Paradise Falls

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What is certain is that this book is a very traditional Western fantasy, which can be seen from the story structure of its scenes and the design of the tasks. The advantages of this book are very obvious. Orthodox Western fantasy always has very detailed descriptions and control of the scenes. This book does it all. The delicate description of sitting is reflected in the characters and scenes. Every character has flesh and blood. Even a guard, the author is trying his best to portray it well. Lauren, who appears first, and Captain Garn, who comes after him, are very well described in their actions and psychology. They need to be carefully considered to have such good control. From the description of Black Crow Town and Black Crow Mountain, it can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping the scene and setting up the world. Just look at the first three chapters to see the author's ambition. I can already vaguely see the outline of this world. The Seven Martial Gods and Blasphemers who appeared one after another finally made the world clear and slowly entered the theme. It was these that attracted me to continue watching. Finally, a reminder, the pace of this book is very slow, so slow that I don't even know why Qidian signed this book. Everyone knows the three golden chapters, which can be said to be the perfect three bronze chapters. I have never seen a book that enters the theme so slowly and the protagonist emerges so slowly. Another point is that it is too delicate, which is not in line with the reading habits of Internet readers, and makes people feel a bit boring and stiff. As mentioned above, the characterization is excellent, but this also brings out a big shortcoming. There are too many characters appearing at the beginning, and the relationship between the characters requires a lot of thinking to sort out, and it is easy to confuse the characters, so that the reader keeps figuring out the relationship between the characters without knowing what the plot is. The author needs to find a balance between plot and characterization. After all, online articles mainly rely on storylines. Don't neglect the basics. Characterization can be the icing on the cake. The premise is that you have to have this "combination" before he can add icing on the cake. Come on, author, don't say anything else, just finish the book~🌹