My Cards Come from The Legend of Sword and Fairy

The author's writing is good, but I feel like there's something wrong with the setting. In order to maintain the battle in the early stage, the author throws out these settings, which is basically laying the groundwork for the later stage. First of all, it is quite amazing that this secret of immortality was inexplicably researched by a so-called scientist and then hidden in a game. It is even more strange that this kind of news was immediately accepted by the whole people. Second, there is almost no sense of the existence of state institutions in the story. It is outrageous that a big killer like the eternal life, which can almost completely destroy the current social order, does not see the country taking measures. If the author is afraid of harmony, he should also make relevant settings to achieve it. When I read the first few chapters, I thought the game was just beginning. Seeing that the three major guilds were so rampant that they regarded the law as nothing, I guessed that the real world is a cyber setting where plutocrats dominate. But in this case, since the game is not completely isolated from reality, it is unbelievable that these guilds cannot raise money. They simply ask company employees to turn in money, and they can buy it in cash; secondly, the chaebols are so law-abiding in reality and do not make extravagant moves (the confidentiality of information is not convincing enough). Later, when I saw the underground palace battle, I realized that the game had been started for several months, and many people had already left the novice village. Then a new problem arises. In this case, the 6-star card should not be the only one, or it will no longer be the only one soon. Its value will be greatly reduced in the eyes of the chaebol, unless they have additional information and are sure that this card does involve secrets (but obviously it does not), so the cause of the feud will be even less valid. The third point is some setting issues in the game. First of all, one person has one role. This setting simply serves the capitalists. If civilian players even have the freedom to delete their accounts, they have become slaves of the capitalists. Secondly, there is fake Baige. This game doesn't even have a remote voice, otherwise the information exchange will be exposed and pretend to be fake. If not, this game really doesn't care about the player's gaming experience. The third is the time flow rate. This is a commonly used setting in ancient online games and is still used today. If games are games, then this technology is no less valuable than the secret of eternal life. If the game is not a game but a different world, then some of the above problems can be solved, but the background of the game company is even more mysterious.

Tsk, for women it's character cards, for men it's character cards~

Is the upper limit of the fairy sword too low?

To be honest, the writing is okay, and it feels a bit like a traditional online game. However, the problems are also obvious. First, it is slow to develop. Due to too powerful plug-ins, the author is afraid of becoming invincible too early, so he has made a lot of artificial restrictions, such as a bunch of union hunts, card levels, etc., Which suppresses the development of the protagonist in disguise, which is a bit routine; Secondly, the tension is insufficient. After reading more than 20 chapters, the protagonist uses In such a long chapter, I am trying to increase my hatred while suppressing my level. As a result, the high-star card I worked so hard to obtain, and the six-star card that everyone could pursue, were a bit underwhelming under the same bronze. I defeated several opponents with suppressed attributes, but I still had to use it at high speed (with obvious side effects), and was also run away by the black hands, which made people unhappy! More than 20 chapters of foreshadowing. Secondly, from the setting point of view, there should be a difference in strength between each high-level star card. High-star cards should have the capital to make people fly into the sky. After all, everyone can compete for it, but your performance is only slightly higher. What does that mean? Is it a seller's show? In addition, with the blessing of precognition and sufficient ability, the protagonist finally changed to a five-star bow. As a result, a lone wolf passerby also changed it at the same time. It was very unexpected. I am afraid it is not because of the difficulty of exchange that it is only useful to the protagonist! This is no longer something so-called experts can explain. (Ps: And this lone wolf can still develop in a low-key manner without anyone disturbing it) It's very similar to those survival stories, where the cheating protagonist has been leading the way, and one day he spent a lot of effort to get something, but suddenly a passerby suddenly appeared and got it at the same time, which is quite jarring.

All I can say is, author, can you rethink your own economic settings? In Chapter 2, it was said that one thousand silver coins was an astronomical figure two months after the server was launched. In Chapter 9, the auction house started to sell one thousand or two thousand silver coins to co-authors. This group of top guilds has less money than you, an independent person, right?

I'm really convinced. If you can't crush the opponent in terms of personal combat power, why do you have a head-on confrontation with a large guild in the game? Anyone can kill you with just a few random people.

It's boring, the consortium is written in such a rubbish light. It doesn't matter if the protagonist can mow the grass unparalleled and treat the opponent's elite as a clown, but as long as the protagonist's character can treat the opponent's elite as a clown, it is too much of a protagonist's halo. The elites cultivated by the opposing consortium's heavy investment in team resources at a higher level are not enough to be abused by the protagonist's teammates in the novice village.

When I see the male protagonist's sister, I feel strange. There is no introduction to whether she is a solo player or a guild player. She is inexplicably much better than the male protagonist. She has passed the most difficult level in the Novice Village. Isn't this definitely a high-level member of the guild? Wouldn't solo players also be targeted? It's quite nonsensical that the character has been around for so long without any introduction.

Author, let me ask you, there are so many Legends of Sword and Fairy, their theme is freedom or something else, have you strayed from the theme? For example, in the chapter about going to the Yunlong Dynasty, you just go when you say you want to go. You have to give the protagonist a setting where I want to save the man-made disaster there, and if I don't go, I will have uneasy conscience. Wouldn't it be better if you just say that I noticed in my dream that there is an opportunity for me? You have to give the protagonist a setting of a Madonna, and how speechless you are before you can think of whether to show off your cards to the reborn person, and then you add that it would be very scary to give him a showdown. First, isn't this just nonsense? Second, your showdown is not that scary, it's just a book eunuch. Not at all, that is where the world process has come, and that is the responsibility that Jingtian takes the initiative to take. For example, Li Xiaoyao, who finally fought with the leader of the Moon Worshiping Cult, is that also the Holy Mother Li Xiaoyao? That is not the same thing as being willing to take on responsibilities. Because they take on these things, they appear to be holy, but they are not their holy mothers to take on these responsibilities. You have established the Madonna persona. How are you going to write this Madonna persona later? Or should you just ignore it? I suggest you leave it alone and turn over the Madonna persona.

In reality, you are submissive, and you punch hard in the game. When you leave the virtual warehouse, you are a weakling, and you will be sent away with one bullet.