Plane Cause and Effect System

The author's writing skills are still lacking. One is reflected in the coherence of the sentences when writing, and the other is the lack of control over the overall storyline. As an old bookworm, it is a bit uncomfortable to read. Forget it, I will not read it and leave it to newcomers.

At the beginning, it is said that when the protagonist came to Qin, he practiced kendo for ten years under Guiguzi's training. Guiguzi said that he was a genius in kendo. Then he went out to play in the wild and was frightened by Xuan Hu, who made his feet tremble. He confidently said that he was a modern person after all? ? ? Has the protagonist been raised scientifically by Guiguzi for ten years? As a descendant of Guigu, I won't say anything even if I can't fight and run away. What do you mean by your trembling legs? If Guiguzi knew that the disciple he taught for ten years, whom he called a swordsman genius, had trembling legs after being frightened by Xuanhu, would he hit his head against the wall and die? His head hurt while reading the novel and he said goodbye.

Why do you vomit when you kill someone? Your mental endurance is too poor. You don't even react to such a magical thing as time travel. In modern times, people kill people because they will be caught, so they are afraid. In ancient times, you were afraid of eggs.

It's very well written, but I can't understand it at all.

Do so many people still read such rubbish novels?

You and I have no grievances, so why bother to poison the common people with this question, and why bother to rape my IQ?

I think writing about Qin Shihuang's time travel is much more interesting than the main character

The world of Kuiba has its own unique worldview. It is precisely because of the unique worldview of Kuiba that it attracts many people. As a result, the protagonist went to Kuiba's world to promote his bullshit worldview. It simply tarnished Kuiba and the spirit of Kuiba.

Let me just say this. After reading this novel, I am not afraid of my IQ falling from 100 to 10.

Korea cannot be restored, Qin cannot be rebelled, Qin Shihuang is not easy. There are Huns outside and internal chaos. He built the Great Wall and unified the country. The foundation of the country was destroyed. He was said to be a tyrant for thousands of years after he was destroyed. He was the only emperor who did not kill the heroes. This was the beginning of ruling the country according to law.

Why do you start by comparing yourself to someone with low intelligence? How boring would it be to only learn martial arts without learning strategy? Do you know the name of Guiguzi? You, the ancestor of strategy and a saint, have shown me his lack of foresight. You are very 6. Have you read the book Gui Guzi? It's not perfect but it shows how thoroughly he understands everything. Even if you are not very intelligent, Guiguzi can make you a wise man. Even if you don't want to be a wise man, he can make you become a wise man. Guiguzi's wisdom lies not in what you have now, but in your ability to use what you have now to achieve unprecedented results. What you wrote about Guiguzi makes me feel stupid. I'm wondering how he handed over Su Qing, Zhang Yi and Sun Bin according to your idea. When the three of them joined Guiguzi's disciples, their views on things were not much higher than those of ordinary students. Well! It makes me even want to watch it. It's boring as a swordsman. I only have one idea to give up.

Don't these anime have copyright rights?

Gui Gu only accepted two disciples in his life, and they have not changed for thousands of years. So why should the protagonist make an exception for Gui Gu? Can you still make me, David Zhuang, love you so much?

Come and have a hard time with the brush! 🤝🤭🌹

Come on! I won't watch it without Salamander

🤭🌹🌹 Come on and write!

It's great, support the new book! It must be a big hit!

I really appreciate Da Da's writing style, which is concise yet detailed and domineering (applause)

I just want to know what is going on with the -1 click rate (ಡωಡ) I was attracted by this

This book. . The one who had the most profound impact was the unknown Brother Ma in Tian Xing Jiu Ge. .

What the hell is the introduction? Learn Taoism from Guiguzi? When did Guiguzi become a Taoist? The politicians are almost crying!

How do you want to write? It doesn't make sense, I can't stand it anymore, I deleted it.

At the beginning of the game, Shennong was persuaded to retreat, but Shennong was dead.

"As we all know, tigers can't climb trees." You are writing a stupid book🐔

Sometimes appropriate description of the environment can make the emotions of the characters more abundant, so this aspect has been greatly enhanced.

I've finished reading it, no, I can't stand it after reading 20 chapters. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! !

How to say it? It's not my cup of tea. I read ten chapters and couldn't stand it anymore.

I can still watch the front, but I really can't stand the back Whether it's fighting or emotional lines Xuanyuan Sword can compete with Pangu Ax. . . . . .

Should I say it or not, the author really wanted to write it well, but he made several major mistakes in the novel. (The protagonist's Madonna plus IQ fluctuates up and down.) Care leads to chaos. Since it is a survival system, it is the normal protagonist's job to reasonably plan the causal value. However, the author writes that the hard-earned points are wasted by his nominal girlfriend, just like the husband goes out to work, and the wife uses the life-saving money to buy bags (although A bit extreme, but almost the same). The heroine is like a vase throughout the whole process. She is afraid of getting hurt even if she is being touched. She is not allowed to touch anything. To be honest, she is far from Shi Lan in Qin Ming. She is purely a love-minded, and her cultivation depends entirely on the protagonist. The two worlds do not have much effect. It feels like she is just writing for the sake of writing. I feel confused when writing bad people in the second world of plot characters. What is the system diagram? Since it is a causal value, why is a world that was absorbed thousands of years ago still going on, with the shadow of the Apocalypse Paradise next door? Okay, in general, the author's writing is immature, and the fighting is better than that of the fan author of Samsara Paradise with vests everywhere. Choose, you should choose something that is finished or almost finished. A lot of the content is too different from the original work, which completely affects the interest of subsequent readers. No wonder other people scolded me. I actually planned to read the fox demon fanfic at the beginning. At that time, I saw that the author actually wrote a bad person fanfic, so I had to take a closer look. In the end, I was silent in chapter 10. Except for the name of the person, everything else I can't tell the difference. The author wants to write a book. In fact, he recommends an original one, borrowing the world view of a fan to write it. This kind of systematic writing is either fun or travels through many worlds, and the world timeline is not long. Why would you write such a long book about the world of Qin and Ming Dynasty? Even if it is long, there is nothing interesting to read. Most of them are similar to the original work. They just make up the word count. The audience has all read it and wrote the same thing. What's interesting? I suggest you watch "From Dragon Clan Across the World". It also takes a long time to write a world. You can watch the strength grow and the fighting is wonderful. The plot and characterization are also good, which makes people interested in following the afternoon. Well, you open your eyes and close your eyes from one world to another, and the characters are just like a piece of wood. The key is to follow the original work. This is a bit. . .

Too little, wait until fattened before slaughtering