Protagonist Playground

When a newcomer writes a book, he will definitely not take into account many issues! 😭 Especially in terms of plot, although the author himself has experience in writing books, controlling the plot is still a big problem, and sometimes you feel like you have no clue when reading it! 🤤 Of course I also hope that this is just an illusion, but I am not that confident because I know my shortcomings, and it is difficult for me to make up for these shortcomings alone 😭 So, here, I would like to solicit your opinions! It doesn't matter whether the words are unpleasant or not, as long as they are useful, I will be satisfied! By the way, if you have any questions about writing, character creation, or logical loopholes, you can raise them! Well, actually what I want to say is that I have problems in all of these areas! 😓