The Story of Cultivation by the Captain Touching the Gold

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Bounty book review The first three chapters are really amazing and very engaging. But the following chapters either fall into clichés or have flaws in the plot arrangement! Below I simply found a few questions: 1. I would like to ask an adult, should he consider issues thoughtfully and in detail? 2. How practical is the so-called parent who has only one month of emotional contact? It seems like the protagonist's parents or higher-ups? What is a high-level person? Foundation building, golden elixir? The protagonist thinks that there is an enemy spy in the door, but what else is he thinking about to make a big splash? Does the protagonist think he doesn't have enough enemies, or is he afraid that he won't die quickly enough? 3. In an intra-sect competition, the protagonist thinks that he takes it very seriously, but he almost fails to compete on stage? Is this called attention? Because you are late to collect opponent information? This is called attention! ? Personally, I think this is very unreasonable. 4. The protagonist wants revenge! ! ! His parents (as a high-ranking person) were both assassinated and killed by the enemy. As a little person on the eighth floor, didn't the enemy kill him with just one finger? Or did Su Liujiu think that the enemy was actually influenced by the protagonist, so it would allow him to grow up smoothly? At this time, you should be low-key and low-key. Only by letting the enemy ignore you can you really give the protagonist room to grow, instead of deliberately creating some plot conflicts to allow the protagonist to grow. This is very inconsistent with the general storyline arrangement. 5. From time to time in the book, Su Dada will mention the personality of the past protagonists. It feels quite contradictory to the plot of this book and makes me uncomfortable to read. The above is a book review, a review, or an opinion on this book! I wonder if I can get a reward for criticizing a book so well? Already collected, thank you