Book of Eternal Life

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There is actually a ten thousand year demon. I really want to ask the author how he came up with such a complicated story. It is really creative!

I have long seen that Su Zixuan is not a good girl, and Wei Yanger is the heroine, right?

Su Zixuan is a descendant of Su Daji, so he couldn't have been tricked by a pig into ecstasy or something like that! Or she was born with the power of charm. Yuelao Mountain, Red Rope Valley, Chunqiu Cave, and Floating Ghost Abyss. Two of these places should have a great relationship with cause and effect and marriage! I don't know how you would write about these places! It should be very interesting, and it should look much better than pretending! After all, with that kind of article, you can basically guess what the next chapter will be like!

I read the entire article in one go, and I have a few personal opinions that I won't regret. First of all, the author basically introduces the background in the opening chapter, which is obviously the writing method of a great author, and it is also obvious that he wants to create a long masterpiece. In addition, DaDa has deep writing skills, familiarity with the fantasy background, and grand layout. It can make people see the excellence of this book. However, at the same time, a weak reminder: Although it is good to spend nearly a chapter to introduce the background, does it make the plot progress too slowly? Why not put it in the work-related field at that time? Readers like us who use mobile phones to read books are used to reading the plot quickly. As a result, we waited for a whole day to see the plot. It really made me feel anxious and helpless. If it weren't for the author's writing style, I almost wanted to abandon the article! In the second chapter, Chang Gongyang came on stage, and I was really into the drama. I like the character Chang Gongyang very much, but he has an unreliable adoptive father. From the moment Changgong Wuji came on the scene, I could tell something was wrong. He didn't teach Changgongyang how to practice his mind or anything. It was obvious that he was guarding against something or fearing something. It is estimated that if Chang Gongyang had not nearly died in the Su family, Chang Gong Wuji would not have planned to let Zhang Gongyang become famous. Thinking about it this way, it is understandable that the Su family is ruthless and Su Zixuan is selfish. As for the male protagonist, how can he shine without being polished? I'm more optimistic about Weiyang'er. Xiao Nizi was snatched by Zhang Gongyang. It's no accident. The author has deep meaning in writing books, haha. Now it's time to see how quickly Chang Gongyang grows up. Come on, boy, I'm optimistic about you, and I want to win over Wei Yang'er as my wife. As for Su Zixuan, just let her stay where she is.

The plot is interlocking and the characters are well described.

The plot is compact, the advancement is powerful, not procrastinating and confusing, and there is no nonsense. It is well received.

Here you go, keep writing, click push, and comment by the way: The writing is good, only 2,000 words per day, the number of updates is too small, and it is not enough!

There's something wrong with the author's backend. Can't update at the moment, sorry! Will add it when it returns to normal!

The book is good, please write slowly. I don't care if a book is updated quickly or slowly. I only care whether the book is worth reading.

Writing this kind of book requires a lot of background. Good book, good book! Very beak-headed.

It would be good if there was no heroine in the setting. The story of the hero and his gay friend would also be good, hahahaha

Damn it, I finished it all in one go. I'm really upset that I haven't fully enjoyed it yet.

It means that I can never read other books except this one... Just like the plate of egg fried rice in God of Cookery, author, why!

With a junior high school education level and a lack of vocabulary, there will definitely be typos and other errors. If any readers see it, please point it out, follow the example and correct it immediately!

Although Tian Qing's writing is bad, sometimes details are just a matter of one sentence, and one sentence is sometimes a pitfall, an emotional line or a pitfall for foreshadowing. I dare to say without shame that it is definitely better than the master's routine writing! Welcome to discuss the plot!