Hauler Between Two Worlds

It's such a shame about this subject matter. . He actually wrote about funny pig's feet...

Chapter 823: The protagonist's mother is dead The protagonist's mother was stabbed to death by a branch? ? ? The mother of Shinto Lord was stabbed to death by a tree branch? ? ? ? There are a lot of self-defense treasures from the women around the protagonist. His parents have eaten a few fruits and drank 2 sips of wine from the beginning to now. Knowing that so many people may target him and his family, they have become true kings and have no self-defense at all. The main character of the co-author just looks like a wolf? ? You might as well be Orphan Gambit, it makes me sick!

Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it Personally, I feel that it is useless except for the creativity and line writing sequence, and it is a standard white text. The following points I think are the biggest poisonous points. 1- Based on real world price standards, the price of 1 million per milliliter for the lowest-end wine definitely shows the shallowness of the author's experience. The cooperative company with Song Daodao occupies 99 shares. This is the equity distribution that only SB can have. First of all, the price of this kind of thing will not be low. Ordinary people cannot afford it. People with a little money will not buy it often. Only the real rich will buy it for a long time. Even if you sell a bottle of 100,000, Songdao will get 1,000 bottles. After all the taxes and costs, Songdao will never make more than 300 profits. This is the poisonous point. 2-The character structure is too naive, the supporting characters have no IQ at all, and the dialogue is rough. The author positioned the protagonist as a wise man in a different world, but he turned out to be a retarded person, especially the reactions of Niu, Lan, and the two families after they destroyed the Che family. This is something that can only be written with such poor social experience. 3-The components of the cultivation system. As a pure cultivation civilization, it is inferior to a technological civilization in terms of cultivation theory and direction. The protagonist turns out to be a cultivation teacher with just two words. It is scary to think about it. 4-The protagonist's behavior is simply a retard among retards. Even a primary school student knows what politeness, dialogue, etiquette, and money concepts are. It is simply impossible to look straight at him. Although it is said that online novels do not need strict theme lines, they don't have to be so sloppy!

I've read a lot of novels about traveling through various planes, and I discarded many of them right away, but I actually read this one in one go. The first is the way to get rid of alien goods. The author arranged it very cleverly, through parents! Who else in this world treats you better than your parents? Secondly, there is the detail of language. Oh my god, so many time-travel novels are self-taught in the languages ​​of other worlds. Some authors have some brains to make a universal translator or use magic means to read the language center. It is really rare for someone to learn to speak in this book. All in all, this book is bound to be a hit.

What can I say about this book? The subject matter is very good, but the author always tries to persuade you to read it. Sister Hua was taken as a hostage, and the male protagonist just killed me and I couldn't bear it. Su Xishui interacted with the male protagonist in so many chapters in the early stage, but in the end, her parents directly appointed Wang Qingyu, who had no foreshadowing in the early stage, to get married, and also used various moral coercion to force the marriage. The male protagonist actually tolerated it after meeting him, and finally arranged a kidnapping incident and their relationship warmed up. There is also an important supporting role, Shan Qiulin, who obeyed the male protagonist's advice just because of a poem. After he deceived the senior brother and broke his arm, he became infamous for killing his fellow disciples. In front of the male protagonist, he still said that I didn't follow your plan completely. After that, he followed the male protagonist wholeheartedly. The eldest brother and his junior sister were captured by the Blood Lotus Cult. After the eldest brother fell in love with each other, the male protagonist and his junior sister made a big fuss at the wedding. He knew that the junior sister would be killed by the people around him if he wasn't careful, but he didn't even give him the slightest telekinesis protection, so he was tricked and tricked into death by the bride. Okay, I can bear it. But when it came to the part where the male protagonist's mother died, it was outrageous. A storm was coming, but he actually insisted on risking his life and took his men out to inspect various dangers. After arriving at the beach hotel, knowing that a big wave might pass and no one would be there, he insisted on staying there. Originally, according to the setting at this time, you would have risked your life to go out for inspection halfway, so continue to inspect. No, the male protagonist's mother is like this The time comes when I can't go out and cause trouble, and then I am killed by a falling branch. At this time, the poison is really unbearable. If you go against the routine, just go against the routine. I can bear it even if I am drowned by a tsunami, but the male protagonist is really a gentleman. He has a bunch of useless low-level protective items in his hands. He is generous to his subordinates in the other world. When it comes to his closest relatives, Mao doesn't give any or arrange for protection. I really want to persuade you to give up. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye. This book has a lot of fun and counter-plots. Although it is poisonous in the early stage, I can still read it. In the middle and late stages, all kinds of serious poisons come. It is really unbearable. Finally, don't look at the various women in the book who fell in love with the male protagonist at first sight, and the male protagonist spanked and teased him in various ways. But except for Mao Mao and Wang Qingyu, the male protagonist didn't confiscate any of them. If you want to read a fun and refreshing article, you can read it casually before chapter 700. I really don't recommend reading it after that. It will make you die.

I've given you four monthly passes, so I'll give you the last one too.

The writing is completely broken. The author dug a hole and buried himself. The author has always emphasized the importance of merit and its incomparable power in the book. But what happened? The protagonist just saved the world, and the protagonist's mother ended her life in a very fucking way - being stabbed to death by a tree branch. After this incident, a scene of a filial son rescuing his mother and confessing his heart was very touching in the eyes of the author, and then the protagonist's failure to save his mother led to a drastic change in the character of the protagonist - it can be called a schizophrenia. (I don't know how many people abandoned the book because of this poisonous point) After indifferently ignoring the will of all humans and even all living things on earth, it forcibly changes the fate of all life - completely regardless of whether you are willing or not, and thinks that you are a holy mother, and finds a reason for yourself to comfort yourself "for the good of all living things on earth." This kind of demon hidden under the image of the Virgin is simply chilling. Alas, give it up, give it up.

I can't stand it anymore. China has no favor. Now it's back to the world of favor. You're so big-hearted. Your mother has written you off. You haven't taken good care of the people around you. You still have a shitty dojo. The development of things has no idea at all. It's so bullshit.

Everything about this book is good, but the protagonist is too dissuasive. Why do so many books like to create such funny protagonists? Call it funny, I feel like a monkey jumping up and down, like a retard, talking like a tongue-tied woman, talking like a second-rate gangster on the street, it's so disgusting

The chapter "First Meeting Song Yiyi" should have dissuaded many people, but I didn't quit; "Relaxing with Lan Xin" was outrageous, but I didn't quit either; There are some shortcomings, big and small, that I won't talk about, you can ignore them But! Damn it, you gave Bai Yang's mother a sacrifice, I didn't expect it! Li Ke's mother opens the door for Li Ke - Wei Wu is home! I thought it was just a cutscene and could be saved in the end, but in the end he just sacrificed himself to the sky! The kind of death! Don't even let me save you! Bai Yang is the true king of Shinto. Maoer has a jade talisman to protect his life. Even the tomb robber An Jiu was given a jade talisman by Bai Yang to protect his life, but his mother did not! In the tragic case of Mouton Jiangshan, was he the only one who only thought about protecting Maoer? Where are your parents? Where is Zhang Qingyu? Is the protagonist Bai Yang an orphan? Do you only have one relative, Cat? I don't understand that the protagonist is so capable, but he doesn't give the people closest to him any pills to increase their strength and increase their lifespan, nor does he give them life-saving props! I don't understand, even if you can't increase your strength, why not get a few deadpools to increase your strength and protect your loved ones personally? Cat is by my side, and in the end, there are only three fiancées, father, mother, and fiancée! Will one person die if he is protected by a high-strength master? Do you think that no one on earth is a threat, so you didn't expect that an accident would happen? The previous article also said that the merit of poplar trees is 100,000 meters thick! The previous article also said that Bai Yang possesses the imperial dragon energy! The previous article also said that people around Bai Yang Fuze will have all kinds of good luck! With so much plot laid out, author, how did you directly sacrifice the protagonist's mother to heaven? ! I'm really crazy! ! Most readers will have a sense of immersion when reading a book. Your writing like this will directly dissuade a lot of readers. I am really convinced! Author, you know you will be scolded by a lot of people for writing like this, but you still write it! What is your state of mind, author? ! You really do! I'm convinced, I'm really convinced! How many people were immediately persuaded to leave on the spot, which makes me so uncomfortable!