Dark Zagi Ultraman

I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is so stupid, persisting time and time again for things that are completely impossible. According to your setting, Zabuza wasn't a good person to begin with. And the protagonist is a high school student, right? High school students are in their most passionate and impulsive years, the kind who start fighting at the drop of a hat, completely disregarding the consequences (at least that's how I am). You're making this... Speechless...

The protagonist is too stupid to watch. Even though Dark Ultraman could rule, the universe insists on protecting that lousy Earth. It's written like Giants of Light. A huge thumbs down.

Among Ultraman, Noah is the strongest, followed by Zagi, then King Ultra, Legend, Saga, Zero, Belial, Orb, Ultra Brothers, Mebius, Heisei 4, Jessie, and others.

The character I despise most is undoubtedly Noah's successor. Despite harming the most people and being jealous of the male protagonist, he shamelessly finds excuses to shift the blame onto him, simply because he's the ridiculous heir of light. Especially for his own selfish reasons, driven by jealousy, he betrayed the female protagonist's trust.

Why is your protagonist so obsessed with justice? If he wants to be a warrior of justice, why must he be on Earth? The universe is so vast, why should he care about the pitiful ties between Earth and humanity? Besides, if he wants to rise to power on Earth, he has to follow the path of an overpowered protagonist. Gather monsters and those dark Ultramen into his army, and then your protagonist will rule the Earth. On that day, what will that Xiaoxue be?

You've ruined a perfectly good dark Ultraman story like this. You'd be a pro at writing light stories, so stop writing.

The author states that Faust and Mephistopheles were created by Dark Lucifer, not Zagi.

Yi Chenghui is nothing but a hypocrite. He claims to be righteous simply because he has gained the power of light. It's laughable.

It's pretty good so far. I like the extreme darkness; I personally dislike empty talk. The shift from righteousness to evil is relatable. Who hasn't been a passionate youth at some point? It's just that later, the pursuit of survival and money corrupts our hearts. Overall, the plot is good, and the writing style is fresh.

Don't you guys feel that ever since Ito Teru appeared, it's been the beginning of Touya's bad luck? All the misunderstandings, all the pain, he ultimately had to bear it all alone.