
When an Abandoned House Gets a System
当废宅得到系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Sweeping graves or something... Now that the matter is at this point, I can't say anything. It can only be said that from the era of using old mobile phones, this book can be said to have amazed me throughout my teenage years. Now looking at the whole book, I can only say that the arrows of the characters in this book are similar to Magic Cards (I also like the big stew and so on). And there are more or less these settings in anime and comic novels in the early years, so I don't think it's okay (maybe today's children read more monotonically, so they might not be able to stand it when they start reading?) (Is this considered a big data problem? Regarding personalized single push, it is not like the previous diversified era). Also because the settings of the game system are specified at the beginning (for me who have played various games), and because the relationships between various characters such as Seimei and others gradually become clear later on (I won't say much about the plot, everyone who has watched it should know it), I actually accepted it well (maybe too good? Anyway, I like it, the more it gets more exciting later). It's also because the plot in this book sometimes makes my heart suddenly touch, and it's easy to bring me into a third perspective—this may be why I want to continue writing after the book is unsealed. (However, I also know that it has been so long that I have probably forgotten the earlier content. Even if I remember it, I may not be in the same mood as I was at that time, because that's how I am. There is an opening I wrote that I really liked. After losing the data, I still remember the scene, but when I write it again, I no longer have the same feeling and writing style. No matter how I write, it seems wrong.) So this book can be said to be Top.1 In my heart (plus Charlie). The overall picture and world are very well drawn (at least it's not confusing and confusing). In addition, I'm actually a middle-aged person. When I was a child, I often fantasized about exploring the world, saving the world, etc. (No, I suddenly wanted to laugh ( ̄y ̄)) for various reasons. In fact, Dada didn't spend much time describing it. If I had to say it, it would probably be to write pictures that can touch people's hearts with calm and simple writing. (? - Of course, it's been a while since I last read the last chapter, so most of the memories are a bit blurry, so it may not be accurate? But the surprise it brought me will be touched even when I think about it now) I can immediately imagine the picture as if I was there when I saw the text (I'm too old now, Wow ଲଇଉକ...) It brought me a rich and colorful world. (Bringing a wonderful picture to my little world) So I can only say about those grave-sweeping comments, if you really don't want to write or can't write, you can just let it continue like this, just think of it as a regret of youth... After all, if you start writing again, maybe it won't move well or it will be crooked? Of course, this is just my personal opinion. If I continue to write, I will continue to pursue it. Of course, this is the first time I write a long review and it may be the last time (possibly? Maybe I will make some modifications or additions later when I think of it?) (Of course, I always sweep the grave, and I hope the author will see it in the background and don't find me annoying [laughs:-D]) Please forgive me for the poor writing! Finally... I would like to write this long review to commemorate my childhood, which was a happy time with little regret. {"TopicId":"857654359864639488","TopicName":"Transformation flow light novel"}
It looked fine at first, but then suddenly an Onmyoji shikigami or something came up, and then I couldn't watch it anymore.
To be honest, as a two-dimensional novel, it is already very good, but the flaw is that the plot is dragged out. The main plot is pushed so slowly and I have to write other branches. The battle is already in my face, and I have to engage in other miscellaneous things. This affects the perception very much. I don't know if the author can continue writing. Let's take a look.
For Harem Lily The point is that I really only love the male protagonist! If you don't change your mind, don't bother, or don't have the energy to cheat, you won't really cheat! Like Miku, she has a fetish but she really only likes to love the male protagonist Have the same harem conditions as the male protagonist, or meet the physiological needs once for some special reasons Unchanged Not bothered Not energetic Cheating Not really cheating Not being casual in life Not doing it for no special reason I still like to do it with the male lead I still really only like to love the male lead Acceptable Conditions have to be strengthened and modified
Personally, I think the best one written in the second dimension is "My Girlfriend is a Wicked Girl". I have read two novels written by the author Undersea Walker, and I feel that this author is always improving. But what is more disgusting is that there is a character in the book "My Girlfriend is a Wicked Girl" that I cannot accept - Xueli. I think this task is more suitable for being a friend, not a girlfriend.
I found that the only loading game I had played was Sylvie(ー_ー)!!
Actually, I have a rather wild idea.
The spell that makes people become new humans comes from Seiji, or more accurately, from Jingmei. At the same time, the true identity of the time traveler is actually Seiji himself. As the reincarnation of Seimei, Seiji was extremely outstanding in all aspects when he was a child. However, the current "Kirin Girl", his sister was not that dazzling when she was a child. She was a bit inferior to her younger brother. Seiji, who likes his sister, wanted to help his sister, and inadvertently triggered a profound spell from Seimei, which is now called the zero-point method, making Weimu become the first new human being. , But because this spell far surpassed the level of Keiji at the time, it resulted in the splitting of the soul. Half of the soul accidentally crossed the plane and became an earthling. Although Keiji, the reincarnation of Keimei, did not die because of the loss of half of his soul, he was no longer the genius he once was. He slowly degenerated until the half of his soul returned to its original place. Wei Meng has always felt guilty about the incident that turned her brother from a genius to a mortal. She wanted to make up for her brother. While doting on Seiji, she continued to study the zero-point method. She believed that her brother became like this because of this spell. If this spell is used on him again, it should make his brother become as outstanding as before. Even when he was expelled from the family, there was a reason why the spell was about to be completed. After all, not everyone wanted Seiji to become a genius again.
I can finally subscribe. Sorry, I have always watched pirated versions before. Real-name authentication is annoying to me. It is not safe to keep talking without authentication. You cannot subscribe. Come on, author.
How should I put it, reading this novel is a bit like watching a Japanese harem anime. Agree plus one
Choose your favorite heroine, I choose Chiaki Wakaba +1
It took me nine months to update 200 chapters. What a talent. It reminded me of those weekly updates back in the day.
It took me nine months to update 200 chapters. What a talent. It reminds me of those "conscience" authors who updated weekly.
It was one of my favorite books back then. It was blocked for no reason. I was always sad at the time. But even if it is released now, it's a pity that the author doesn't know how to write it. How can the author seamlessly pick it up after such a long time... I really don't understand why a novel with such a positive outlook on life is blocked.
This is a harem novel. Unlike other harem novels, where love is forced, women are vases, like crops on an assembly line. Each one has its own personality, rather than being all the so-called beauty and people piled up with various adjectives. The girls in it are flesh and blood, brave for love, and they are not waiting to be conquered by the male protagonist, but conquering the male protagonist. It would be great if all harem stories were like this, so I wouldn't physically reject them when I see harem stories.
The protagonist is becoming less and less charismatic. The current protagonist is not as attractive as the hard-working fat man in the early days. In the impression, the protagonist seems to have said that he is different from those light novel protagonists, and now he is also a typical Asasi central air-conditioning light novel protagonist template.
Now that it has been released, I hope the author can continue writing, just like the last chapter. Please keep working hard. No matter what the ending is, there will always be readers who like you (although I am the beneficiary of your piracy 😌). Please put a perfect end to your hard work for them.
Suddenly I thought of this book. After looking through the bookshelf for a long time, I finally found it, but it was a pity. I really miss the days when I read more. I haven't read some of the new chapters, so I'll read them from the beginning.
I just want to give the title of the last chapter to the author... It is indeed very unpleasant to have your work hacked for no reason, but since you can still be resurrected, please "please try harder"...
I hope the author can come back and finish it, but the cause is the starting point, so don't blame me
It looks like it won't be renewed. It's a pity that it's such a good book.
Hey, I suddenly came across this book. It has been so long. I wonder how the author is doing with his life now.
Please, let the abandoned house come to life! 🙏
I actually found this book at Qidian. It was a huge favorite back then and one of the most popular light novels.
The final chapter. . . Please try your best, I feel a little sad for no reason
I was released, and it's actually been two years.
This book was originally published 16 years ago. Is it that long? The plot is still fresh in my mind😭😭😭
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The magical book that accompanied me in high school, I feel like it is still a book that I can read even now. I miss it.
To be honest, if this book is made into an anime, it must be a high-quality Chinese comic. What's more, the female protagonist and male protagonist are all original characters. The power system is related to Onmyoji but completely different. There is no copyright issue at all. I really want to watch the anime of this book.
Not to mention other things, after reading a little bit, I said that this novel has a very positive outlook. It does not appear to be overly sympathetic, nor perverted, nor self-centered. It is a breath of fresh air among home-style novels!
Grave Sweeping, my youth, it's a pity that you can't come back. The writing style is very immature, but it perfectly fits my adolescent preferences for Japanese two-dimensional works. It may seem all toxic now, but I don't care. It is my favorite Japanese two-dimensional youth fantasy literature 😭
Seiji's identity is getting more and more interesting. He was excellent as a child, but inexplicably fell completely. After his sister kicked him out of the house, he openly gave him living expenses, but secretly removed him. When he was suspected of awakening, he not only obtained Lin Diandian's memory, but also obtained a system he named himself, and the system also has an almost inexplicable SL function.