Pirates of Heaven

Jing Keshou, based on his age, actually needs to pay more attention to his health when he knows his destiny. In the future, a physical book will be needed, and I will support it. It would be nice to have a big signature. My husband is your old fan. He has been following "The Wind Rises in Purple Gorge" since "The Wind Rises in Purple Gorge". You are his favorite author. I also like your style, ancient style ~ Purple Gorge. You have worked hard these years. Pay attention to your health. If you have fans, there will be negative fans. Since you are cultivating the Tao, you should also cultivate your mind. They are besieging the city without knowing it. Sad too. Perhaps, one day, those anti-fans will understand that life is only a few years, and if you spend it on beautiful things, be kind to yourself, and be tolerant to others, your life will not be in vain. Wish you good health, big brother. Pay more attention to your health, career comes second, and enjoying life is more important. Wish you well! Thank you for your hard work over the years. Thank you for your hard work (≧∇≦)/

Generally speaking, this book still has a strong writing style, a clear structure, and a grand background... However, compared to the previous works, the format is more than twice as small, and I am very disappointed when I read it now. To sum up, everyone wants the protagonist to die. Any character with a name, ability, status, but not a good-looking girl is the enemy of the protagonist. They are all jealous of the protagonist and use disgusting methods to kill the protagonist. As for the protagonist, his subordinates are all incompetent or of little use. Only one person can kill and fight hard. Every time he breaks out of a difficult situation, the next one will be hooded. After killing the enemy, he will be surrounded and beaten by a group. There is no one with a name, ability and status who is not a girl (wife) to help the protagonist. The leader has simply opened a new chapter in the mainstream of sadism, combining pleasure and abuse into one, which is called Shuangsao flow. Wow, it is really uncomfortable In addition, I found that the leader's books are really like this. Chunyang and Yi Ding are in sharp contrast. As long as one person breaks out of the siege, the books seem to be cool but actually sad.

The writing is good, the logic is poor, and conflicts are forcibly created. I can't stand it, so run away!

I remember that in the second year of Kangxi's accession to the throne, there was a small boat going up the river from Wu Gorge. Except for the boatman who was driving the boat, there were only two people in the boat, a father and a daughter. One shoulder was carrying luggage, which was very cold. There was another luggage that was very heavy, as if it contained iron tools. The old man was only half a hundred years old, and his beard and hair were all white. He looked up at people with radiant eyes and wrinkles on his face. At a glance, he could tell that he was an old man who had suffered a lot. The woman was only twelve or thirteen years old, and was very beautiful. She leaned beside the old man, pointed at Yanlan in a low voice, and asked questions, showing her innocence and admiration. At this time, dusk smoke was everywhere, and the scenery was vast. A bright moon hung from the corner of the mountain, shining with clear light and discerning people's eyebrows. The old man suddenly said in a loud voice: "It's worth looking back at my homeland in the bright moonlight! With such a country and mountains, when will I be able to return to my home?" His words were sad, and tears filled his cheeks. The woman said: "Dad is sad again. Everything in the world has its own destiny. It is useless to be sad alone. Please take care of your health." As he was talking, the boatman came over and said: "Old man, it is getting late, and there is the famous Crow's Mouth ahead. There are villages and towns there. Let's rest ashore and go ashore to buy some food and wine. ——The Master of Huanzhu Tower, "The Legend of the Swordsman of Shushan"

I happen to have a monthly vote, so vote for this good book I read a long time ago.

The gods have understood the prince's determination, and then the protagonist fought for his fate in the Trojan War... The gods will only think that this is the reason, and will appreciate and praise the protagonist's performance, but there will be no violent reaction. Anyway, they think the ending is destined... As long as the ending is perfect... In this way, when the protagonist is in the early and middle stages of development, the gods will only let the Greek heroes be gourds... When they put themselves in the audience and outside, they will unconsciously reduce the idea of ​​intervening directly... This is a very clever psychological secret vision...

This book is actually the leader's desperate attempt to regain Wen Chao's devouring his own luck. However, Wen Chao also had good means and only allowed the leader to take away half of his luck. However, now the leader's luck has been exhausted, and the green energy on his head has gone, leaving only the crimson luck. However, Wen Chao's luck is now booming, and he has the potential to return to the peak of the past.

Well, I heard that Zeus likes to turn into a beautiful woman and play with handsome and heroic men. The great Prince Paris should consider this. Corellon has slept with him anyway, so sleeping with Zeus is nothing.

I have to say, this is a divine book. After reading so many novels, the earthly immortal in this power system is the most amazing immortal I have ever seen. ... The settings inside are too hard. As long as a cultivator kills a high-ranking person, even a ninth-grade sesame official will be backlashed, not indirectly, but directly vomiting blood on the spot. After reading half of the book, I have no idea what magical powers, spells, or martial arts the protagonist uses. Basically, the protagonist just kills people with a sword. The protagonist's seventy or eighty spells have not had the opportunity to appear a few times, and they are basically just soy sauce. The most outrageous thing is that not only the protagonist's skills are playing a role, but also all other sects in the world. The protagonist's sect is said to be a small sect. If several sects hadn't suddenly shown their presence for a few seconds, I would have thought there were only three or two sects in the world. A lot of people are making excuses. For example, the protagonist's Uncle Zhao is basically missing. The protagonist's uncle who was reincarnated as his junior brother at the beginning is also missing. The protagonist's senior sister Loli is also missing. No one from the protagonist's sect was mentioned at all, and their names were not made up. The protagonist's master is basically a QQ friend. The blessed land of Dongtian, it is estimated that Dongtian has also been written down. Also, the demon here is also the most brutal demon I have ever seen. They were all cut with knives in the melee. Very anal. ... Based on the strength and demon shown by the protagonist, even ordinary people who have studied martial arts, such as the protagonist in "Invincible Black Fist", may not be able to defeat him. People who study martial arts can learn the power of energy to protect the body and use missiles with bare hands, while the protagonist, an Earth Immortal, only has a steel body at the seventh or eighth level. Before, the protagonist could be hacked to death. It's so weak. ... It feels like it's falling apart inside. All kinds of collapse. .... Looking through the whole story, you can't tell that he is cultivating immortality at all. The court has the most scenes and the most presence. How many days has the protagonist spent in the sect? 70% Are entangled with the court. In the early stage, the protagonist was a copywriter and copied many poems and articles. Later, he became a staff adviser and a loyal general. This is not the name, but this is the fact. ... I think this book would be more interesting if it were simply written as a historical text. .... The scary thing is that the book jumps to another world halfway through the writing. Without any warning, I jumped to the world of Olympus. Oh My God. The protagonist also has an old woman and two newly pregnant wives at home.

To be honest, all three paragraphs are actually written quite well. In the first paragraph, China is the most powerless, so the intrigue is very enjoyable. In the second part, the protagonist of Greece has also gained abilities, so the intrigue in the first half and the second half are a bit overwhelming and pretentious. Finally, in Japan, only the first part is incompetent. It is foreseeable that there will be more scenes of pretentiousness and slaps in the face. This is also normal. You can't say that you have already written two protagonists and then start over from scratch. This will not develop 23333, and will also make the drama more dramatic. Therefore, the author is very good in controlling the rhythm and the overall plot, not to mention the finishing touch in the intrigue. So in fact, many people now complain that one reason is that there are fewer intrigue scenes in the later period, and the other is national sentiment. . . The first point is to be honest. There is no way. The plot will go like this. The three chapters are all about intrigues and no pretense. Readers will also be tired of it. And the second point is to be honest. If you don't like it, don't read it. Don't come to the comment section to be upset. In the end, it was all written by the author himself. You are upset. Suppressing the author's imagination, another author has no use for the previous good ideas and has lowered his writing style. Finally, this group of people have to complain again. The leader should just follow his own pace. If he really wants to start a new book, he also recommends adding a good ending to the end of the Japanese chapter. From a young reader who really likes this work and thinks it is a masterpiece 2333

It looked fine before, but now I feel the fatal flaw of the Dragon Qi. The leader constantly emphasizes the official body in various books. Killing officials will cause the Dragon Qi to backfire. Why kill them? Abandon the five limbs and cut off the five senses. Where did you get the official body? The court will still use you? Officialdom is not a warm and affectionate place. How many people are staring at their seats, waiting to be stripped of their official status and not wanting to do whatever they want. As the saying goes, use magic to defeat magic!

Let's just say, after reading the prologue, I was glad that B was not the protagonist. He neither moved me as much as the righteous protagonist, nor as refreshed as the villain protagonist. It was just a half-hearted, half-empty story. The author may have wanted to explain the reason for time travel, but I was really disgusted by this chapter. It only represents the discomfort I felt after reading the prologue. Newcomers recommend skipping the prologue. I can't stand it anyway. Maybe the later part is good, but the feeling at the beginning of the book is very important. The first part is uncomfortable, and I can't stand it no matter how good the later part is.

I have been to the leader's club a lot, and I am probably still lying in the hospital, recuperating my kidneys. It is precisely because I need to transplant my kidneys that I don't get distracted.

Others assassinate me and plot against me, but I don't speak out and don't look for backers. It goes on like this again and again. It's so fun.

With the protagonist's qualifications, he could easily join any big sect in the world. However, the protagonist worked hard to join a small and medium-sized sect, Songyun Sect. There was serious internal strife in the sect. The more meritorious and talented the protagonist was, the more severe the suppression, but the leader took the lead in suppressing him. According to the book, any sect that receives a talented disciple must devote all its efforts to cultivating and caring for it, and cultivate the disciple's sense of belonging to the sect. As a result, the protagonist joined such a disgusting sect when he had better choices. I don't know what the author is thinking. If the protagonist wants to succeed here, he probably has to wait until one person can challenge the entire sect. But at that time, the entire sect will be useless to the protagonist, or even a burden. When the protagonist needs training from the sect, the sect suppresses the protagonist everywhere. When the protagonist becomes self-reliant and grows up, he has to go everywhere to provide blood transfusions for the sect. In short, I don't see the point of the protagonist joining this broken sect. On the contrary, his own development is restricted in every way!

How can a person who enjoys the benefits of plug-ins and copywriting have the confidence to mock other time-travelers? The Taoist freedom is twisted into awe of the royal family. Sure enough, there is no contractor in the officialdom, just like there is no bright lamp in the eternal night.

Why are there so many anti-fans? I watched it before and thought it was okay, but I stopped watching it when it stopped in Japan. I think it is normal in Taoism. This is the traditional ancient Taoist priest. Buddhism and Taoism kill officials and their luck backfires. This is the setting of ancient culture. Moreover, the book also adds the suppression of imperial luck, which is very reasonable. In addition, luck is mysterious and mysterious, and the protagonist just embodies it. Of course, if you read too much Shuangwen, you will definitely not be used to it. You will think that if you practice Taoism, you will be able to destroy the world and destroy the world. It is lawless. If the feudal horror cultivation like the underworld monopolizes everything, the world will always be stagnant and imprisoned. It is terrible to have no future.

It's good. The map has been completely changed. I can bear it no more after reading the first paragraph. There are differences between immortals and mortals, but I think this is the only one that can make the setting of cultivating immortals such a low self-esteem. The difference between immortals and mortals is that the officials who cultivate immortals will be hurt in return, while ordinary people kill immortal cultivators like killing dogs. The lifespan of an earthly immortal is only 200, but the mortal royal family will enjoy the cave forever after death like the earthly immortals. Being able to comment casually is the most attractive part of this book.

I suddenly opened it and read the first two chapters. What I want to complain about is that I was cuckolded in my previous life, and the heroine begged for mercy from the original owner, and was possessed by Xie. She also begged for mercy many times. It's over, the cuckold is over, and Qingmei, who is willing to compromise, is a winner.

If the leader visits the comment section. I would like to ask the leader, if you don't want to write, just write happily. This book feels outdated. Open a new book. Open a new book.

There are probably fewer and fewer readers. It's obviously about ancient fantasy, but it wants to write about the West and the Japanese. No wonder no one has read it. It was written very well before, but it's a pity.

In other words, the leader's books can be read over and over again, just like Star Master's movies, watched again after a while.

The world of Daxu has such a large population, and the world can only achieve the limit of one Tao Lord. When the new map comes to the new map, the population is small and there are many gods. As a result, the Tao Lord is almost the same as the River God. It's so pitiful.

The writing is in line with the sense of exhilaration of the time, and there is no logic. In the first world, the focus is on fame and fortune, and there is no planning at all in the past life. It forcibly creates conflicts, which is very characteristic of Xiaobai's era.

Sure enough, as said in "The Blue Emperor", even a miscellaneous fish like Heizi, who comes in with ten million, will be crushed to death in front of the authority. Sanzhen used the Five Meridians as bait, hoping that all the enemies would rush into the world and be crushed to death. This was not a mistake, but the Five Meridians had a better way. It's a pity that there is no over-limit implication, otherwise I really want to follow the wire and kill that villain.

The protagonist does so many great things, it would be difficult to become a Yin Shen. Then Mr. Xie doesn't have any plug-ins, so the Yin Shen tenth level can do it casually

Jing Keshou's style is still decisive, so it looks quite pleasant. There are three maps in total. The third one is Little Japan, so I didn't look at it. I couldn't stand it after reading the first map. But the second map actually went to Greece and turned into Paris, which I thought was quite interesting. Then I took a look at it, but the writing style after that felt like re-reading Homer's epic. It can also be said that it has more Homer's epic style, more like a rewrite. But having said that, extraordinary people do extraordinary things, ordinary people do ordinary things, and seeing the protagonist so happy, as an ordinary person, it is quite ordinary.

In Chapter 157, he forcibly created a strong enemy for the protagonist, and said, "No one can stop King Lu when he is angry, and the protagonist will die unless he can survive until the prince ascends the throne." "The prince cannot help the protagonist who once saved his concubine because of worries, and even has to tell the news." 😄😄 This forced routine is written by whoever pays to see who is xx! ! !

Against the sky, lightning points come one after another. It can be said that lightning points promote the development of the plot Mainly because of the lack of logic, I write wherever I dream ps If there is a group of extra dogs, just put aside the hard brains, it is also the diversity of species.

Even if you're dead, you won't be able to live. What's the euphemistic name of a system? He also issued so-called tasks and wanted to control the protagonist to be a licking dog.