Legend of Peach Blossom on the Immortal Road

After reading these chapters, what can I say? The story has no main line, the protagonist has no goal, the world view is incomplete, the forces are unclear, the supporting characters are dispensable, and the protagonist's character is unclear. It is better to think of this book as a daily text, but the key author also wanted to write it as a pretentious text, so it is a bit nondescript. The above are personal opinions and cannot be refuted.

The beginning is good, but the pace is too slow. You can't practice even though you put pig's feet on the shelves. It's just torture for the sake of torture. What do you want to write? Can the primary and secondary be found? If you can't practice, you still wander around every day, and you only practice qi when you have reached the end of your life?

From the perspective of an old bookworm, this novel is very attractive at first, but the plot later is really disappointing. The most fundamental point of online novels is to have fun, preferably with an online IQ. But this novel has no point (later), and its IQ is a little off. It's really disappointing. The author actually vows to write novels regardless of readers' opinions. It's really ridiculous. If you ignore readers, who are you writing novels for, yourself?

It doesn't matter if you jump through chapters 5 to 5 of this book, Jellyfish Articles

It's a good book, but it's a pity

There is too much verbosity at the beginning and introduction. There is no need to explain it in such detail. It is like a textbook and makes me want to fall asleep just looking at it. When you reach the state, you can describe it. The description of the skills is too detailed. It would be nice to have a starting direction. You don't even know if you can practice it, but you have already figured out the plan to form the elixir. This is too high-spirited. You can describe the rest in the plot and practice. This way, the sense of immersion will be better.

It has been updated~~Other books last for one month, but this book lasts for a year. .

I couldn't help but complain when I saw Chapter 61 I feel that Huang and his painting style are at odds with each other. The previous setting cannot explain the plot where Huang insists on having a "fight to the death" with the protagonist. Also, the protagonist always insists on going to the martial arts field when Huang wants the title of senior brother. The setting of the protagonist is for an adult. It turns out that he doesn't want to be a senior brother, and the title of senior brother has no benefits. Holding on to the title does not fit with the setting. . . Speaking of this, I feel that the forced 30 years of skill before was too deliberate, just to suppress Huang Zai and secure the position of senior brother. After all, cultivating immortals only requires the perfection of the realm, that is, the penetration of meridians. So much internal power is useless, and it cannot be converted into spiritual power. If it is not all wasted, it is better to use resources or guidance in the later stage if there is a way to return favors. . .

. . . . . Excuse me. . Goodbye

To be honest, I felt something was wrong when I saw the title of the book, but after reading what other book friends said, I went to read it. I originally had high expectations, but in the end it was still a novel that was thrown into the poor category.

Actually, it's just two words😎 Monthly😭

I've almost finished it after watching it for a few days. I feel like the storyline is so convincing.

The novel we paid for has now been forcibly deleted! Is this behavioral starting point illegal? Is it possible to demand compensation and an apology?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​"""""" Moreover, the setting of this waste material is very reasonable. Because they are modern people who are scientific and do not have that mysterious and mysterious feeling, so they cannot enter into cultivating immortals. This waste material is very reasonable! Also, because the protagonist performed very well before, he was recognized by the boss. He spent several years helping the protagonist find the cause and solve it. How can there be such an elder in the waste material stream?

To be honest, it's a good book. It's one of the few Qidian Xianxia novels that has a "fairy spirit". It's a pity that it's not very popular. Logically speaking, I rarely make suggestions about plots to writers, but I still want to give them. . . I feel that the plot after the protagonist returns home becomes a bit like martial arts. As a high-ranking top immortal sect disciple and some unscrupulous casual cultivators, the intrigues, passive equipment 13 and so on, I feel that it has lowered the style of the book a lot... I hope that I can get out of this style quickly.

I would like to give Lu Da a suggestion: Lu Da doesn't have much time to write books, but dual-book publishing not only takes up more time, but also affects the way of thinking. So, can Lu Da focus on one story first, whether it is Lost or Immortal Road, finish one first, and then write the other. By concentrating energy and time, can it be updated faster or more frequently? To be honest, with Lu Da's writing ability, if updates could be guaranteed, both Lost and Fairy Road would definitely be on the list. However, because the updates are too slow and too infrequent, many book friends have lost. I hope Lu Da can consider it.

The writing is very real. If it can be adapted into a TV series, I feel it will be much better than some of the strange online dramas nowadays. The emotional line of the story line is still a bit thin. It is still unfolding and has not been updated for a long time. I hope the writer will continue to work hard and not lose it.

When I wrote 1629, you were only thinking about you, a peach blossom, but now I write two books that are connected and written intermittently. Are you a human being?

A good book becomes more exciting after fifty chapters. I hope that writers can promote themselves more. Keeping updated is the most important thing.

I feel that this book and "Tai Shang Zhang" are both good books, and the author's storytelling ability is very high. Why do so many people not like to read them (the results are not good)? You said the plot is too slow, but I just want to know what plot you want? Can you pretend to be cool and slap in the face, upgrade to fight monsters, or can Zhang Zhang be cute and funny? I would like to ask how the No. 1 Book "My King, Spare Your Life" is better than this book? I gave up after reading "Your Majesty, Spare Your Life" after reading a few chapters. It is still under review, but I saw this book on the shelves. The actor also has a program "The Birth of an Actor", which allows the audience to see some good actors. What should the author do? Are good authors always sitting on the bench?

I want to watch Lost😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫[fn= 28]😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫

I was a little excited after reading the introduction. I tried to get into the trap and wanted to ask about the CP situation. The word "peach blossom" made me instinctively feel uneasy. .

I found out that there was a limited exemption, so I came in to take a look. I remembered that I had read this book before, and the beginning of it felt good. Later, the protagonist couldn't break the barrier of knowledge and vision for a long time. The author's explanation is that modern people who have traveled through time cannot assume the identity of immortal cultivators. This paragraph was too ridiculous, and it was too long and smelly, so I gave up. Science is the knowledge about exploring the laws of nature, and it is the general name of the knowledge system for human exploration, research and understanding of the laws of change of all things in the universe. As a person who studies science, how can I not understand that cultivation is the science of the Xianxia world The protagonist also went to college in his previous life. In two different worlds, his vision is broader than that of the natives, and his imagination is definitely bigger than that of the natives. Understand the all-encompassing nature of the universe and the unfathomable beauty of the world. I have been influenced by my ears and eyes that I should have a deeper understanding of cultivating immortals than the natives. How can I not believe it in my heart? Do you always think that everything you hear, think, see and hear is false? The key is that this knowledge barrier has been broken for almost a hundred chapters, which is really stinky and long.

After a brief look at the sects in this book, the system is extremely strict, and all the humanities and sophistication are reasonable. Almost all disciples are under surveillance, and monitored through methods such as systems and oaths. No one can step beyond the bounds. It is basically impossible for the previous sects to be harmed, infighting, etc.

I have only read a few dozen chapters, and I feel like I am enjoying the spring breeze. I feel that the flavor of cultivating immortals is very positive. However, the latest chapter has not been updated, and I am a little worried that this book is too eunuch.

From the book friends who came here from Lost in 1629, it seems that eunuchs are a habit!

! Write a book about The Eunuch that really belongs to you. .

Why was Lost taken off the shelves? Harmonized?

The author has forgotten this book. Unfortunately, I am not a big boss. A Weibo post cannot make the author get up in the middle of the night to update.

After this Shennong personally tested the poison, this book is extremely poisonous, so read with caution. The author wants to go against the routine, but his writing power is not enough. He explains it in large paragraphs, which is boring. The main reason is that the logic is too confusing. This Shennong has been poisoned to death.