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I won't go into the rest of it, and I'll go straight to what I want to complain about. The two senior brothers of the male protagonist, I still stopped at the place where they appeared for the second time, so I can still point out that they are called Chi Jianfeng and Tuoba Yu. Those are two characters that make me uncomfortable. Insidious, villainous, manipulative, incompetent, jealous, and unreflective. They are boring, stereotyped, and have no potential. They can hardly keep up with the male protagonist after appearing for thirty chapters. Maybe there is still a chance to cause a crisis for the male protagonist before the male protagonist completely gets rid of them, but this crisis will eventually become an opportunity for the male protagonist to grow up or show off. To be honest, this kind of character design... Is too labor-saving, right? Maybe it's because I'm reading a book written by a certain great god recently - in it, except for many female protagonists, all the male protagonists meet are people like this... All I can say about this is that I will complain to you after my boredom subsides, young man, keep going and keep going.

The insights of many readers are very unique. But the process of this book is not necessarily what you imagine. This article has a lot of foreshadowing and will lead to a lot of plots. At the same time, everyone is welcome to complain and let Xiaolan discover the shortcomings. I will make improvements based on readers' suggestions, and I will continue to work hard to let readers see a better finished product. The author of this article is not an old-fashioned person. Sometimes I will write it and save it for several chapters. Because of a slight mistake, I will make major changes or even delete it and rewrite it. This is all because of the keen attention of readers. The author is still lacking in strength and needs your support! Thank you for leading the way.

I'm a new author, and I really don't understand anything. Throughout this article, there are always several problems. It may be that the meaning is vague and misleading. It may be that it was handled improperly and made people uncomfortable. Everyone is welcome to complain, I am not a master, they can already portray the characters profoundly and with great writing skills. And I can only improve a little bit. I am a writer who is willing to revise the previous article because I am still a novice. 233