Abandoned Girl Cultivating Immortality

Let me complain: First of all, I am a beauty control person. If the heroine is not beautiful, I will abandon the article. The heroine in this article has obviously become beautiful, but she has made herself comely and ordinary, which is annoying! What a shame, even for a cultivator, covering up one's appearance or even making oneself stink is very annoying to me, especially for some inexplicable reasons; What's more, sadistic novels are so popular now. Why, every time they write about the scumbag in his previous life, they always describe him as useless and despicable. Have you considered the feelings of the heroine? How scared the heroine was in her previous life and how thick her eyes were to fall in love with such a scumbag! Can you be more reasonable? There must be some scumbag in a scumbag, but you can't deliberately make a scumbag into a scumbag just to highlight the misery of the heroine. The above complaints are not limited to this article.

This book made me see the White Lotus of the Holy Virgin. From the beginning when two Taoist priests let one go, to sending amulets everywhere in the future, the protagonist is so insecure. If someone infringes on the way to seek death, he will be killed. He always lets go. Also, since the Zhou family is looking for death, and they are secretly invincible, secular people will kill each other if they invade. I think it is not as good as the Hong Kong Police in Return of the Infinite. Although the police made a mess in the back, the Qianzhang in the front is really satisfying.

It feels so outrageous! It's not the path of cultivating immortality at all, it's just a story about the heroine's revenge under the guise of cultivating immortality. There have been so many bad guys, both male and female, in the article since the beginning. It seems like there are no positive people. Even if he did, he would become the heroine's fangirl and fangirl, and it's not good to be too irritable. Although it is said that there is revenge, there is grudge, there is grudge, and if you want to be happy with your grudges, it is very uncomfortable to have too much negative energy. Just my little thoughts, please don't comment!

I read the book review and it scared me away.

The heroine is a cultivator of immortality. She is always obsessed with whether her past love and hatred were too different. If she doesn't like it, she can just destroy it. Does she need to be so nagging?

There is a lot of verbose nonsense here, but I was a Mahayana person in my previous life and yet I was still such a holy mother.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the protagonist is no good. As an old monster in the world of immortality, the author has no decisive practical actions except for blowing his momentum.

These two chapters are too much nonsense! Repeatedly~ But simply put, let the two families investigate.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 14. I really can't stand it. The heroine is a holy bitch. She is very enthusiastic about saving people who have nothing to do with her. However, her mother and her friends are bullied. She is there as a backdrop, saying nothing and not letting out a fart. The inner drama is quite good. I thought for a while that if I fix this or that in the future, the result may be just It's just a yy thing. She is not as good as her friend to her mother. Please don't force the author to write a domineering heroine if you don't know how to write it. Return to the Immortal Lord. The result is a yy girl whose imagination goes to outer space. She has successfully refreshed my record. This is the first book that I couldn't put down after reading more than ten chapters 👍👍👍

It's okay, just a bit verbose. When I was betting on stones, I kept saying "One sword will make you poor, and one sword will make you rich". I kept saying it...

Please ask for the number of chapters in which Sun Yiting appears She and I have the same name and I want to see her What if I might be in the book [No]

I've read a lot of novels of this type, and the ideas are pretty good. When it comes to literary accomplishment, I can only hehe. Could it be that the cultural connotation of most young people nowadays is just like this? How sad!

I really can't help it. This book is really not good to read. I especially don't like the heroine's character.

I just finished reading the second chapter, and I feel like the hostess has a problem , after reading the comments, I gave up.

Why does the author divide one sentence into paragraphs... What about the coherence of such a divided article... It made me feel so tired after reading it, I gave up and said goodbye

I didn't dig it carefully, but I thought it looked pretty good. There were too many people recommending the book in the comment section.

I don't know what it means, I don't know what the author wrote, a reborn immortal, instead of busy practicing, he went to tangle with his classmates who have nothing to do with him?

After reading more than 100 chapters, I didn't even start talking about cultivating immortals. I thought I was reading a modern novel.

I don't know the so-called writing. I don't know what the main idea is, what to express?

This article is incomprehensible. At first I thought it was about cultivating immortality in modern times, but it turned out that it was not the case. Then I thought it was about cultivating immortality in the last days, but it didn't seem to be the case either 🤫

... The ending suddenly happened halfway through 😒

To be fair, this article was well written, but the ending was too disappointing.

Thank you guys for trying the poison! ! !

After looking at it, there are still chapters missing, I can't connect the upper and lower parts, and the ideas are quite messy, so I gave up.

Good people don't get good results, and scumbags all take in their younger brothers. I don't know what the hell it is. It's a waste of time.

The writing is so messy, what is the author's idea?

Ah,,, is it almost over? I also look forward to them going to the world of cultivation,,, but the writing is really great, I recommend it, recommend it ❤️

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

I have been reading articles for many years, and I have always liked female videos about cultivation and upgrading. The story line of this article is very good, but the writing makes me scratch my head after reading it. I hope the author can work hard! Come on!

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