Naruto: the Terror

Please stick to the ending and pray for Kurotsuchi and the protagonist's wedding 😁

If not, why would you write a fanfic? Can you surpass the original work?

If the protagonist is quite lacking in physical skills, can he try to get the water-transformation secret technique of the Ghost Light clan from Suigetsu, and use this secret technique to study the ninjutsu of water escape? ! Also, according to the general idea, Yin Escape can be developed from Water Escape. It seems that the second generation of Water Shadow Ghost Lantern Huayue also has a super strong Yin Escape Illusion Technique. Maybe it was also developed from the Water Transformation Secret Technique!

This book rarely follows the original power system. On the existing basis, why can't a person with strong chakra induction and a smart mind who is willing to work hard be a pig's trotter? Do you have to bring your own plug-ins as soon as they come out? Either it's a power system from another world, or it's the fusion of the innate Sharingan, Rinnegan, and various blood inheritances? Being familiar with history means either following the plot, or breaking it in various ways and then changing it beyond recognition. It's even worse when traveling through original characters. At the same time as Pig's Knuckle, he formed a genin team of 4 people. Usually they are inserted into the seventh class. It was originally a plug-in class, but a plug-in pig's foot was inserted. Then Sasuke or Naruto were either suppressed or crushed by pig's feet.

😁In the world of Naruto, hard work never works, blood is king!

With so many comments, no one should have noticed that I stuttered.

Don't write about Naruto without giving the protagonist a hook. The setting of Naruto is there, and the hook in the early stage and later in the first generation is just a unit of measurement. Relying on ordinary ninjutsu to get through to the later stage, you can only play a supporting role, otherwise why? There is the Shikamaru clan for wisdom, the Eight Gates for martial arts, the second generation of ninjutsu development, and Orochimaru for scientific research. These are the pinnacles of ordinary ninjas. How can a protagonist with a halo make it to the later stage?

..... This is a good book (no, you can't let me read it alone, hehehe)

I don't understand so many good reviews. Although the author deserves praise for not writing cheats, the protagonist's use of a clone technique to deceive Byakugan is really too poisonous.

I really don't understand the trolls in the book review section. If you like it, read it, but if you don't, just leave. Look at me, I don't like it, so I just rolled away~

Do not rely on innate blood. The Thunder Release body training lays the foundation for the eight gates and then activates it with the body. There is no self-injury in the seven gates in the whole process. Occasionally, the eight gates will not die or even be seriously injured. At this time, they are still at the super shadow level. Then go get the Zero Tail, Grayl's Stone, Dragon Vein, and Chattanla. I am now learning the torture secret technique that can see the mind of the dead. The secret technique of grabbing the ghost Yaluo. The attributes are ready. Grab the dust escape. Find the Zhongwu clan. They have Immortal Techniques. They can't absorb Yin and Yang escapes. They have fatal attacks. Kill Toneri and eat him. At this time, there is no need to worry about the natural lifespan.

There is no cheat code, is your hard work useful? If it's useful, then you're not writing about Naruto, you're just making fun of yourself

Danzo is a hawkish politician who engages in conspiracies every day. The protagonist often discovers Danzo's conspiracy after life and death, and the conspiracy is also for the benefit of Konoha. In comparison, in many other works, Danzo wants to control everyone he meets, and kills him if he can't control him. He is like a mad dog, how can he stay in politics for decades? It's really embarrassing.

I was so embarrassed that I was complaining about myself. After finally entering the plot, I was kicked out by the nonsense in parentheses.

A novel that you won't want to read just by looking at the catalog, author 6

Originally, it looked okay at the beginning, and it was very good until the survival drill, and then suddenly it became self-exciting, all kinds of digressions, and the protagonist seemed to be a different person. I was originally listening to the novel, and then suddenly Nimaxia Xiu Zui Dun shocked me. I couldn't afford to offend him, so I withdrew.

So many updates! ! ! ! ! !

The divergence point of parallel worlds is too blunt. Can the life and death of a sidekick deviate that much from the world line? The fourth generation of unsealed Nine Tails in Naruto, people from outside the world, and Nagato being born without reincarnation can all cause the world line to shift. What do you mean by a little bitch? You are so important, will fate let you die?

It's all my fault for my slow reaction. I didn't understand the meaning of the title "Water Escape: Turbulent Waves" until I read Chapter 7. The author's water escape is so terrifying. 🤫

If you don't want to deceive the protagonist, just write that the time traveler doesn't know the plot and feels more immersive than this native.

I don't know what's going on, it's so embarrassing to see. In the second chapter, the character design collapsed and the writing was rubbish.

If it's not time travel, then why haven't we seen the protagonist in the original novel? It means that he is either a sidekick or he will die early.

Why does this protagonist disgust me so much? Maybe he is not a time-traveler, and he does not create a sense of identity, and I also hate the protagonist trying to get those rights. Hey, you might as well make the protagonist a time-traveler who doesn't know the plot. This seems to have more expectations, doesn't it? Just like the protagonist said that he wanted to change the world, but I didn't see what he had changed, and there were no like-minded comrades around him. What kind of successor to the third generation was just as disgusting as the third generation!

The world of Naruto either relies on blood or system, you tell me to work hard

How could Naruto reach the top without Otsutsuki bloodline? Funny 🤪

I think it's best for the protagonists of fan fiction to be time travellers, because only in this way can they be interesting. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to just read the original work?

The author and teacher added some of his own words, which is very dramatic and makes me feel uncomfortable, but the rest is fine.

Although I didn't have high expectations since I saw that the book was written a few years ago, the concentration of poisonous spots still made me dumbfounded.

Naruto is just a family ethics drama, it is a family dispute between Kaguya's family, and chakra is the energy separated by Kaguya. Where is the upper limit of ordinary people? Without a system or bloodline, it is impossible to surpass this upper limit. Unless you absorb the natural energy of the entire ninja world like the sacred tree, you can participate in the later battles. Otherwise, you are just playing soy sauce, or you can kick like Kai, who feels good for a second. With Kai's speed, it may be finished in less than 1 second.

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to leave when I saw the name. I didn't recognize him 😒