A Frazzled Reviewer’s Ranting Minefield Guide to Modern and Futuristic Fiction 破碎不堪扫雷人骂骂咧之现代未来

1 重 Reborn: A Sudden Awakening 重生之豁然 For Some Reason缘何故Danmei (BL)783k WordsCompleted 267.2kFavorites537.7kClicks/ch451.3kGifts

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This is an old article. Because of the name, I wanted to watch it because I wanted to see the protagonist face the new life with an open mind. After actually watching it, I don't really feel this way. But I think the problem may be that generally open-minded protagonists are reborn when things are irreversible. And people who are reborn in the past will always want to change the past no matter what. On the road to change, there are always countless obstacles that need to be cleared. The protagonist is very straightforward when it comes to solving the villain. But I think the problem is that there are many bugs in the details of the story (it may also be that I don't have enough knowledge and experience) For example, the English teacher could refuse to teach the class if he said it was not possible. Although the principal was later dealt with, I think it is incredible that this happened. For another example, the scope of the exam syllabus needs to be discussed by school teachers themselves (I don't know if this is a characteristic of the times). In short, I personally feel that there are quite a lot of things that are unreasonable. It's not too late to attack. I was just a little helpless. The first time they met, Gong kissed Shou angrily. Anyway, I felt quite offended, even though I was beaten. Later, I wrote about finance and business, which was not within my scope of interest, so I didn't read much about it. Some of the supporting characters have quite distinctive personalities. For example, Grandma Xiao: she believes in Buddhism and loves sweets, and she has the cuteness of an old child. Shen Tiantian: She looks like a sweet girl, but she is actually very thoughtful and capable. Shen: A strong woman with great decision-making power Father Lin: He looks serious on the outside, but in private he is a crybaby who will cry in front of his wife. There wasn't much sympathy for Shou's two friends' miserable experiences in their previous lives, and I couldn't explain why. I didn't feel too happy about what happened to the person with ulterior motives behind me. There's even an expansion of the tragic ending in the extra, which is... Quite weird. The author's writing style is very ordinary, and sometimes even feels like a dull story.

2 不 Don't Be a Man's Digital Pet 不要当男人的电子宠物 Seven Streams七流Danmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 185.4kFavorites182.9kClicks/ch433.2kGifts

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Finally, it reminded me that I used to like AI very much. Because in recent years, AI dubbing and AI painting have often produced things that make people physically uncomfortable. So the antipathy towards AI has arisen. But in fact, I am a person who likes AI very much. AI is my destiny. This article brought back a little bit of the feeling I once had. At first I thought I was a hard-working academic type, but it turned out to be just like the copywriter

3 在 I Accidentally Booked an Appointment With My Ex at an Andrology Clinic 在男科医院不小心挂了前男友的号 Yao Yao Yi Yan杳杳一言Danmei (BL)114k WordsCompleted 93.3kFavorites156.1kClicks/ch51.1kGifts

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It looked so cool in the early stages, and I really like knives. As a result, there was a big thunder behind. Cursing in embarrassment, he exited. There is a big difference in personality between before and after. The plot relies on attack and pull. If you can clearly explain something, you must forcefully interrupt and say "I won't listen." Things that can be explained clearly by being honest should not be made random guesses. I endured it just for the sake of that sour feeling. Later, a supporting character was innocently accused of homosexuality by the protagonist, and was "exposed in public". Is this the grievance you deserve for being the protagonist's friend... How difficult is it to defend sexual orientation... Don't you need to worry about the female characters' feelings when writing novels... (When encountering this situation in the third dimension, no matter whether it is true or not, whether the other party defends it or not, I suggest girls run away)

4 改 Rework Me, Mark Me 改造我，标记我 Yi Xiuluo易修罗Danmei (BL)453k WordsCompleted 26.8kFavorites26.7kClicks/ch25.7kGifts

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Because of Shou's character, the first impression was too embarrassing (? So his shining points later made me feel unreal. In fact, Lei Gong is a brain that breeds cancer. Although the reasons are explained later, it is still a bit difficult for me to accept. (After all, people who are unfortunate in their native family tend to... Live alone (?) I forgot why I abandoned the article later. It seems that I wrote a supporting role like Bai Yueguang. It turns out that this character is nothing more than the previous foreshadowing and boring. There is still some tension in the emotional line, and you can't help but feel that he is a treasure. He has the ability to dare to love and hate, and he is also able to stretch and bend. But many times I still don't understand his logic, and there are many times when I feel that I am being pampered and arrogant. After looking at it, it seems that updates have been discontinued for a long time...

5 信 Pheromone Recognition Disorder 信息素识别障碍 Lots of Hair头发多多Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 286.8kFavorites397kClicks/ch370.2kGifts

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The author's writing style is really hard to describe. Very poor experience. Highly frequently used [. . . ! ! ! ? ? ? ] Wait for punctuation, and break it into sections. It looks like the author is emotionally unstable (looks like) There are a lot of details in the article that have no substantive meaning. The copywriting is just a small climax. In fact, the core of the story is pretty good. The interstellar setting is like that, all great physicists have never existed (× The empire feels very broken. It has not developed much after 300 years. The characters from 300 years ago were still unattainable and powerful... In fact, because I have seen less subject matter, my ability to summarize is also very poor. The Zerg here are actually more like warriors. They are not simply evil, they are just forced to be labeled as evil forces. In fact, they themselves are also victims. Jiang Ci's mother was rarely mentioned in the previous article. She only said that Jiang Jin had such a child, and did not say how she came about. It was finally mentioned later that she was a saint of the church. I still can't get past the cliche jokes, but native dogs like to watch them, so that's it (referring to being in heat/drugged, etc.) The characters of the two protagonists are a bit superficial. I don't know how to define them. They feel a bit like robots with labels. Well, they are just relatively thin, at present. In fact, if Jiang Ci's past was not repeatedly emphasized later, this character would have collapsed in a fragile direction. If you develop according to the direction of the copywriting, it will only become more powerful in the future. Are you unhappy with your career? You have to post stickers and have children. Tsk Even though it's a mecha story, I don't like either mecha. One is noisy, the other is too straight (he secretly dislikes his master...) I would like to see what a self-aware Forbidden Abyss is like. In the end, I abandoned the article at the point where [the author feels that his writing is pretty good and the characters are full of character], which made me laugh to death. He was forced to retreat. Forgot exactly.

6 降 Come 降临 Delusional Crow妄鸦Danmei (BL)459k WordsCompleted 108kFavorites133.4kClicks/ch175.8kGifts

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I liked it at first. While pursuing the article, the author mentioned that there was something explosive, but he was not too conflicted when the answer was revealed. Although the author always reminds them that they are the same person, they can actually be viewed separately. So I repeatedly reminded the two of them to understand each other. Looking back, I felt that it was a bit redundant. Because the author does not describe it this way, the similarities between the two cannot be intuitively detected. Moreover, the article spends a lot of words describing Zong Lan's indifference and L's benevolence. There are twists and turns in the subsequent plot development, but I always feel that there is a sense of gap between high and low, which makes the upcoming ending seem very hasty. The removal of several large pollution sources does not have the urgency of a disaster. Although there are supporting characters and a lot of ink, I always feel that their presence is not strong. Without this setting, I would have been speechless ( Perhaps the biggest gap is the death of Ai Zimo. I always feel that the arrangement is not reasonable. I can't say why, maybe it's because the settings are a bit unexplainable. In the beginning, L Qianqian's feeling was actually quite endearing. Sometimes I felt that this person should be evil, but he was always kind to Zong Lan. The emotional line between the two has been in a state of L teasing, L giving, L bearing for a long time. Zong Lan is indifferent, Zong Lan makes money, and Zong Lan tries to resist. There is a certain degree of asymmetry (except for the mutual concealment of the plot at the end, I can't remember where there has been any equivalence), which makes me feel that the development of a relationship line is purely because of the setting that the two people know each other too well and are so lonely that they only love themselves. I don't know why. In fact, my name was Lanlan at first, but now I can't pronounce it and can only use my first name. In the later stage, Lan Lan couldn't stand up anymore and felt that the role was very thin.

7 天 Genius Mechanic 天才维修师 Li Wenjiu李温酒Danmei (BL)2.6M WordsCompleted 424.9kFavorites536.3kClicks/ch3.8MGifts

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Very well set article. But there are too many battle descriptions and my imagination can't keep up, so it feels a bit difficult. At the beginning of the article, I will fall into deep thought (although I haven't thought of anything yet) After being reborn, the protagonist is very open about letting go of his honor. But without the experience of the previous life, I don't know whether the protagonist can make the same choice based on his own heart. Speaking of amputation alone, although it is very straightforward, it would not be possible without the consequences of not detecting the disease in the previous life. This is one of the rebirth novels that made me think more clearly. Because the decision after rebirth feels too dependent on the experience of the previous life (other stories may rely on the previous life for some planning or planning, here Shen Lin directly amputated his limbs, and then said goodbye to a lot of glory, and his physical and mental strength also directly declined. To be honest, it really takes a lot of perseverance to let go) Although there are many highlight moments in the later chapters. In fact, the highlight is probably a bit outrageous, but because the setting is overhead, it doesn't cause much discomfort. In fact, rebirth is unfair to many people because of the highlights. This article is good and mutually beneficial. The abandonment of the article is about 380,000 words in Chapter 72, and the protagonist's emotional line has no development. Anyway, I feel nothing. (I feel confused. Obviously I should care more about the plot, but I have found several recent novels without emotional development to be boring. I can't tell for a moment whether it's because the story itself is boring, or because my interest is more towards the emotional line? ) There are a lot of descriptions of mecha combat, which seems a bit laborious, and I am not very good at it. Simply go through the plot. I quite like mechas, hehehe, mechas with intelligence. The plot that I am currently concerned about is how Yuan wakes up. There are also emotional lines. At present, Yousu is a rich and capable background (Shen Lin has too many highlights... Also, it's a pity to think about the black hole incident in my previous life. (Yousu is also inside) I don't know what has been unlocked in this life.

8 虫 The Zerg: I Come from Afar 虫族之我来自远方 Fortress Bao碉堡堡Danmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 247.6kFavorites487.5kClicks/ch837.4kGifts

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Because reading this article caused me to have a little psychological shadow on the Zerg. So much so that I extremely doubted that the Zerg's setting in this way was essentially misogyny. Anyway, it looks very bad. Bloodline can be strong or talented, but as a death-free gold medal, it is very confusing to ignore any rules. (? Sense of déjà vu: The people in my family can be bad, stupid or weak, but as long as he can leave me the blood of my family name, he can be domineering) Very inconsistent. It feels like the protagonist's experience is completely different from the beginning. Then, I found out later that it was a unit article with different protagonists. Can't tell what it feels like. Personally I don't like it very much. (Female: Strong fighting ability, must be able to cook and do housework, (also giving birth to children?) Male: The female is absolutely submissive and cannot resist. Even those of royal blood have to weigh before deciding whether to take action. Overall, it's useless and has no combat effectiveness) The overall tone is there, so I can only record it to avoid lightning. (Actually, my acceptance level is pretty good. As long as you don't embarrass me, I don't really care about my position. I feel a bit domesticated.) Because it is a unit novel, I will be curious about the other protagonists. However, there shouldn't be any interactions between the protagonists in the whole story, so just forget about being curious.

9 顶 Top Pollutants Are Also Camouflaging Cats Today 顶级污染物今天也在伪装猫咪 The God of Sleep Reincarnates睡神再世Danmei (BL)362k WordsCompleted 57.8kFavorites115.1kClicks/ch27.6kGifts

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A conventional routine with a sense of apocalypse. The writing style is cute, and although there are many embarrassing plots, it doesn't feel awkward to read. There are just a few chapters that are very confusing. In fact, the story originally contained very chaotic scenes, but the author's technique may have lacked a bit of proficiency. Therefore, after a few chapters, the confusion is the second best, and the dullness is the most intuitive. I feel that the classification of pollutants is still a bit hasty. One of them is cute and the other is pretending to be stupid. According to the current progress, Ah Leng is more dependent. Tang Yi was more curious in the early stage, just like the classic line "Interesting" (not the original text). Therefore, how to generate subsequent feelings requires some sparks of friction. (I later decided to cancel the collection, either because there was something wrong with it or I just suddenly felt no interest) Just like the previous article was boring, this article is very bland to me. So it became the one I gave up when I decided to make a choice.

10 终 Finally Remembered My Account Password 终于想起账号密码了 Zhi Tang稚棠Danmei (BL)484k WordsCompleted 61.2kFavorites100.6kClicks/ch19.7kGifts

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The dog's head is bloody. 1. For what disease, the success rate of surgery is 1% if you live under 20 years old? 2. Many meaningless descriptions and narrations, as if to make up the word count Although they are masters and apprentices, they don't have the pleasure of masters and apprentices. They are more like a regular reunion or childhood sweethearts (ah, I looked back and saw that the label did say that) 3. How can I put it this way? The logic bug is quite difficult to explain. The climax of adding a WeChat friend and losing the horse has to be delayed (although the copy has described the specific time, but it is not understandable in terms of perception. They live together every day without adding a WeChat friend, lol) 4. The bad guy is really bad, but I don't know what the follow-up arrangements will be. The details of a car accident can be ignored like this, which makes me very suspicious of life (well, according to the plot revealed later, I feel that car accidents are not the type that are very obscure so that people cannot find out the flaws). At the same time, in order to let the villain reveal his true face, the method used was to design the opponent to self-destruct during the live broadcast. It was a bit funny to be honest, and it was not a very clever plan. 5. The character design of the protagonist does not feel three-dimensional and hollow.

11 别 Don't Touch My Deskmate 别碰我同桌 Lin Qinian林七年Danmei (BL)498k WordsCompleted 131.7kFavorites116.5kClicks/ch39.1kGifts

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I was attracted to read it in the first chapter. Later I found out that it was Piansha Glyph and I was scared, but I persisted and read a few chapters. I ran away when I saw that I had good grades but was bullied by my classmates so much that I stopped being gregarious. I have been thinking for a long time about why the protagonists have similar family configurations (some are in jail), why others can live sunny and cheerful lives, and why are they so miserable here. So in the final analysis, it is still influenced by the family of origin. It is essentially a sweet article, but it likes to write about some villains who cause trouble, which affects the perception. Although I ran away, when I heard what happened behind me, I was very glad that I ran away early. The family members who rely on each other become an obstacle to the relationship, which is really unimaginable suffocation. The final way to break the situation is inevitably death and reunion. Why.