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The protagonist of this book's combat power is obviously broken by the time he reaches the Rurouni Kenshin chapter. According to the protagonist's strength, it is no problem to go sideways in this world view. The strongest Hikodou Fuji is only at the Ogiro level. The protagonist defeated the Sloth Archbishop in re0, and the Lazy Archbishop is obviously stronger than the character of Rurouni Kenshin. What's more, when entering this world, it was said at the beginning that the strength of Rurouni Kenshin is at the human level, not to mention that the protagonist is still in the movie version, and the strength of the movie is very different from the original work.

How can I put it this way? To judge objectively, the beginning of this book is pretty good. The protagonist's IQ is very high, but the various strategies are well-founded and not too abrupt. As a result, the first world felt a bit like a novice novel. When I first entered the world, I thought the author's writing style was pretty good. Later, I found that the author's writing style really needed to be improved. I always felt that I didn't understand this world clearly, so I just skipped it. So the author actually wants to write about each plane and the main world. Now that I've seen the Kung Fu part, I don't see what the author's emphasis is. Moreover, I haven't seen many of the worlds you wrote about, so I just passed by without any explanation. A world passed with just a few strokes, and the main world passed with just a few paragraphs. At the very least, you have to give our readers a focus, such as writing about the main world or writing about each plane. You can't just write about both sides and get over it. If you don't have a writing style that can take care of both sides, you can focus on writing one. The prerequisite for writing two lines at the same time is that you have the control over the text and a clear enough main line that allows readers to understand what you are talking about at a glance. The fighting scenes are indeed a bit immature, but not bad. You can practice describing this aspect and form your own style of describing fighting.