Naruto Twin Stars Shine

Everyone sees something different, right?

I have a problem with my IQ. After reading more than thirty chapters, the Konoha team went to a small country to perform a mission and were treated as suspects, and then they had to have their chakra sealed. With this kind of IQ, they became ninjas. I was really speechless.

I would like to make a few points here. 1. Danzo, Madara, Nagato and the like cannot be defined as pure bad guys. They just chose an extreme path for their own ideals. 2. The protagonist should not have a smooth journey, otherwise it would be boring. Just like most literary classics are tragedies, only when a few people die can the readers remember them deeply and the novel will not become obscene (Death is the first choice, after all, if the end is not dead, Jiraiya will be too pitiful) 3. Write more about the dark side. The general environment of Naruto is war. You must remember this and don't end up writing a funny article. 4. I have some doubts about Nagato. The truth that Nagato knows is that his parents died in Konoha. At that time, he must make arrangements to explain it well, so as not to end up with a BUGA. 4. There should be as little as possible about the original plot, otherwise it would be boring if it turned into an alien story wearing the skin of Naruto. That's all. I hope the author will continue to work hard and I will continue to pay attention🙂🙂

I want to say that Namikaze Minato's parents were ordinary people who died as thieves.

Oh my God, no? He went to a small country to perform a mission and was judged as a spy, and his chakra was sealed. Who gave those small countries the courage?

The author needs to remind you that Namikaze Minato is older than Shikaku and the others. The three of them were Minato's subordinates when Minato was a jounin.

Wouldn't it be better to just call him Wave Mirror?

Look at the cover┐(ﾟдﾟ┐)

I haven't read it yet, but I just want to say that the shoulders on the cover are beautiful 😍

The idea is good, and the free play within the original framework is excellent. However, the timeline seems a bit messy, and the rhythm is not particularly well controlled. Some plots are slightly abrupt. In the end, what is the reason for the eunuch 😆

The protagonist forcibly lowers his IQ. Are there any ordinary people who dare to scold him?

I feel a little uncomfortable after reading this novel. Firstly, you are a brother-controller, but you still lick like that. Secondly, can you be more manly? Damn, you are bullied in all kinds of ways, and you still have no temper at all. What are psychic beasts? They are treated as equals at most. It doesn't matter if you can't hold your head up in front of psychic beasts. This psychic beast is not one, but a clan. What a fucking idiot.

World War II should be changed to World War III. After all, the Second Hokage died after World War II.

I just want to know what the hell is on the cover and what is Naruto going to do?

Who is the heroine (~_~;)

To be fair, the overall writing is still very smooth and good, the pitfalls are filled in, and the plot arrangement is reasonable, but why is it not finished 😅

In the first chapter, I said I had so much energy that I wouldn't feel tired, but in the second chapter, I had trouble breathing while running.

Namikaze Yinjing! The authors of Qidian all have embarrassing names for cancer!

I was really convinced. I read the novel to relax, but after reading dozens of chapters, I immediately became depressed (╥╥)