
Naruto: Edge of Tomorrow
火影之明日边缘
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Another guy who acts like he's in heat when meeting a girl
[Comment] Isn't it normal for Akai to ignore most of the illusions when using Eight Door Dunjia? The author actually said it was cheating~
Unlocking a genjutsu means disrupting the flow of one's own chakra, so those who cooperate with tailed beasts like Kirabi basically don't have to worry about genjutsu. Even if he is hit by the genjutsu, the eight tails will help him untie it in an instant~ Akai's Eight Gate Dunjia has a similar effect, and most ninjas can't even see clearly at super high speeds. Of course, the illusion is useless to him~ What's the bug in this~
Let's change this protagonist's name to Our Lady of Uchiha.
After reading more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stand the author's forced wisdom. In more than 100 chapters, there were several situations where the protagonist was destined to die because he was not strong enough, but was solved by the protagonist's method of picking up girls. For example, in the chuunin exam, he relied on Yukito's plea to survive, and his teammates blamed him for surviving by luck. Then he went to find that Feiyuan. The gap between him and Chinatsu was so big that he didn't know how to run. He had been training for so long and couldn't even run away? He also deliberately angered her, and continued to act without strength. In the end, he was defeated by an old woman in her fifties who was from a hostile ninja village. She actually didn't kill him. She really relied on giving the enemy wisdom and giving the protagonist the luck to turn disaster into good luck. It is no different from the popular pornographic novels in the past.
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There are a lot of mistakes in these chapters. Not to mention that in my opinion, resurrecting Madara does more harm than good. The protagonist lost his wits before resurrecting him. What's more, seeing Yu Ban's face of horror when the protagonist seeks enlightenment? How is this possible, refer to the original work, Madara was resurrected, referred to as One-eyed Madara, and he defeated the first and second generations of Hokage three times, five and two times. Those black sticks inserted into the Hokage are obviously the Jade of the Way. Don't deny it. The characteristics of the black rod are exactly the same as the Jade of the Way. Only Sasuke with the Samsara Eye can touch it. What is this Jade if it is not the Way of the Way? It's not Nagato's half-assed black stick at all. In other words, there is no doubt that the Rinnegan Eye Madara is of the Sixth Level. So when I saw Madara's frightened face, I instantly acted and ruined the character. To be honest, if I were the protagonist, I would definitely destroy Madara's Rinnegan Eye. Compared to Kaguya (1) It's not a flaw if you have some combat experience) Madara is the most terrifying. If it weren't for the plot, Madara would be invincible. In my opinion, the protagonist's only advantage is the ability to time. When facing the reincarnation eye, Sasuke will know that it is unreliable. Is the protagonist's current eye the eternity eye? Only in that way can we be considered invincible. Otherwise, no matter how strong the time ability is, it will still be useless.
Author, your timeline is wrong. Itachi had just come of age when the Uchiha clan was exterminated in Konoha 55. The protagonist and Kakashi were 4 years old in Konoha 40, which is the protagonist 19 in Konoha 55. Itachi was only 12 or 13 years old at that time, which was too different. 12/13 Was too young.
The writing is very good, but I always wanted to complain about his age. It was hard to watch.
[Comment]. . . By the way, buddy, since you made up a...
. . . By the way, buddy, since you made up a water and soil escape/How come you can't figure out that Terumi Mei's water and soil escape is a cold-colored corrosive solution; not a flaming red magma sprayzzZ