From Rebirth to Eternal Life

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When I first saw the title of Da Da's work, I didn't think much of it. After reading the introduction, I had an initial understanding of everything. However, I felt that the content of the introduction was not enough to catch people's hearts. It would be more attractive to add some specific suspense of the story. Moreover, instead of a long paragraph of narrative questions, each question should be a paragraph of its own, so that it would be clearer. After all, this is an introduction, not a specific story. The more attractive, the better, and the clearer the better. How to put it? Because Dada's novels are from the main website, and they are supernatural. I have to say that even for the timid Zhaichu, I don't think they are particularly thrilling. I personally feel that since readers come for the purpose of supernatural suspense, and Dada wants to keep them reading, they must grab the reader's heart at the very beginning of the story and make him instantly read. It's best to be tense when your whole body is tense, but the mystery of the large-scale writing is very weak. On the contrary, some descriptions are too detailed, and it feels a bit cumbersome after reading too much. For example, the description of the environment can be clearly outlined in a few simple sentences, and it can also make people focus more on the specific plot. Why not? I have to say that the subject matter itself is very attractive. Before I started reading it, I was thinking that finding a way to rebirth for a female ghost who is unwilling to accept the fact that she is dead must be full of strange things along the way. However, the plot is a bit slow, so reading it really requires patience. I think if you take advantage of the fact that there is not much content at the moment, change the first few chapters so that the plot is more tense and the atmosphere of suspense and horror can be more attractive to readers. I have written more than 60,000 words. I have to say that the overall situation is really not good. Of course, I am not that good either, but These thoughts are really the truest feelings of DaDa. Maybe it is not praise that will make DaDa feel unhappy, but DaDa really hopes that DaDa's article can become better, and MuMida himself is also revising the article. Everyone hopes to share wonderful stories with their readers, so come on, DaDa! Finally, I would like to wish you a happy old age! Happy New Year! Congratulations congratulations

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