
Traveler in the Lake
湖中旅人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 554k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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[Comment] The protagonist's current card
Name: Dongchuan Title: Dongchuan at the end of the road Race: Glacial Tribe World: D5686 Gender: Female Level: One Specialty: Polearm Proficiency Ability: Short range freezing mastery Contract only: Spellcasters with sparks Initial summoning requirements: 0 Summoning consumption: 1G/1 hour
[Comment] There is a problem with dual-opening
"Mito Moriichi" appears in Chapters 6 and 19 Change it quickly
[Information] The author's explanation about the camp is wrong
In fact, camp is not understood this way. To worship goodness is to be altruistic, to be evil is to trample on life, and to be neutral is to be altruistic without harming oneself. The example of kindness given by the author is actually neutral, neutral or neutral, and evil is evil. Order and chaos are wrongly defined. Let's take the example given by the author. Kindness means that you like a girl (or a man, or both, this is only determined by your innate genes and some acquired environmental influences. I am so damn politically correct), but the girl doesn't like you or doesn't know you. Then the girl gets married and has a child, and the girl suffers from uremia and kidney failure. At this time, no matter whether you still like the girl or not, you hear the news and decide to help the girl. This is kindness. If you pool your wealth to raise funds to support the girl's surgery, and if you don't have enough sex, you will be matched with a suitable match, and you donate a kidney to help the girl have the surgery, and then just walk away without leaving your name and surname, then that's order. If you don't hesitate to rush into a house and borrow money, regardless of whether the model matches or not, and you cut off your own kidney to save the girl, this is chaos. Between the two, there is neutrality. Basically, you should try to raise funds first, and if you have no choice, you will borrow money from everywhere, but you won't cut yourself off if you don't match the shape. (Good and evil) Neutral is the majority. If you look at the chestnuts above, you may donate some money to the girl. If the girl has a bad relationship with you, depending on the depth of your relationship, you may cut off a kidney to save her, but you may not. If you were just a spare tire with that girl, you might express your regret. The middle class tends to solve problems within the rules, while the middle class is generally neutral. There are two types of absolute neutrality. One is self-centered neutrality. Of course, people naturally have tendencies and can only be relatively objective. The other is general flow, which means they can change their views and tendencies at any time. Evil is simple. There is no concept of right and wrong, no good or evil, everything is based on one's own interests, and there is no evil at all. Zhixie likes to use means, hidden rules, and public opinion to guide his own self-interest. Xizhong is a complete egoist. He defies authority, envies those in power, and hopes to reach the sky in one step. It is very easy for Zhixie to transform into Zhixie, and it is equally easy to transform into Hunxie. The behavior of evildoers is the most unpredictable. They kill and rob for drug money, and destroy for fun. They are completely controlled by their personal emotions. Back to the author's chestnut. It's still that girl. The Zhixie will use means to deceive or coerce her into possessing her, and then force her body to transport poison, etc. The evil person will track and rape the other person, and then kill the other person in an attempt to evade legal responsibility. The evil-doer's behavior is unpredictable. Maybe he will commit violence on the spot and be caught, maybe he will follow and rape the other person and then go away, maybe he will eat the other person, etc. PS, human nature is extremely responsible, and DND's camp is too rigid. A person's camp includes both his inner thinking and the consequences of his actions, while DND ignores the inner purpose and results and only looks at the process. This has tricked groups of sex workers.
[Comment] Very interesting
The setting of planeswalkers is difficult to write, but it seems promising at the moment. But from a novel perspective, your early writing was too confusing. Many unnecessary plots and characters, coupled with a large number of settings, greatly reduce the readability. The next two chapters are all about setting. If you throw it right in the readers' faces, no one will have the patience to read it and they will skip it. It is recommended that you revise more often and get the fluency before the new book period is over, so that your grades will be good.
[Comments] Current settings
This world: Slodese Introduction to Six Continents Continent of Light: The main creatures are humans, a relatively peaceful continent, and the owner is Margaret, the astrologer witch. The South and the North are divided by the filthy land. The South is warlike and the North is peaceful. Cloud Continent: The main creatures are bugs, the garden of bugs, and the owner is the bug ruler Barber The continent of the sea: a hotbed of sea creatures Dragon Continent: The active area of dragon creatures, because the scattered volcanic islands and rich mineral deposits attract giant dragons and other large creatures. The top five dragons in Dragon Island are: Time Dragon, Scroll Dragon, Rainbow Dragon, Star Dragon, and Power Dragon. Above the top five are the four great dragons, which are recognized as the strongest four dragons among all known dragon creatures. Continent of Wind: Surface elves and underground elves, mainly forest areas, but also some valleys and plains. The Continent of Beasts: the main activity area of orcs and warcraft