Primitive People Were Shocked

The original article on construction is not to my liking, but I still like adventure-based articles.

I finished reading it in three days, mainly because the pace of the second part was too fast and the writing was not detailed enough. If it continued to the later part, there would be at least a few million words. The world outside the wilderness was not written. Author, you ended like this, I curse you. . . . .

Why do I always come across novels whose setting I like very much, but whose writing is so bad that I can't read it? Uncomfortable

After reading it, the overall story is very attractive, but the ending is slightly undetailed. Where did the protagonist go in the end? ! The perfect world environment in this book is described in a separate chapter when there is no ending. The rest is good! It can be said to be a good book! ! Support! The main character is really well drawn and doesn't show any weak behavior. Just the thoughts and struggles of ordinary people, perfect

The author can't even tell the difference between potatoes and sweet potatoes. There is no distinction between grains. Let me give you some popular science. Potatoes are potatoes, sweet potatoes are sweet potatoes and sweet potatoes. Okay?

I really like this genre, but the main character's IQ is so low that it makes my head numb. I really can't stand it anymore.

I found that the author left a loophole for me. I finished the book just by looking at the table of contents and knew everything about it. As a result, I was not very interested in the content. Of course, the premise was that I had to read enough text by myself first🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Chapter 28: Poisonous, primitive society weapon. Do you want a sword?

Who said there is no Datong society in reality? Ants and bees are all Datong society. Every insect has its job. Then the problem arises. Repeating the current job day after day. If humans didn't have a competitive spirit. I believe he didn't even go to an ant. Isn't it that human science and technology is developing at a rapid pace in order not to be inferior to other countries? Technology has developed faster in the past two hundred years than in the last five thousand years. In the final analysis, is this not a competitive spirit? How can we grow without refreshing our worldview?

You can't watch this with your brains, you have to be able to endure the embarrassment of late-stage cancer, 🤫 Those who can endure it to the point of paying are all great people

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that the system is actually the original one that has been improved with modern civilization to make it look better. The addition of the golden finger system can only be said to be useless and nondescript. It's a pity.

Throwing clods of soil can be thrown farther than shooting arrows, and the clods can still be scattered in the air. In the end, the monkey kings are all sharpshooters. The scale is almost equivalent to a human throwing a rabbit that is moving at high speed more than 10 meters away. One hit is accurate. I really can't accept this 3 consecutive poisons. This is not something that can be explained by a sentence from another world, so I can only give up. By the way, I would like to advise those who have just read it, just read chapter 500, and really don't read anymore.

The whole book is poisonous. Level 2 and 3 monsters can hit rocks and everything with ease. But when they encounter concrete, they crawl like shrimps. And the power of Gatling is not as powerful as a rocket made of inferior gunpowder? ? ? Are you kidding me? A group of primitive people can fly an airplane and perform evasive maneuvers in just a few months. Learning to drive is not easy. The weirdest thing is that they use radar to capture dragons. The protagonist presses the driving school and the military academy to the ground and rubs them. It takes that long to meet students from key universities. The protagonist teaches primitive people who can't recognize as many primitive characters as elementary school students. There are so many loopholes that are scary.

The first chapter of this book got me hooked. Primordial style should not be written about systems. I suggest you read Primordial Man, which is amazing to me. I only learned about this book from reading friends there.

A group of people who can't count a hundred, but know a thousand 😂

The more you go to the back, the more it becomes watery. A lot of nonsense in one place. Everything else is brushed aside. All my heart is devoted to nonsense. Being able to pay to read it is now the limit of my tolerance.

There are very few novels that I have read and I personally like them.

The early stage is good, but what about the middle and late stages? Developing at a snail's pace, the protagonist Bai time travels through time and gets pigs on his head.

Indulging Wang Hu is not conducive to leading the tribe, so this book was written by the author without logic.

Change the sword to another weapon and I will order them all＠(￣-￣)＠

Publish your own book to develop farming literature "The Primitive Era of the Valley of Spirits"

The subject matter was okay in the early stage, but what happened in the middle and later stages? If you don't use your brain when reading this book, you can see what kind of benevolence, justice, etiquette, wisdom and trust are used when the jungle is the strongest. Isn't this a brain disease?

Is there a female protagonist? 🙂

Isn't this fan fiction? The label I also made is fictional history

I was writing about desert island survival, and now I am writing about leading primitive people to farm. I wonder if reading this book will be helpful?