One Punch Man - Weekend Sale Supermarket Boss

The author's writing is still very good, but one of the biggest bugs in this book is that the reason for the establishment of the Heroes Association is that Saitama defeated the lobster monster and saved the little kid with a chin like a butt. The kid's father established the Heroes Association, but Saitama did not encounter the lobster monster in the book. Moreover, the setting of One Punch Man is that the Heroes Association was only established three years ago before Saitama met Genos, so the biggest bug in the book is this. I hope the author can revise it and revise the first few chapters to make it perfect. Otherwise, it stands to reason that there cannot be a Heroes Association in the world of the book 😏

After reading half of the chapter, I couldn't accept the author's ignorance and ran away. The reasons are as follows: 1. The protagonist traveled to five years before the beginning of the plot, and the author actually said that there was already a Heroes Association? The Heroes Association was founded three years ago in the plot. Saitama rescued a child with two halves of his chin from a crab monster. The child's father was a wealthy man. In order to thank the unknown hero for saving his son, he invested in the establishment of the Heroes Association. 2. The author said that Saitama knew about the Heroes Association and would report the weird time to the association? In fact, Saitama only learned about the Heroes Association after Genos told Saitama after the original plot began.

Saitama Micho, is it necessary to pamper Saitama all the time? He is your son, even if your son is such a prodigal, he will beat him.

I was poisoned at the beginning. A wolf-level monster only weighs 88kg with one punch? ? ?

First of all, the hero organization was established by Saitama's butt-faced father after he saved a butt-faced child; secondly, Saitama was single until he met his true love apprentice, oh no, he never knew there was a hero organization; finally, after Saitama wanted to become a hero until he became bald, he didn't pay much attention to anything except eating, sleeping, and fighting monsters.

If you really can't stand being poisoned, can't you just fight alone? What a disgusting one, and I can't stand having to hang out with those weak chickens.

Is the author a eunuch? Be careful, I'll send you a blade

Can't you become stronger alone? Do you have to be a shit stirrer? The scumbag protagonist felt sick to his stomach.

What I care more about is that the author made Saitama the protagonist's worm! Is it okay to write it like this just to deliberately build a relationship with the protagonist? And Saitama is just stupid, not stupid! I don't like to owe others either! Even at the beginning, I couldn't find a job and wanted to die! What the hell is this full of foodie attributes! Not even the noodle eating competition! Forgive me! After all, the fire of complaining is already burning brightly

Saitama actually didn't know about the Heroes Association at the beginning, and it was the Heroes Association that was established by Saitama after he saved the rich man's grandson three years ago. I just started reading the second chapter.

I gave up the book. I felt that the author didn't take One Punch seriously at all. What was it about? There were all kinds of flaws and bugs. It was also called a side story of One Punch Man. . .

Gay! At that point. (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) Funny

It's poisonous. What's the point of living without emotions and desires?

What a short and weak author!

I feel so confused when I read this novel. It takes a lot of time to get it right when writing a fanfic. The Heroes Association came into being after Saitama saved a kid with a double chin, and Saitama didn't know about the association's existence until three years later.

Read new books and read old books. To be honest, the new book has a weirdo as the protagonist. I originally thought it was innovative, but in the end I found it was not to my liking. However, I also discovered that the author also had a One Punch fanfic, so I finally came over to take a look. But he was shocked by Saitama's shamelessness here. In the original plot, the real Saitama's apprentice is quite rich, but he never takes advantage of his apprentice and still buys supermarket specials. In this book, Saitama is actually written like this, which is simply unacceptable. It's really eye-opening that Saitama, a hero who doesn't care about rewards and can be called a righteous person, would be written in such a strange way by the author.

This book doesn't respect the original One Punch Man, and the plot is awkward. Well, it all depends on the author's imagination. He doesn't know how to pretend to understand, which makes it even more embarrassing to watch.

Here's another punch, it's so mean, there is a through train on the right.

I laughed so hard when I saw the author's replies one after another. This author is quite interesting 🤫

Except for having too many poisonous points, which resulted in the loss of a large number of readers, everything else was surprisingly good. . It is recommended that the author has a more detailed understanding of some common sense of works and common sense of life. .

Why should Saitama be written like an old man?

When I was reading the first chapter, I discovered that the time travel was five years before the main storyline. There should not have been a Heroes Association at this time. The Heroes Association should have only been established three years before the main storyline.

After reading the comments, I came here, is there a tornado?

It's too novice, and some of the plots are a bit fantasy and cliche. I hope the author can hone it more.

It's too poisonous. The wolf level is too much to fight the tiger level. Does the tiger want to fight the dragon?

It's a very good book. Why did it end so quickly? Is there any follow-up?

Author: Do you know what A-level is? In the original work, a person with a machine gun who shoots casually can reach A level, but you still have C level in more than 100 pictures? It's so fake

Is this book hidden? I've seen the author's stories about weirdos based on interest before, but I can't find them now.

🙄🙄🙄 It's not good, the old trick of pretending to be a slap in the face, kneeling down and licking the original protagonist. Typical pretense and slap in the face😆😆😆 The protagonist looks plain on the surface and pretends to be good at it, which always makes the opponent feel provoked. The opponent was scornful, disdainful and doubtful, and said some doubtful and contemptuous words. The protagonist started to slap him in the face. The opponent: This is impossible. Why? The crowd was shocked. This kid must be stupid. How dare he do this! The teammates also didn't believe in his strength. Run! You can't beat him! It's over! In short, in addition to the protagonist, the supporting characters and passers-by forced all kinds of extra drama, and there were a lot of mental descriptions, and their thinking and logic were very childish. They just doubted the protagonist without thinking. I wonder why people in the One Punch World like to find trouble so much. Is it because the time traveler is rejected by the will of the world and the natives don't like him??? Another thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is why Saitama eats, drinks and lives for free! In name, he is a shopkeeper, but in fact he is a white woman. Which store's clerk can just take whatever he wants from the store? The store suffered a loss, and the boss fought monsters to pay off the debt, and even forced the store to open! vomited!

Chapter 666 of this novel