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What kind of rubbish is this? There is a cheating device but it is so much worse than others. The protagonist is a waste.

Things that threatened the lives of his parents occurred several times at the Donghai Base. The protagonist never wanted to leave☞Hehehe

After reading more than twenty chapters, I found that all the red envelopes grabbed by the pig's feet were for mortals. Are these gods so poor? Why not add a mall to the entire recycling system? If the protagonist grabs unused items, he can recycle them in exchange for points to go to the mall to buy what he needs. Wouldn't it be more reasonable?

The sword is slender, less than three feet wide! This is not a sword, this is a door panel! ~The content of the story is good, but the writing style is really embarrassing, a bit like student writing! [Fn=5_6]

The elixir is so worthless that even mortals can't practice it to use it.

The author comes out, I want to ask you how many days it takes for ordinary people to reach level 6. Are the protagonists pigs? Upgrading is so slow☞Please explain

After reading Chapter 51, I want to ask the author, are you sure the protagonist's brain is okay? Let's not talk about being distracted when your life is in danger. If you have an immortal weapon, you can't kill the enemy first and then escape easily. First, let's untie your brain and write this plot.

The grumbling male protagonist started to lose his temper after being beaten by his relatives. I knew the bad guy was still talking for a long time.

Why do I feel that the protagonist has intellectual problems? He is not good at all. He is not nervous to make decisions when faced with great dangers and talks nonsense. Are you a strong person and have not adapted to your position? Or the author did not set the character with a strong heart. Can you learn from Jin Yong's example and think about each character yourself before writing them? The author himself reflects on what changes and performance you will have if you are so strong.

Shennong was poisoned to death. This book is a mess. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore.

After reading Chapter 15, I want to say, why is China in a state of moral mourning now? People who should be called uncles and aunts are not called brothers and sisters, but they are also euphemistically called "equality". This is the sinking of filial piety and the crime of public figures who do not know how to write books and videos.

I was so embarrassed that I got cancer. Is the protagonist 2b?

The protagonist's sister, a 3-year-old, writes like she is 10 years old or older, speechless.

Why are all the women saved? Do they want a harem?

The poison has been tested and it is very poisonous, very poisonous. I've been poisoned???????

Reading reviews to find books is really tiring. There is no review of a book without trolls. I couldn't decide which book to read all afternoon. Every review is toxic.

A good author should write slowly and rigorously, which is the most important thing. The protagonist should give a clear purpose for what he does. For example, the protagonist in the apocalypse can only kill zombies because he is hungry, and save a beauty because he looks beautiful. Find a bed warmer. Don't imitate the plot of a bloody TV series. I have read too many novels. Watching current TV series gives me a childish feeling. Korean dramas are better, especially domestic dramas, which really give me goosebumps.