
Amazing Disciple
惊世门徒
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 656k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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69Recommends
33Fans
224Chapters
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[Comment] Congratulations on the new book!
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[Comment] The author is also quite honest
I won't say anything else. Is this really okay with you? But it's really hard work
[Comment] Ant friends, please give me some opinions! If it feels wrong, you can ignore it.
First of all, the classification is wrong, this is considered a city. Secondly, the opening chapter is all about introduction, the pace of entering the main plot is too slow, and the introduction of the protagonist is too detailed, which will only make you pee. Do more and talk less. The same principles of life should be used in writing. Let readers get to know the protagonist through his actions instead of your long introduction. It's just that I don't want to see my friends taking the same old route. If you feel it's wrong, you can delete it or ignore it. 🤝