Killing Sword Master

I write so slowly, so little, and I still owe money😆😆😆

This rhythm becomes more and more interesting as it goes on. I'll give you rewards and monthly tickets.

The most painful thing in history is that I want to vote for the author Da Da, but BUT has no experience, so please improve and appreciate experience. The author Da Da is so cute, so he won't reject me. 🌹🌹

Chapter 143 has been corrected, Chapter 134 has been corrected, Chapter 143 has been corrected, friends who have subscribed, you can read it, don't miss it. Sorry for causing such a big mess, please rest assured that it has been modified.

It's okay. This character suits my taste. Just don't give up.

I accidentally read this book. The whole novel is very consistent with the routine of boys' fairy tales. The male protagonist, a scumbag, has learned a unique skill through a sport, and there is a heroine who is loved by everyone and attracts all men. Moreover, the heroine who is shy and loved by everyone has been waiting for the scumbag male protagonist. It is touching. As long as you are a reader, you can basically guess the content and ending by following this routine. But as a senior writer and bookworm like me, for the sake of the growth and progress of the author, there are some things I still feel uncomfortable saying. When I read the novel, I first looked at the writing style. The writing style of this novel needs to be changed. For example, in the first chapter, the male protagonist's head seemed to have been stepped on by an elephant. Don't you think this sentence is too violent and beyond imagination? Elephants are strong based on their weight. To say that they are powerful, it would be more terrifying to say that a tiger slaps their paw. There are many similar metaphors, so I won't list them all here. Let's talk about the dialogue. The dialogue between the male protagonist and the scroll is a bit too simple and crude. It doesn't have the mysterious atmosphere that a mysterious person should have at all. I just feel that the person in the painting has also traveled through time. Do you think I, as a reader, will believe that he has been in the painting for a long time and is a master? The writing style can be seen from the quotation on the first page of the novel or at the beginning. Normally, it should attract people to read further. Sorry, I really think the author's quotation is too cliché. I didn't see this, and it is a bit cumbersome and redundant. Also, could the author be more careful when naming the heroine? Can the starting point be artistic and tall? Of course, the basic structure of the novel is still very complete. The most impressive part of the description is the part where the heroine buys medicine. It can really describe the heroine's forbearing quality in a variety of ways, and also show the heroine's emotions towards the hero through side effects. All in all, the author still needs to work harder, and I hope you can see more brighter plots below!

I'm sorry, because I don't have 500 points, so I can't reply to my friends who gave tips and comments. Thank you all again. This book has been signed. If you like alliances and anime, you are welcome to chat.

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