End Star

In fact, there are inevitably some emotional scenes in every novel. This is a powerful tool to make the male protagonist become tender!

What a great book. Let me feel a little bit of the first love, a little helpless neglect, a little bit of the harshness of life, and a little bit of persistent pursuit. Thank you for the great book.

This book is very good, I will continue to read it! Only by persisting can you see the hope of success!

The book "The End Star" is quite well written, but the number of words in each chapter is too short. I suggest the author improve the number of words. This book is quite chewy if you read it slowly. Liu Feng's behavior is also very logical. It is a good book.

The new author hopes for your support. If you can recommend and collect it, it will be a great support for me.

I have collected and read this masterpiece, the writing is very good, and I have some thoughts. First, there are too many straightforward narratives. In the first five chapters, there seems to be very little dialogue, and only the protagonist is active. This seems very monotonous. There should be dialogue between the protagonist and the supporting characters, so that it does not look boring; second, there are many introductory descriptions, which seem long-winded, such as the introduction of the deacon's work. The above is just my humble opinion and for reference only. I hope you can give me more valuable opinions on "Pony's Counterattack". [Url=zUVnAb]

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