Cultivation in Progress

This book is very well written, and I really can't read the reviews. You have to read it yourself to know whether it's good or bad! Except for the fact that the author likes to leave things unfinished and often interrupts with narration, there is nothing wrong with this book! Very exciting! It's a genre I've never seen before. There are so few fairy worlds that I couldn't bear to watch after I saw it! It's a pity that the rating is low. There are too many people who like fast pace, so they are not generalizing. The comment area is a mixed bag. The female lead is indeed a bit slow in training, but the plot is more exciting! Although I didn't finish reading it at the starting point, I still want to praise the author! 🌹🌹🌹

The plot is okay, but the author's old spoilers are a bit annoying

Super interesting and beautiful story. I originally saw this story while doing a mission elsewhere. The more I read it, the more I fell in love with it and found out it was from Qidian. Com.

If there is no male protagonist, I will feel bored and easily give up on the novel. I still like the fairy tales where men and women interact, not the boring kind, but have their own paths and support each other. Looking at many popular film and television fairy tales, fairy tales, even if they are for men, they all have CP. Those who can integrate love into the story without affecting the quality of the whole article, or even add icing on the cake, are great. If in order to cater to the public taste, in order to emphasize that cultivating immortals, one should cut off love and have no distractions, it would be too boring to eliminate all love factors. Cultivation and love are not cakewalks. I still hope to have a male protagonist. Personally, I don't like the character design of Mary Sue all the way. I enjoy the stars and the moon. After that, I still say that my heart is on the road and I don't want to fall in love. If there was no protagonist like that, it would be called White Lotus.

After reading more than 600 chapters, I really wanted to review it. The novel is very good, but I can't stand the character of the heroine. She doesn't do things straightforwardly, is sloppy, and repeats it over and over again, which is annoying to watch. You have to think about the opportunity for a long time. Besides, you can have partners on the road to immortality. If you can't be a peacock demon lover, you can be friends. Now that you have a contract, you have to break it off. It's hypocritical. Isn't it tiring to be so indecisive in cultivating immortality?

Forgive me, I really cannot accept the handling of Su Wuyi's emotional line. What everyone wants to see is that the heroine is awake throughout the whole process and does not develop too many emotional lines with others, instead of like you who clearly developed the emotional line and then destroyed it This book's treatment of Su Wuyi's emotional line is a sticky one The confusion tortures the readers, just like the bloody idol dramas at 8 o'clock ten years ago. Either don't develop too many plots with Su, but the author has written to that extent, but you force yourself not to form a Taoist couple because the heroine openly and secretly refuses to face her own heart. It is completely overcorrected. Where is the Taoist heart? In the end, the heroine finally figured it out and went to find Su Wuyi, and then she gave up when she saw Su Wuyi staying with other women . . . . . Author, you are good at torturing people back and forth.

Although the author said there is no male protagonist, the female protagonist has been entangled with her male counterpart Feng Wuyi for a long time, which takes up about half of the novel.

In this book, cultivating immortality is about avenging one's mother, but the protagonist's character is inconsistent and not decisive. Various male cultivators kill people because of their appearance. Later, the swan-faced man wants to kill him, and the protagonist plans to kill him, but in the end he is reluctant to kill him. In fact, it is still based on his appearance. The Ming Leopard episode is full of sweet and heart-warming plots, just like the CP immortal novels. The man has a super high level of cultivation and good looks, and he saves the heroine in every possible way. There is also a random murder plot later on. Killing a maid, and other maids did not hinder the protagonist. It turns out that the owner of the maid has sworn to protect the maid. I originally wanted to see the protagonist avenge his mother, but I really don't like this kind of protagonist. He doesn't do what he should do, is sanctimonious, and kills people indiscriminately (even though it was just once, but I just don't like to violate the principles of normal people and kill innocent people).

It's a disgusting book. There are male supporting characters everywhere, and the vicious ones are all female. The inexplicable emotional scenes make the female protagonist look like a bitch.

I don't quite understand. If there is no cp, shouldn't there be no emotional line? Why does the heroine still have an emotional line? She is hesitant to do things on the emotional line. If this article is placed in a fast-travel novel, the heroine will definitely be a self-righteous and hypocritical person.

Opportunities keep coming, but if you don't improve your cultivation level, you will go to the secret realm at the second level of Qi training. . . .

After seeing the heroine's behavior towards Su Wuyi in Chapter 750, I went straight to the ending and found that she was just playing with Su Wuyi. I felt disgusted with the heroine and abandoned the story. The first three emotions were written in a way that made people feel uncomfortable, and the characters collapsed. By Su Wuyi, the heroine was already annoying. The emotional lines were forcibly written and then cut off. From Xiao Yao, Chu Qingwu, Qian Feng, and Su Wuyi, they were all forced to create copies for the heroine. The writing was so poor. Xiao Yao: A young man's relationship, devoted to the heroine wholeheartedly, and left the scene in despair. Qianfeng: The inexplicable emotional line, forced. Chu Qingwu: What a good character design at the beginning, but the emotional drama of the heroine was added later, which ruined the character design. The most innocent one is Su Wuyi. The heroine took the initiative, fell in love with someone, got involved with him, and formed a bond of mutual agreement between two people who liked each other at the same time. Then she turned around and said that she had no intention of becoming a Taoist couple with him, and only wanted to become an immortal. She broke off the relationship with people, ditched them, and continued to practice as an immortal😊. She was a scumbag who played with body and emotions. Su Wuyi was a big enemy. He was disturbed by the heroine's advances until he vomited blood, and then he was poisoned by the heroine. After he fell in love with the heroine and gave her his life feathers to form a mutual agreement, he was slaughtered by his subordinates, was knifed and used as a thug for the heroine, and then was dumped. [Eating Melon] was the worst.

What I hate the most is this kind of so-called heroine who travels through time and is not used to killing people, and the character is actually a former police officer, and she is a woman. In which era can there be less intrigues between women? I should have known things before time travel, but I didn't expect that I would still be so ignorant after time travel.

I feel that the protagonist's friends in this book are of no use. They have always been a drag, have average character and average talent. They also waste the opportunities given to them by the protagonist. They often commit suicide and wait for the protagonist to save them. They can't see any bright spots and they can't play a big role. If the protagonist is an ordinary person and has no chance, they will basically die together.

There are more than 1,100 chapters in the book, and I have read more than 300 chapters. The heroine is still on the seventh level of Qi training. The enemies are all above the foundation level. Problems encountered are ultimately solved by outsiders (outsiders). This arrangement is very confusing. I jumped to read it just to see the heroine become stronger. The article is very disappointed with the lack of regard for one's own cultivation, no matter how many specious reasons he finds!

More than three hundred chapters are still at the eighth level of Qi training. There are a thousand chapters in total. Practicing Qi will lead to enlightenment. What kind of state of mind is considered? How bad is the original state of mind? Moreover, during the Qi training period, you can go on sect missions and pick up various treasures. It is already foreseeable that you will end your cultivation in a few chapters after reaching a high level. Can't you write more about high levels? What's there to write about about practicing Qi? Enlightenment? Does she know what it is? If you don't write about the upper realm, you won't even become an immortal. I don't expect it!

The plot is so addictive that I really can't stand it.

Is the heroine mentally ill? ?

After reading Chapter 30, I really can't stand it anymore. The supporting female characters were all forcibly subdued, and the heroine was accepted as a disciple by his master. Then the supporting heroine felt that the heroine had ulterior motives for his master, and then wanted to kill the heroine. I was speechless. She has become an immortal, and she has such a bad character. How did she not become possessed?

I just feel like the female protagonist is so good, but after one or two hundred chapters, she's only at a few levels of Qi Refining. She's so rubbish.

After reading more than ten chapters, if I didn't talk about cultivating immortals, it would almost become a house fight.

The writing, plot and logic of this book are very good, and the writing is not novice. It can be regarded as a hidden gem in the qd orthodox fairy tales But the handling of the emotional line... Emmm... Is a bit unpleasant to both sides (with cp and without cp) ) Under the banner of no cp, the love line is indeed set up (it is not long but has a strong sense of presence), and the love line is set up without letting people be together: obviously the love line of the male partner is very mature, in fact, it stands to reason that it can be developed into a situation where the male protagonist and the female protagonist can work together and everyone will be happy. I'm happy, but it's turned into a regret that can't be expressed in words, which makes people feel very, very sorry😭 Although there is nothing wrong with the heroine being dedicated to the truth, she is also quite scumbag to a certain extent😅... The author is so great, why can't they just be together! 😣

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can confirm that the author is a nymphomaniac.

It took more than a thousand chapters in total... More than seven hundred chapters to get to Nascent Soul. I don't think having CP doesn't mean that you can't fall in love... That Peacock obviously likes the heroine too, but finds various reasons to refuse... There are a lot of love scenes between men and women, and there are still cool stories with cheats, and the upgrade is too slow.

I heard the author say that there was no male protagonist so I continued reading. Our Chinese culture says that you can't have your cake and eat it too, and Western culture also has a saying that when God opens a window for you, he will inevitably close a door. As a monk, I want to have strength and longevity beyond mortals, but also want to have the love and obsession of mortals. Is it too greedy?

I really don't know what to say about the heroine's emotional line. How about you write it without cp? It's really baffling. Adding such a scene has no effect, and the heroine actually feels that if Qian Feng hadn't been cold-faced from time to time, she might still have feelings for a man and a woman towards Qian Feng. Wow, I don't even know where the heroine came from. The opportunity made her feel that her friendship with Qian Feng would turn into love. If I felt baffled when I saw the part about Su Wuyi, then when I saw the heroine's emotion towards Qian Feng, it was called bursting, and it made my head buzz.

This author likes to be mysterious in his writing, but his skills are not enough, which makes the plot very fragmented and uncomfortable to watch. He deliberately does not finish one plot and jumps directly to other plots, once or twice. It is really like this from beginning to end.

I'm leaving it here to write an explanatory text, but there are always a lot of forced explanations.

After reading the comments, how do you feel that you and I are not reading the same book 🙂 Can we not comment if we haven't finished it? After reading chapter 30, I will summarize a high start and a low end. After reading 60 chapters, I feel that the protagonist's cultivation is not invincible and it is boring... You might as well read Long Aotian in Hedong in the Thirty Years... Book friends who have not read it take my advice and grit your teeth and persevere. You will definitely not regret it later.

Tail feathers? Is Su Wuyi in heat...