Reborn Dragon

There is no protagonist in this book, right? The protagonist is reborn as a snake. The key question is that it is understandable that he would not dare to eat people after eating the blood of an old beggar. Second, the wonderful clip, the old beggar was killed. The black man's belt is holding a person. This scene is well written, but it is also very poor. But what about the protagonist? But he writes about how others are doing. I suggest you this snippet. Follow the man in black and rescue him. This is a kind of limitation of the protagonist. With the trigger of this paragraph, it will not be so difficult to write later. Third, you smelled something going on at the construction site by the lake. When you went to the construction site, you found a woman in a wooden box that looked poor and handmade. On the way you drove, you said you saw the woman, but pretended that you couldn't bite her open or save her. In the werewolf base, you chewed open countless wooden boxes. What's going on? The fourth question is whether to save the girl or not. You describe him so beautifully, but you don't save him. You might as well just say that he is very beautiful. You describe what he looks like. In fact, if you don't save him, your description is so good, which will only give the reader a psychological imbalance. Do you know? Why is it not balanced? You described him so well and so beautifully, but you didn't save him? This paragraph was originally very exciting, but it describes to you that it is not exciting at all and is a bit sad. You wrote this paragraph very well. It would be better if you could save the woman. You could describe it when the werewolf attacks the protective shield. The part about attacking werewolves and saving girl Bian could be written very well, but it is not as exciting as the writing. In a word, the protagonist you described is very useless.

I read how the environment described in Chapter 2 is exactly the same as that in China 😅😅 It doesn't look like foreign countries.