Naruto-Level Scientist

The idea is very good, but the layout has a lot of contradictions. It was created by the brain, and the pig script is not very useful. It becomes a passive skill, and when you enter the plot, if you have no ideas, are you still a time traveler? At the beginning of the article, the character portrays a cold humanity, but later on, emotional drama is constantly added. The most important thing is that you write about technology and you don't stand out.

The poison is a little bit poisonous. Even without the reincarnation eye, you can have the force of gravity and repulsion. People also call it time and space escape.