Make a Revolution as a Mage

First of all, we must admit that this book does not fall into the trap of a cool novel. The protagonist, supporting characters and villain's IQs are all online for a long time. The plot also has ups and downs. The protagonist's experience of struggling to survive is very interesting. But the plot began to change as it got longer. It was forcibly advanced in order to advance the plot, and forcibly added difficulties to the protagonist. New difficulties appeared before the exciting point broke out. The rhythm of the whole book is a continuous cycle of "the enemy is too strong - the protagonist works hard to defeat the enemy - and new enemies appear again." But the villain is the Church from the beginning to the end. Why does the protagonist cheat all the way but always fights these enemies, and still can't defeat them? Therefore, the villains lack a sense of hierarchy, and the enemies are all tool men who appear to increase the difficulty. Every encounter is too similar, and the more you read, the more tired you become. Secondly, the structure is too small, and the dramatic conflicts have no ups and downs. The revolution has been going on for a long time, but it is just a struggle for power. What is the difference between the church and the magistrates for ordinary people? Moreover, when encountering problems, they rely on coups and the protagonist Wushuang. All pig-foot knights are weak chickens who can kill hundreds of people with one move. What are the political stances of different people? What are the interests and capabilities? How capable is a country? How many people are there in the church? Where does the money come from? How did the coup happen? How were these people dispatched? There is no way to explain it clearly. I can only write out a group of enemies wherever necessary. In essence, it still becomes the story of Long Aotian, but it does not have the same sense of fun as a refreshing novel.

，，，，，，，，，，，，；， If you have only read a dozen chapters, there is no need to comment.

How should I put it? As the author said at the end, this book was very sad even for the author. The whole book is filled with contradictions, love, misunderstandings, sacrifices, regrets, and deceptions. It uses realistic language and wisdom to compose a sour epic with a tight rhythm, but will leave readers with time to regret. (I came back to review the book more than a year after reading it, because the real sourness or loneliness can strike people when they are most vulnerable.)

I feel that this book is the best one I have ever read that depicts character growth. How does a person grow into a great character? When he started to escape, he must not have thought about what his future would be like. At first he was just trying to survive, but later he met groups of people struggling on the edge of life and death, experienced various conspiracies in foreign lands, and found that if the Holy See had not been destroyed, he would not have been able to live a good life. Various events gradually pushed him to become the leader of the resistance. Who would have thought that a child from a small landlord family could fight step by step with all countries watching eagerly, rise up on the verge of national subjugation, and become one of the world's most powerful countries in just seventy years with a weak body. There are many transitions during the term, including temporary setbacks and ups and downs. This is the story of the real world.

I just finished reading it, let me comment. This novel is the most clichéd time-travel novel. It has some of the iconic routines of time-travel fiction, such as golden finger (female protagonist)/break-off (anti-break-off)/reality temptation/(false dream), etc. The author wrote the middle and later stages smoothly even though his writing skills were a bit immature in the early stage, without leaving too many poisonous points. It is not easy. It is also not easy to write a routine novel with a fresh and refined atmosphere. It's not easy (although it is still a routine novel) Some people think that the protagonist of this book is too funny, or does not feel revolutionary. In fact, in my opinion, the atmosphere of the whole novel is quite depressing. From the beginning, the author is trying his best to portray the background, especially when Benjamin starts to rebel against the church, he begins to understand that there are all pawns in the chess game, whether it is the lofty Pope, the extremely noble king, or Benjamin himself.

Finished reading. The following book review contains a lot of spoilers and subjective thoughts, please read with caution. This book review is a brief version, and the overall book review will be written next time. —— —— I am so confused at the end! Just by looking at the beginning, you can't tell that this is a fucking tragedy! After reading the whole text, almost all CPs related to the protagonist died unilaterally. Damn it... The strength of this book is that the two factions (or even multiple factions) are constantly shading each other, the plots are endless, there are piles of foreshadowings, and there are piles of pitfalls, and all tactics are switched. This is definitely the most burglary I have ever seen. In the book review, the readers were stunned by the plot, which turned over and over again, and could not guess the gameplay at all. But I still want to say the big sword at the end. (This makes me want to write an article!) —— —— Check the CPs I have visited: Miles × Benjamin (this pair is really good, on the surface it looks like the dual protagonist template is actually one dead and the other fake protagonist) BE The Benjamin system is flawless (this pair really is! Several years of companionship! The only confidant!) BE (extra HE) Benjamin Grant is perfect (I really have no resistance to orthopedics, but these brothers always remind me of Roland and Cavins, but they still have giant knives. From a certain perspective, this is the end of death for both parties) BE Joanna Lewin is perfect (This pair of lilies is really good. One is bright, one is dark, one is quiet, and the other has similar strengths and complementary personalities, although the original text is not obvious...) HE Michelle Anne (Lilies are blooming under Brokeback Mountain.) BE Michelle Benjamin (This pairing is great. But there was no possibility of love between them before - but this pairing is still great! Especially the early rivalry!) BE Michel Lance (a pairing of constantly bickering supporting characters, the smooth-talking politician and the strong-willed knight captain) They quarrel again and again, it's really loving. And the sense of cp is really strong.) BE/HE Cain and Abel are the same (this pair... Are almost the same as Benjamin Grant. They are still orthopedic. But their characters don't appear much in the text, so it's hard to appreciate.) BE —— —— In addition, Miles is awesome. Miles is so nice.

I feel like there is a very serious shortcoming, the layout is too small.

Really verbose. The plot is like constipation. It takes a long time to squeeze out a lump...

I didn't expect Qidian to have this book. I watched it when I was in high school and liked it very much. Now I have graduated from graduate school. So missed.

The plot collapsed after Chapter 200. I guess the author didn't save the draft idea, so I don't recommend reading it.

I always feel that there are too many light mages. Other mages feel that the total number of mages in a country is less than 10,000, and those with combat effectiveness are only a few thousand. A mages guild is only a few hundred, and a team of light mages is only a few hundred? The protagonist can't do enough! How could so many light mages come from one carrot and one pit? It feels like my people all popped out of the void! Not much, no impact at all

Read a little Complain about it ①The system talks too much, who is the protagonist? ②The start is quite chaotic, shouldn't we explain the main settings?

I can't see it, it's too hurtful that the dialogue and cheating system language can't be brought in. 😐

There are a lot of twists and turns, the writing style is very exciting, the story's rationality cannot be judged, and the characterization ability is sometimes high and sometimes low. ① The system has too strong a sense of presence. It can be said that I generally don't like works with too strong a system's presence. I personally understand that the system is used to explain bugs and promote characters and plots. ②Reversal and reversal will only lead to farce in the end ③Three elements of the novel: characters, plot, and environment. From what I saw, there are three witches, the protagonist, an assassin, a sleepwalking noble, the old duke, and the old lady. It can be said that the character portrayal is not very successful, and there is basically no logic in the words and deeds of the characters. The plot changes three times in one chapter, reversing again and again, just like the farce mentioned. The environment is too out of the ordinary and does not provide an immersive experience. Although online novels are literary snacks, they are also novels.

One floor said that the plot is a zero-sum game, which is completely correct Looking at it simply, the protagonist will die if he doesn't do anything, regardless of the possible consequences In addition, the author's plot is amazing in some parts, but some loopholes are obvious Finally, the author is too cruel about the fate of the characters. Some characters with good impressions suddenly disappeared, some died inexplicably, and some clearly survived, but the protagonist insisted on killing them , this makes me very unhappy Here is a tribute to some characters Anne, one of the two daughters who almost killed the protagonist in the beginning The stupid and tall follower of the chamber pot noble The protagonist's instructor The protagonist's father was strangled to death by his youngest son The son of the silver fox boss There are also various kings, princesses and queens, almost all of them died Finally, there is Grant, who is really pitiful

The first few chapters are a bit interesting. Later on, there is a father who treats his son like this. No matter how useless he is, he is still his son. It is not in line with human ethics. Others bully the family, and a duke actually wants his son to have sex! I was also drunk and decisively avoided people🪖

It's quite new. The battle royale was very fake. People who participated voluntarily entered and then regretted it. The protagonist was both responsible and upright. Overall, it was okay. I gave it up.

This book is not the story of how a mage became powerful and became a god, but the story of how a mage saved himself, his relatives and friends. First of all, how to obtain powerful magical power is not the focus of this book, so readers who are interested in reading cultivation articles can stop and think about it. What you can do after you have the strength is the focus of this article. Therefore, the magic system in the book is neither subtle nor complex. Magic can be released by concentrating magic power and chanting incantations. There are no mysterious magic models or profound theoretical formulas. So if you think the protagonist's three-state water magic is child's play and his strength growth is too ideal, you are indeed right, but so what. The important thing is that the protagonist has gained great strength because of this, so good that he can intervene in the conspiracy between the church and various countries. Then, since it has been explained that the core of this book is that the protagonist sets off a wave, resists the church, and regains the soil for the survival of the magic camp. So intrigues and intrigues are naturally the main theme of this book. Therefore, readers who want to see Xiaobai's magic writing can stop and think about it. This is probably one of the very few novels I have read in which the IQs of the supporting characters never fall off the line. One plan after another! Unlike the flimsy conspiracies of other novels, the protagonist can stop the mastermind by breaking a link. In this book, Benjamin uses his wisdom to break one link, and the mastermind behind the scenes will immediately change and start another new link. Reading this book, you seem to be able to see a group of living characters colliding and intertwining before your eyes. The protagonist is not unintelligent and can avoid all kinds of crises through clever maneuvers, but the supporting characters are even smarter. The actions of the protagonist cause the overall situation to spiral out of control, and the supporting character takes advantage of the waves to find new opportunities in the chaotic situation! The more you read this book, the more you may feel aggrieved for the protagonist. Why are these supporting characters always able to discern opportunities, and even come first, turning the protagonist's efforts into another source of motivation? But the protagonist is so stupid that the enemy will always find an opportunity. I really want to say, is the protagonist stupid? No, he's not stupid at all. You must know that the enemy occupies huge intelligence resources. It is very wise for the protagonist to see through the enemy's plan by closely looking for clues. But it is not surprising that the enemy can regain the situation by relying on his own means and resources.

😰 What kind of revolution is just a war between a group of superiors. It has not broken the old world and established a new order. It has hundreds of chapters and is basically nonsense, and it is not interesting. The emotional description is like shit, and the strategy is like a child's play house...

Good guys, a group of talents who say that the back part is wonderful but the front part is a little bit poisonous, the front part is poisoned to death, and there is no desire to be wonderful in the back part. Since you are so good, why do you poison the early part? Even if you are wonderful in the early part, it is better to add more poison in the later part. It is obvious that the author is not good enough. He is looking for the water army to brag about how exciting the back part is, and the front part can be tolerated 😒😒😒

I have finished spreading flowers. I have been reading it for a long time. I feel that many holes have not been filled, but that's it. This book made me excited. The battle between the church and the mages, the truth of history, the changes of the male protagonist, the choice of life and death, the game of IQ, and the improvement of the world view. It is really better than many routine and systematic texts. The author only wrote one book, but his writing skills are except for the shortcoming of being too hasty in the ending. In addition, it actually made it impossible for me to find more shortcomings. The daily teasing with the funny system and the life-and-death struggle with the stubborn church were vividly displayed. It reminded me of The Devil's Law of Dancing. In fact, I read this book at the beginning for no other reason than because I was attracted by the IQ of the supporting characters. In the early stage, the male protagonist was a chess piece commanded by the chess players, and he grew up to be a chess player step by step! I don't have enough writing skills to comment on more things, but I know very well that this is a good novel. The story may not be perfect, but it is not perfect at the same time and shows a trace of truth! Just like what I said at the end, I still feel like something is missing.

It has been 5 years, and I have come back every once in a while to see if there is any news from the author. As a result, I have not received any news, but I have watched the comments in the comment area become more and more chaotic. When I read the book back then, most of it received positive reviews, but now a lot of "book friends xxxxx" just call it rubbish and leave. Real things change and people change. If there are any new readers who want to read this book, please don't pay attention to the comments in the comments, go read it, and read it for yourself. It's best if you like it, but I hope you can be merciful if you don't like it. After all, the author is probably gone.

Many people can't stand the early stage, but I just think that the early stage is the most exciting and unconventional.

To be honest, I can understand some people in the comment area who say things are bad and want to persuade him to quit at the beginning. Some people directly come up to spam him and praise him for his good qualities. Who is the navy? I just don't understand why someone just stepped on a niche article with an unknown author that has been completed for a long time.

It came for revolution, but in the end it didn't feel like revolution. It was just a war between one group of extraordinary beings and another group of extraordinary beings, and the process of a group of carnivores re-dividing their spheres of influence.

The author of this book has strong writing style, very detailed and true descriptions, rigorous logic, online IQ, and good knowledge. However, it became more and more uncomfortable to watch. Most of the characters in the article are engaged in a zero-sum game, which in layman's terms is a one-shot deal. Why do many people dislike Michelle, but many people feel uncomfortable when she is really dead? She must become stronger and seek revenge, and everything she does is a matter of life and death. She and the protagonist are in a zero-sum game, and one of them must die. The author's description is delicate, and many people sympathize with Michelle. The author also pours his emotions into it, and does not want her to die, and it is illogical for her not to die. It is normal for a small number of people to be so psychopathic, and they may have unknown stories. In history, things like the Xuanwu Gate Incident and Jing Ke's assassination of Qin were like this, where the king succeeded and the enemy failed. When all important characters in the book are like this, the social structure will be deformed, and this kind of world cannot exist stably. Everyone is engaged in a zero-sum game, and both parties will lose in the end. The Pope wants to kill all the mages. High-end mages like Granny can assassinate them. Low-end mages may not be able to organize a revolutionary force, but everyone can still kill a few of your villages. Productivity is the basis. There are terrorists all over the world. The Holy Kingdom does not need Granny, and it has been destroyed long ago. The same goes for the queen using drugs to control mages. If a mortal dares to do this, he will either lay two corpses on his body and bleed for five steps, or he will ban the curse and massacre the city, leaving the world in peace. Some of the mid-range villains in the article also do this. It's a fight to the death, which is totally illogical. Peace on the surface, but undercurrents are the mainstream of the game. In this kind of world, the protagonist also logically changes from an ordinary person to a terrorist and a leader. If it were not for cheating to save his life, he would have died a hundred times.

It is recommended not to read the reviews of this book, as it will affect your mood. I don't know if the author recruited someone, or if I am just stupid because of reading a cool article because there are too many people.

I occasionally come here to pay my respects. At that time, I was looking forward to the author's more mature works. As a debut novel, this novel is quite good.

No news from the author for a long time. . .

The author is gone, please show mercy!