Metamagic Architect

I can see the feeling of martial arts

First-class creativity, third-rate script

I am a newbie and have read a lot of books, so I only express my personal opinions here. The reason why I read this book in the first place was because I was attracted by its introduction. But after taking a closer look, I found that the content was completely different from what I thought. This book is actually a mindless fantasy novel with a specific world setting. It has nothing to do with the introduction or world setting.

The intention is good, but it's a bit unmanageable. The background of the novel is very broad, but the writing is too perfunctory.

The comments are full of comments😂😂 The reason why I like to read this author is that the title and other things are so realistic.

Dayu was before Laozi and Confucius. . . .

It's a good subject matter, but it's too toxic.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing it. If I encounter any problem: Come on, let me be an armed person. It's too fake. Others are racking their brains to make weapons, but the protagonist is just like shit. He has something to do, and he also makes weapons when he has nothing to do.

It seems that I read a little bit before, but I haven't finished reading it. The world view is very good, very creative, and the magic blood in it is also quite good. However, in a large college, there is not a single person who knows what it has been passed down for many years. Many of the students are jealous maniacs one by one, and there are some professors and so on. The other professors are all fools. Okay, maybe the author's writing skills are not enough, but the creativity is really good, keep up the good work

This is a satirical and slap-in-the-face work. Generally speaking, the ideas are novel but the story is a little thin. It is limited to the story of the protagonist without taking into account the changes in the environment. The ending is not rich enough, but the writing is solid and the story is full of expression and fascinating. It is a good book that can make people want to stop during the book shortage.

I felt really aggrieved when I read it. It was a pleasure to write something "self-righteous". Someone slapped the protagonist on the left cheek, and then the protagonist stretched out the right cheek. The so-called counterattack afterward was neither salty nor bland. The plot was scummy, the character description was scumbag, and first-class creativity and setting were combined with such scumbag content. I felt really uncomfortable watching it! There is also the Mecha Customization Master that the author is currently writing. I seem to have some impressions, but it's not that good either. It's not as good as this one!

The beginning is good, but after a few chapters it becomes all routine and forced to create conflicts. In such a big school, almost everyone can step on it. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel really bad.

The creativity and imagination are both excellent. Unfortunately, the writing is poor and the plot is full of poisonous points. The opening plot is confusing and the characters are extremely distorted. It can only be said that it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. The idea is good, but the character's IQ is worrying, and the author's writing is poor...

Does the old eunuch still have a finished book? Oh, before entering the palace

The idea is good, but the plot and writing are poor

"The Fate of Immortals" is a passionate article, you might as well take a look, please recommend and collect it

It's okay to be new and different, but when you see the introduction, you know it's just a bunch of random changes.

Why not? Thunder Dharma King Yang Yongxin

There is too little intermediate process. The author ignored a lot of things.

What kind of magic can a good immortal do?

It was written in 2016. Nowadays, it is more toxic. In the past, it was the same routine. Most of the beauties were tsundere, cold, little fairies, and even the pet beasts were female. Every villain is jealous and hates looking for trouble with the protagonist. The protagonist smiles and lightly fights back and lets it go. In this book, as long as a woman meets the protagonist, she will immediately fall in love with the protagonist, and the figure of the protagonist will immediately be in her mind, and then even the humans and beasts will be the protagonist's people 😥😥 The female's special self-suggestion strategy 😥😥 As long as the protagonist takes a look

Look down on Han Feizi? Just Han Fei? Zi is a symbol of respect and status

Reading the poisonous words step by step, they keep talking about how strong Da Gan is, and then the whole Da Gan is disordered, irregular, and full of legendary equipment (a second-rate Xue family, how can the second-rate characters in it be legendary?) Can hostile countries act unscrupulously in the country of Da Gan?

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it at all.

The introduction is very interesting.

Absolutely, so the teacher was forgotten in the end👀

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