings and advantages of this book: Disadvantages: 1. The title of the book is very big, but it seems that there are many loopholes in the early stage, and many readers may feel that it is not worthy of the name; 2. The book is relatively slow to gain popularity, and the author is not very good at using cool writing routines, and the early stage is Model reference, lack of new ideas; 3. This book is a bit biased, with shortcomings in character portrayal and emotional drama. It focuses on cultivation, breakthroughs, and battles. Some book friends do not like to read it; some book friends will think the subject matter is old-fashioned; Advantages: 1. What is the strength of human body training? How was the skill created? The physical talent of the early human race was not strong. How did the ancestors of the human race become stronger step by step? 2. Each realm is written in detail and profoundly, paying attention to process and details, working steadily, looking more realistic, and giving a sense of substitution; 3. In the middle period, it has its own characteristics, a self-contained system, and focuses on innovation. I am determined to forge ahead; in the later stage, I will accumulate more and more achievements, and the highlights will be full of excitement; Conclusion: My humble opinion as a bookworm who has been reading novels for 13 years. I know that some book friends have high requirements for the quality of books. My opinion is for reference only🙏

This book is really a true body-building book. The author's clear logic is reflected in the connection between realms in each chapter, which is a realization that can trigger people's thinking. This is a deep taste for readers and allows readers to understand the development process of each stage of body-building. This process does not say that every link is in place, but at least it is very detailed and exquisite. And it is not a slow-burning novel. I think the so-called hotness means that the plot does not reach the reader's G-spot, but that is for works of the old genre. For innovative and pioneering works, I feel that the process from the protagonist's realization and thinking to the research and development of a realm dedicated to physical cultivation is extremely wonderful. I don't want it to be cool, and I hope the author will stick to it. Although it makes me speechless to wait for your feeling similar to the weekly update, which is still sometimes inconsistent, but it is not a big deal. Seeing what you posted earlier, you said that your real life is smooth, so here I hope you can write well. It doesn't matter if it is slower. This way, the writing is more detailed. For a genre-breaking work, you must pay attention to a lot, just don't just update it every month like the ink book "Zhu Mo". There is a road to body refining with foundations that can withstand derivation, a group of characters with flesh and blood, villains who are not so brainless, and a foreseeable and passionate plot framework for the rise of the human race in the future. I won't say anything else. I hope you stick to it.

This book is a slow-burning book, and the more you read, the better it gets, especially after chapter 280

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