My Book Girl from Another Dimension

Selling books right from the start, I'm speechless, short-sighted, and extremely toxic.

It's a bit poisonous. It doesn't matter if other forces can't locate the protagonist through communication, but the country can't either? ? The protagonist also bought so many things

After reading the first few pictures, since there is an official one, why does it feel like the protagonist is in a war-torn area without a unified government? Otherwise, there wouldn't be such unofficial people killing people on the streets? Blockade areas? Are government troops not a deterrent enough? Since it is written about how powerful the predecessors, parents and grandfather are, then the opponents are even more powerful. You have seen ordinary civilians in war-torn areas with a little protection when the government does not act. Can't the national level catch him? Still using the old network? You can watch it without thinking. Look at the spirit strength and so on. In the early stage, a 40 one can't beat a 20 one because of the protagonist's control? The combat power is not balanced. Where do you write what comes to mind?

The beginning of bitterness and hatred is no longer popular. Even if you write about a parent who died of illness very early, it would be better than the current one. I don't understand why current authors like this kind of beginning of bitterness and hatred. It seems that if you don't write it like this, there will be no reason to develop the plot.

Gee, the stitching of this book is interesting. It starts out as a weird espionage story, with the national organization having certain control. After a few chapters, it becomes a cyberpunk story where a gangster can cover the sky with one hand. This book has a Schrödinger background setting.

Super poisonous. What a pity for such a good idea.

The "Phantom Book of Revelation" to the Kingdom of Heaven🐶

What an old-fashioned routine, and the power is also the template of the previous Heisehuishu. Although the settings are good, these can poison most people away.

I don't think the author doesn't know about the poisonous point of death at the beginning. This is a highly toxic thing.

Why do I have a feeling of deja vu? Oh, the teacher's wife was also you in the previous book. Come on, author, stop being a eunuch. (Why can't his sister protect him? Is there too much fighting?) I will scan the article for you with 200,000 words. It is recommended in Shuhuang.

Summary of poisonous points: Hide under the bed without being discovered by 1 wave of people, Hide in the basement without being discovered by 20 waves of people, Can't be found even by others with dogs? I didn't dare to go out, but where did the fried dough sticks and steamed buns come from? And how did I bring it in after I bought a bed? Not afraid of exposure? Use your own information to work and receive express delivery? The master and his parents are missing, and the strength of his parents is unknown. The master is one of the three most powerful people in the country. Then the master went directly to his parents and left the child alone at home. Knowing that his parents were missing because of the Black Soul Stone, he left the child alone at home to wait for death. As one of the three powerful men, he had no connections and no resources to provide for the child. My sister is from the army, but the army can only save my sister. My sister is protected by the academy because of her talent. A good-for-nothing son was abandoned on purpose? In summary: The parents embezzled the treasure and hid it. The master found out and went to get a share of the pie, so that his useless son could attract attention in public. Outsiders realized something was wrong a year later. The son had no one to help him because of his parents, and his sister and sister's faction looked on with cold eyes. In the end, the original owner died. The protagonist traveled through time and space with a golden finger and destroyed the world line. The IQ of all mankind dropped. The protagonist's journey officially begins. I feel after reading a few pictures. The author has written 1,000,000 words and is still at this level. It seems he really has no talent.

I can't appreciate this book The self-sexual plot is too heavy,

Did you mean what you wrote? With such an awesome background and no money or power, you might as well start in an orphanage with a civilian background.

How about a professional book on nuclear fusion and hand-made nuclear bombs? Battleship?

The first few books were good, but can the protagonist in this one become a girl?

The author has been reading for so long and you haven't explained it clearly, so what exactly are soul fragments and book spirit pages? You haven't even explained how these things came out.

The subject matter is really good, but the author's routine is really bad. I haven't written this kind of routine for several years. I can't write an invincible flow, a cool writing flow, anything else is good, but I insist on writing this kind of writing.

Protagonist

I can conclude that this book will not exceed a million words. The author wrote it completely randomly, all the same old routines from ten years ago

Hiding under the bed, no one noticed after 20 or so visitors? ? ?

When writing a book in the future, it is best for the author to clearly explain the background of the story in the first three chapters, otherwise it will always be a mess, unless you are a big boss.

The author of the mysterious revival of the novel about ghosts and Buddhas sending flowers can be transformed into a girl

Can the book spirit who swallows the stars cultivate to become a true god? ?

The subject matter may be just that the routine is too old

In the entire StarCraft book, the peasants of the three tribes were recruited and they became invincible.

He nnd, with a shake of his hand, he settled on twenty chapters, but he still can't cancel it.

Unfortunately, only the military can check the traces of the protagonist's life to determine whether the protagonist is alive. No force in the twenty waves has this qualification. The platform, express delivery, food and drink, all do not reveal any personal information.

The "Doomsday Super Game System" written by the author is not in the starting point. Why can't I find it? I still want to read it again.