If the Game Becomes Another World

Back then, the author said there would be a finale, but I wasn't able to watch it, and the author didn't write it, alas...

Why did the "The Overbearing Queen's Attendant" that I saved now become this novel? . .

The male protagonist doesn't start with beauty like in other novels! Strong praise!

The idea is quite good, I hope the author will stop being a eunuch. But the heroine's release was a bit slow, probably because there are too few chapters! Come on, author

There should be more interactive plots with female characters

It's hard to be a professional writer😰

It took me more than ten chapters to realize that I have traveled through time. . .

To be honest, the character of the heroine is really well portrayed. From the first chapter, the heroine's character has shown many things. For example, it is not the first time that the male protagonist meets the female protagonist. When they meet again, the female protagonist is still there and persistently wants to get the box. This shows the persistence and stubbornness of the female protagonist's character. When the heroine kills monsters later, she also thinks carefully, so she pokes the monster's eyes, which shows the cautious side of the heroine's character. Although she didn't succeed in killing the monster by poking its eyes, and almost had her hair cut off, she was very aware of current affairs, and with the help of the male protagonist, she followed what was good and did not act arrogantly and refused to let others help her, nor did she insist on her own opinions. This shows the heroine's ability to bend and stretch. Later, when the heroine was injured and smelled of blood, she immediately realized what to do next. She quickly took advantage of being a woman and used her beauty trap on the hero. With just a smile, she immobilized the hero, ran away quickly, and deceived the hero. The heroine's cunning and sinister nature, flexibility, quick reactions, and high IQ are all vividly displayed in this short chapter of a few thousand words. I cannot but praise the author's extremely high writing skills and the sincerity of this work. There are also a lot of foreshadowings laid in this chapter. First, it is the box left behind by the heroine in a hurry. Second, the male protagonist was cheated. His impression and anger of the heroine will guide the subsequent development. Third, what is the abnormality that the male protagonist mentioned before? It is a complete connection between the previous chapter and the next, which makes people continue to read. As you continue to watch, the abnormality of the male protagonist and the reunion of the male and female protagonists are well explained and well plotted.

First of all, it's hard to say the title of the book. It depends on everyone's preferences. The introduction is not particularly outstanding. The first sentence is actually a bit awkward, and there are also some minor punctuation problems, which makes it a bit difficult to pronounce. [Three good men who are a good househusband at home, a good thug outside, and a good person outside—Xia Di accidentally got involved in an accident while fighting the final BOSS in an online game.] This sentence sounds a bit awkward to read. You can change it to "Three good men who are a good househusband at home, a good thug outside, and a good citizen inside—Xia Di accidentally got involved in an accident while fighting the final BOSS in an online game. However, the plot of the work is well designed. The first three chapters have already buried all the foreshadowing, suspense, and conflicts. There is no delay in not letting the male and female protagonists appear, which is already good. Look at the plot again, go directly to the plot, and use the box as a point to spread out. The events that the male protagonist experienced later promoted the plot and made the male and female protagonists meet again. Although the two people still don't have a good impression of each other, the interaction between the two is quite exciting. The characters of the male and female protagonists are reflected in the descriptions. The characters of the male and female protagonists have not been directly stated, but the psychological and dialogue aspects have been vividly expressed, making them more convincing and vivid than speaking directly. Therefore, the author uses the main story line as the basis and uses the stories in it to enrich the image of the male and female protagonists, which greatly enhances the interest of the entire storyline and gives readers a good sense of involvement. Let's talk about the writing style. Let's not talk about the plot, but let's talk about the author's description of the environment and the description of the fighting scenes. It is no longer that of a novice, but has a sense of familiarity with the skillful writing power of an experienced author. Let's talk about the fighting scenes. Let's not talk about the fighting. Let's talk about the description of the injured places and clothes of the male protagonist during the fight, which gives people an immersive feeling. This alone is enough to show that the author's writing skills are good. Let's talk about characterization. The heroine's stubbornness, agility, and awareness of current affairs are demonstrated in every plot, even more fully. And in the face of danger, he is not arrogant or impatient, but cautious and cunning. Looking at the whole story, the heroine gives the impression that she is a strong yet somewhat cute character, full of fun. As for the male protagonist, he has his own bottom line, will not shrink back when encountering difficulties, is responsible, and of course is smart and wise. He and the heroine complement each other very well, and every time the two of them face off, it makes people laugh. Other characters, such as Irene, are also a female supporting character with an above-average IQ. To be honest, the conflicts between the male and female protagonists sometimes have to be thanked to her. Let's talk about the author's layout. First of all, let's talk about paragraph division. The author has obviously studied this. Therefore, whether you read it on a computer or a mobile phone, you will not feel tired or even skip reading. Another advantage of this kind of paragraph division is that it allows readers to understand at a glance what the author wants to write and what he wants to show everyone. Therefore, the author's hard work on this work is reflected between the lines. All in all, this author's work is very good. Whether it is the plot, writing style, characterization, or story rhythm, they are all well controlled. It's worth watching, and I highly recommend this work to everyone!