The Phoenix Lord

After reading the review, I decided to order it. I like strong women.

I just want to complain. The article must be good, there is no doubt about it, but the character of the heroine is really too cowardly and soft-hearted. If she didn't have the aura of the protagonist, she wouldn't be able to achieve great things! Does Gongsun Qian feel guilty because she was raped? What about the seven-year-old child and so many lives that died in her hands? If you ask me, she should die ten or eight times. Oh my god, shouldn't the heroine of a strong female novel be more domineering? After coming here for so many years and being a hostage for three years, you are still so useless. Is it all due to good luck?

I look forward to the content becoming more and more exciting. There are not enough updates every day!

The further we look back, the heroine's character is actually not domineering enough. She is forward-thinking and a bit of a womanizer. She is not a character who wants to dominate the world. If she didn't have the aura of the protagonist, she wouldn't have succeeded at all.

The previous chapters are all good, and it's the style of a strong female character that I like. When Osmanthus dies, the heroine returns to her country. Not only does she not think about Osmanthus and her brother who died for no apparent reason, or making the country strong, but she escapes reality and runs away from home. I really can't understand it, in her position. Even if she doesn't do anything and doesn't fight for anything, she won't be able to live peacefully. I thought she had understood this truth a long time ago, but she didn't expect that she is still so childish in her thirties. Either you die or I live in troubled times. The heroine's character is still not domineering enough and too cowardly.

After reading the current chapter, the author's writing style and the plot of the story are worthy of recognition, they are very good. Come on more~

Come on together! Thank you, Lao Luo!

Give the author a crazy call. Just right for the palate. Very nice.

When I read Chapter 32, I have a small suggestion. It's the place where the heroine explains the pinyin. I think it's a bit... Uh... In fact, there is no need to explain, and the matter can be expressed directly from the perspective of the four secret guards - I think it will be more natural to write the letter this way. Personal opinion, for reference only.

Author, please look over: The memory chapter may influence new readers to continue reading. (When I read this paragraph, I felt it was a little inconsistent with the content and style of the previous article, but it was okay, so I continued reading) If a new reader feels uncomfortable reading this memory chapter, he may give up and continue reading. Therefore, if possible, you can go back and revise it, and then put these memories into the extra chapter. I know that this is also a very huge project, which is time-consuming and labor-intensive. Whether to adjust it or not depends on the situation!