American Heroes

I've read eight chapters, but I haven't written it clearly or revealed the setting yet. Compared with the current straight-to-the-point writing method, this kind of writing method is confusing, pretending to be confused, and relying on guessing. I'm really tired and can't read.

I would like to ask why I obviously inherited the power of the Barefoot Immortal and used fortune-telling to find the Three-Eyed Clan, but why I didn't go looking for the Clown? I knew he was very dangerous and a hidden danger! Also, Xiao Ba, as a super artificial intelligence, has super strong thinking logic. Wouldn't he be able to adapt to the clown's random tactics? Wouldn't he find the clown's past based on Xiao Qi's description and simulate the clown's psychology to find him? What about criminal psychology? In addition, current mobile phone software basically has microphone permissions by default. In other words, as long as there is an electronic device such as a mobile phone, you can hack into the phone to turn on the camera or microphone to track the clown's traces in the hotel, and then use powerful computing power to eliminate and find him. You don't know how to do such basic operations, yet you still claim to be a network emperor? ? It's really uncomfortable to watch, Xiaoba's existence has completely turned into a personal servant. Also, even if God is not omniscient and omnipotent, can't he still tell whether an ordinary human being is lying? The soul is so powerful, why can't it capture brain waves and thoughts? Certainly

Let me make a small suggestion Author, your ability to come up with book titles... I was put off by this title several times. I always felt that it meant being a hero for Americans, you know, so I didn't read it. . The name is very important, author. I just read five or six chapters. It is really good. I was attracted by it from the beginning. Keep watching, keep watching But the title of the book is really, really important. You must pay attention to it when naming it in the future.

The subject matter is great, and it can be written on a grand scale. But the writing is not good, no, no, important things must be said three times. The protagonist behaves like a fool, the supporting characters are also very wise, and overall it seems quite childish, just like watching a third-rate domestic cartoon. Originally, not to mention becoming a god, the book was at least first-class, but now it is only third-rate. Even if the writing skills improve in the later period, it will be second-rate at most. What a shame for such a great subject. It also has a lot to do with the novels I have been reading for 6 years. The taste is getting more and more boring, and the writing style is even a little bit difficult to read. It is not recommended for old bookworms, but newcomers can take a look and skip around to pass the time. I give 2 stars.

🤭 My eyes light up, come on, the author is very optimistic about you

Writing about China is easy to be harmonious and supported

The first two chapters of persuading you to quit are not down to earth. To put it bluntly, I just can't believe what you are telling me. It doesn't feel real.

The protagonist is suppressed by his IQ! Aggrieved

The introduction and title of the book persuade me to quit, it's not beautiful!

I was very tired from watching the movie from the moment I ran away from the Earth Base. Red Lotus hatched and Red Boy explained a bunch of hard knowledge about the physical space and latitude of the universe. It felt like I was reading a physics textbook. I really skipped all these contents. I don't know how many people read it word by word and understood it clearly.