Infinite True Path

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the author has put a lot of thought into it and has accumulated a certain amount of experience. However, when I look at the qualifications, it is boring. The background explanation is too cumbersome and the age setting is too low. However, it is still a good idea and it should be a foreshadowing for the following chapters. The background of the opening chapter and the routine used to seek immortality are too mediocre. If the author completes this book and publishes a new book, he should pay attention to the explanations in the opening few chapters, so as not to give people the feeling that I have seen this routine before. The opening chapters need to be carefully considered. In fact, there is no need to write too much about others. Focus on the protagonist, and then use some other aspects to reflect the supporting role. The protagonist is not shown at the beginning of the book. Thinking about how his parents are miserable to highlight the protagonist's misery is a bit like a child writing a narrative. If anyone sees this, don't criticize me. Go and watch it first. The protagonist's father dies when he is eight years old, and then he draws a sword to help when there is an injustice. Then he happens to catch up with the death of someone else's mother, and then he is caught again. His sister lets him go, and he encounters a robber and a little girl on the road. Then the little girl's family is killed by the robber. Then the immortal rescues the person but does not care about the child. He pretends to be profound. The three little friends cross the state to seek immortality and have a strong Taoist heart. I'm tired of seeing this. The plot in the first few chapters is just a running account, and the protagonist bumps into things wherever he goes. No matter how exciting the rest of the story is, few people want to continue reading. If you don't write the first few chapters of a book well, no matter how good the subsequent chapters are, it will be in vain. If someone has some knowledge, they will at least briefly mention what happened before his mother gave birth to him. His father's murder will either be briefly mentioned, or the protagonist will know a little bit about it. It is better not to know, and wait until he returns to his hometown to use immortal methods to force the murderer. After all, the child does not know so much, and will only think about it when he grows up. If you want to explain the deep love between father and son, you can let him think about it later, instead of wasting the precious opening chapters to tell the readers. These are some of my suggestions. I hope the author will notice that the first few chapters of an online article are the most important when he finishes writing this book. Although the author has good intentions in foreshadowing the prologue and writing detailed descriptions, he must have an outline, but some things are not in place. I hope the author can become a platinum writer in the future.

Now that the memory of the Emperor of Heaven has been restored, why is the understanding of the source of power still so slow? Didn't even the Yiyuan monks arrive during the time of the Heavenly Emperor in the previous life? The recovered memory can only recall people and objects, and has completely forgotten all my previous exercises 😰😰😰😰

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The writing should be like this, when it's happy, it's happy, it's clean, when it's tender, it's like a different country.

The author's perseverance is admirable👍

The author is really awesome, no matter how bad the subscription is, he can write more than a thousand chapters! Your character is absolutely outstanding. Many people should learn from you.

If you find any bugs in the book or have any good suggestions for this book, please submit them here. I will read them carefully one by one. Thank you! 😊

Although the novel only has tens of thousands of words, it can be seen that it is a very powerful novel.

The writing is excellent in this large book, and the plot is full of twists and turns and is fascinating! !

The writing and plot are okay, but the main character's love story begins before the 100th chapter when he is only 11 years old. Many of the girls in the book are children, which makes them extremely precocious. It's uncomfortable to watch╯╰

That undestined qualification is really a poisonous explosion, I'm really speechless

I just read Chapter 4. Although the writing is good, I don't like too many sad scenes.

Why are there so few people reading such a beautiful book?

A 6-year-old girl will blush and mature prematurely

Does it look good? Is there a Shennong?

Rubbish. The main character's name "Heng Yin" is very poor and the writing is rubbish.

Is Shushu really not the heroine? Is there any possibility of resurrection? 😐😐This emotional line should be the longest. . . .

I like to read those with many comments 😁

I accidentally clicked on this book, and suddenly I realized that I had really met a treasure! This book is mine, no one can take it from me!

I have always felt that creating is extremely lonely, but as long as you persist, I believe you will definitely gain something...

It means that I can never read other books except this one... Just like the plate of egg fried rice in God of Cookery, author, why!

The article is delicately conceived yet unrestrained, the writing is realistic yet equally gorgeous; the plots are interlocking and enchanting, with a coherent flow, and the emotional expressions are clear, implicit, and accurate; the characters are vivid and lively on the page, and they feel ready to come out, as if they are standing in front of the readers, and their movements leave a deep impression on people. I have collected and read your masterpiece and fully support you! I wish you success and immediate success! 😄😄

I discovered this article yesterday and couldn't put it down. I read it until around two o'clock in the middle of the night and finally finished it! The writing is wonderful, the characters are very distinct, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is a good article worth reading! Finally, there is one more thing I want to ask for: can you go faster! There are many articles on my bookshelf that are too slow. Now I have forgotten what they are about. When I open them to read, I have to re-filter them. Sometimes I give up in order to save time, so I would like to ask if you can read them less slowly, because I still really hope to read two chapters of such articles every day. Thank you!

Although the writing is still not perfect, it has considerable appreciation value. I believe that this sharp and restrained style will allow me to read more exciting novels from you in the near future. However, there are also some slightly blunt aspects in the character creation, which are worth pondering. Come on!!!! Support you!!! Good book, support!!!!!! [Uid=343947]

Generally speaking, the protagonist's character in a novel is more prominent, but it's rare that this novel even describes the supporting character's character in such detail. It's really surprising!