The Biggest Playboy in the Martial World

The author really needs to hone his writing, which seems a bit nerve-wracking to me... I always feel that I can express one thing more simply, but the author insists on writing it so that I have to use my brain to think about the meaning of this sentence... I also feel that the protagonist does not need to leave the Sky Sword Sect for the time being. As a time traveler, if you can accumulate a lot of experience, you should not take risks. (I have only read Chapter 23 so far.)

In particular, Wanyan Honglie was the culprit who ruined the Guo and Yang families. It would be okay if the protagonist said this. What's more, it's really strange that Wang Chuyi doesn't go to help Yang Tiexin. Finally, looking at the original text of The Condor, Yang Kang had never seen Wang Chuyi before, and neither did Wanyan Honglie. Why did Wang Chuyi recognize them all at once. Overall, the novel is quite innovative, so good luck to the author.

How can a background cow be able to live without leaving home for the rest of his life? How can a bodyguard cow be able to eat, have sex, and be with you in the bridal chamber? People who have traveled from modern times don't understand this. If you don't like practicing martial arts, that's normal. Most people don't like it, especially since you can't live forever while practicing martial arts, and your strength is scummy. To put it simply, it's a high level of hard work and a low return rate. However, when practicing martial arts can lead to immortality, infinite strength, covering the moon with the wave of a hand, etc., I think no one can resist it. The pursuit of strength and life should be engraved on the genetic level. If you say you don't like it, then you don't have the conditions. The protagonist has this condition but doesn't know how to cherish it. This is because he converted his IQ into luck during the time travel. Is practicing martial arts just for ambition? Can't it be pursuit? I'm just talking nonsense, it's just because I'm bored at work, the author is wrong, I don't mean anything else.

It was Lin Fei and Shen Fei again, I almost got confused.

But there are still places that are not good enough. It feels like something is not in place and cannot meet the standards of a classic book.

Why does it say in Chapter 26 that she is the queen mother? Wanyan Honglie is the prince.

The sentences in your writing are not very smooth. You should work hard to correct this. Otherwise, it will look a bit strange.

Updates are too slow. . . . Fattening

For old authors, you can still read it with confidence (but it's a trap), 11 votes are given.

I saw Heiwu back then, so I'll keep it in my collection first. To be honest, I'm really not very confident in the author's updates.