Lian Ming

🌹 I have been a reader of online novels for at least eight years. I read at least three to five books every year in my spare time. I always read the books carefully, even if they are online novels, I still read them very carefully. I have read a lot of novels by great masters, as well as some weird novels. To be fair, the writing style of Sip Drink is extremely clear, and the taste is full of the charm of Dream of Red Mansions. In the first few chapters, the plot does not drag on, the prologue builds up the contradictions, and the first three chapters lay out the layout, which is neat and neat without lacking the "odd" word in the novel. If the subsequent stories are still of this level, the work will definitely be a masterpiece. Although the book is not fat yet, I have already saved it and will read it later. I don't dare to comment on the shortcomings of Xiaojiu's works, because compared with the dozens of large and small works that I have read, they are absolutely superior. Therefore, I neither have a reference standard to say what is wrong with you, nor can I use personal preferences to magnify or distort the facts. My job is product operation. Please don't be offended if I give some "packaging" suggestions for the book. The creation of online novels is mainly for commercial purposes, so please forgive some of my rhetoric. First of all, because Xiaozui is a newcomer, he is inherently not popular and lacks recognition. This is the most important thing! If you have a good recommendation position, you will definitely be able to retain most of your readers. Secondly, the title and cover of the book, from a personal perspective, the title is very charming and covers what the protagonist wants to do to the Ming Dynasty. It is just one word, 'refining'! Readers who have not read the content may think it is a cultivation novel, but after reading the content, they will feel that the title of the book is wonderful and wonderful. Therefore, in terms of initial promotion level, it is very contradictory. Secondly, the cover feels a bit like "Purple Sun". People who appreciate it will definitely think it is good, but people who don't appreciate it may be a little bit repelled. So I recommend changing the cover to a more popular one, which can leave a deeper first impression on more ordinary people. Bad article, Miss Puff was afraid to leave a comment.

I think some places should be written simply and not be too complicated, otherwise some readers will give up the book because they cannot understand it. An author must consider the readers. After all, an author must have readers. Many times your paragraphs are a bit long. I suggest you shorten some paragraphs! There is also a lack of plot. For example, you can add some fighting plots and some plots of loyal ministers being killed. When writing historical novels, you must write about some of the political aspects of the society and the world situation at that time! My proposal is complete, thank you!

Badouwen service, I think your novel is a bit like when I was just writing a novel. The fields are very dense, which will make many readers unable to understand what you are talking about. Some readers will even stop reading your novel in anger. You have to change this habit. Don't be too dense when drafting, try to be sparse, but not too sparse. You can also read the novels of well-known novelists. They are divided into paragraphs very well. You must pay attention to your question! Also, the content of your story seems a little unclear. Sometimes your content is a bit complicated and difficult to understand, but it is still good. If you are a novice, it is still good, but, hell, if you have written it for more than a year, then you have to change it! My summary is complete!