Supreme Red Envelope

The author made many mistakes. The biggest mistake lies in the positioning of the work and the author. The author said in his acceptance speech: Readers' rewards determine how far this book will go. This is a positioning error. It is not the reader who determines how far the work goes, but the author himself. If the author makes the work excellent enough, readers will naturally appreciate it. On the contrary, readers come to see the story, not to do charity. If your creation is not good enough, how can you expect readers to work hard to reward it! The rest are problems in the work itself. First of all, the work lacks a complete program. The whole content seems to be patchwork and messy, and the protagonist seems to be wandering around with nothing to do. Secondly, there are big problems with the author's logic. As a mortal, the protagonist worries all day about the invasion of the underworld and the return of heaven. The unfounded worries are inexplicable. Not to mention whether it can be done, even if it is done, how can it be determined that the underworld and heaven are doing evil? The protagonist can be said to have made a decision to fight against heaven and hell without any basis. What's more serious is that the main plot of this book, the God of Heaven, is based on the chat group of the Three Realms, and the protagonist is directly on the opposite side of two of them. This plot is contradictory. How else to unfold the story? Third, too many parts of Journey to the West are involved. Journey to the West itself is a novel, not a formal religious theory. Of course, it is not impossible to include Journey to the West, but it is not good if it is messy and unclear. And some of the descriptions of the government are too flattering and disgusting.

Most of them are talking to themselves, with a little procrastination. The author's writing skills need to be improved.

The IQ of the supporting characters is online, and the protagonist is invincible and not dazzling. There is only one female protagonist, and the male protagonist is no longer in turn. The era of peace is less dirty. Where is the peace in the book? It's all in "The Stealing System in Dragon Ball". This book. The woman looked and shook her hands and feet. A man never gets tired after watching it. The little one didn't cry or make trouble after watching it. The old man felt happy when he saw it. Oh yeah!

The protagonist is still a mortal, and he worries all day long that heaven will come and the underworld will invade. I'm really convinced. It's too early and illogical for you to worry so unfoundedly, isn't it? Even if you are worried and obstructed in every possible way, it is of no use?

[Fn=2_2] Come on! ! ! Nice! ! ! The setting is very reasonable, and the writing is superb. The book by an experienced author is so good-looking that it never fails!

So short. . . . . . . . . . .

The protagonist is not the Three Heroes of Plants! ! Good review! !

The author's sister is so beautiful

I feel like I've collapsed a long time ago and it's already in chaos

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