The writing is great, but the middle or the end is not good. Rating 3x is a pity that it is useless but it is not unwatchable. Rating 2x regrets not abandoning it sooner.
Five points for the attractiveness of the copywriting and three points for the actual plot. However, the recycling of foreshadowing can show the design intention and give it four points.
The free chapter doesn't look good.
It's a businessman's play house, the plot is too charming, the child got 60% out of 100, the parents said it's great, you are the number one in my heart, but part of the plot didn't live up to the expectations in the text.
And it's particularly frustrating. It's the kind of feeling that the protagonist, who is from the countryside, goes to the city and finds that his relatives are either rich or noble, and he feels out of place. (Not to mention the attitude damage when you don't recognize them. The protagonist's perspective is like a subordinate's depression, and the process of contacting old friends is like the bottom versus the upper class. It may be to set off the horse, but the reading experience is not good)
E-sports as a whole is not exciting enough, and the psychological shadows are repetitive and lacking in layers. After watching it, it will feel like repeated use (the same hurdle cannot be overcome repeatedly, and the writing is homogeneous)
The emotional line affects the group portrait line, and the author may want to blend them all. I want the feeling of being a heartthrob, but at the same time I am a pure lover at heart. I am caught in the middle between the two, neither above nor below.
Group portraits, one is that apart from true love, we are all family members, and we have a collective sense of family and a sense of inseparability with our teammates. In addition to the love line and family affection and protection, how to gain recognition and family protection is also a core point of enjoyment.
The other is to control the emotional arrows of everyone who is a heartthrob. After the competition for the Shura Field completely breaks out, return to the group, either let go or change the attitude (pointing out that the sense of belonging to the group after returning to love is the core, how to break the Shura Field, how to break the Shura Field, friendship is higher than love)
At the beginning of this article, there was a lot of competition among the fans, and in the middle of the fight, everyone except the official spouse abdicated, hoping that nothing would happen and the family relationship could happen. If you advance too quickly, you retreat too quickly. The team feels like it is weakening the teammates. The supporting characters express their affectionate blessings. From the family's sweetheart to the templated and infatuated male supporting actor, they insist on not cluttering the main storyline. A person who is purely a eater is not as protective as his family members when he sees other members of his team being defensive after his group pet is stolen.
Imagine that the doctor next to the CEO who was woken up in the early morning actually has a crush on the protagonist Shou, and suddenly he changed from a spectator to a miserable person in the situation. It is very suitable for people with crooked XP to watch some ntr-like (this article does not have this) sour and refreshing feeling (except for the strange plot feedback caused by unconscious subjects in many parts of the slow plot, you can probably know that the author is more enjoyable but is in the middle area where he can be bumped and thundered, so he needs to be an appreciator who likes the counterpart)
Some companies are afraid that after watching the plot of Dai Xiangga, they were suspected of having hickeys in public, and they pulled off other people's clothes to reveal hickeys, and acted awkwardly in the work diary. If you are not interested in the previous part of the show, you will feel awkward.
The extra story says that the protagonist is a bit in love, which I feel is the author's fault. Many scenes of abuse of the protagonist highlight the sense of fragmentation. If written well, it will have a sour feeling similar to that of a crematorium, but the expression effect is always lacking. The tortured part overflowed, and the pleasurable part was not poked correctly. If you like it, you can try it, but it's not very good.
Full text reading experience: I bought a Tickle Scratch for leg itch, but it was labeled as scratching the leg pit. I thought that such a small group of people would be able to relate to it, so I tried to buy it with suspicion. I found that it was too light, and I couldn't say that it didn't scratch my legs, but it didn't taste good. I wanted to read better ones written in the same genre, and I remembered that this is a niche preference. It doesn't actually itch if you don't scratch it, but it will itch if you scratch it.
Once again, no matter how much I like the copywriting, I would not click on it, but the author's xp e-sports and horse-dropping are very exciting. I hope that one of the later books will improve to the point where it can stabilize my emotions and stabilize my emotions.
The writing is too plain and the conflict plot is unconvincing. Sense of setting > Sense of story, a sense of immediate vision based on the outline, characters, and all the mutual abuse are plotted. The supporting characters and tools are clearly good and bad, not like living people, and the knives are also very dull. In front of me, I was pretending to be cool and suffered a big loss, but I could still give off a sense of being evenly matched, which is very subtle. The display of various time and space in the mid-term is also unclear, which is quite confusing. The arrangement of settings consumes expectations for the plot. I'm quite interested in the setting of the copywriting, but the expression effect is really not good.
The early stages and extras are better to watch, but in the middle and later stages, everyone knows that they are a couple and the subsequent driving and nonsense are all just to promote the plot, which is a bit boring. The car is OK, [] is delicious. In the early stage, it was too out-of-the-box and seemed a bit intellectual. It was quite fun to watch without thinking, but the part involving going out to fight was more boring. The two people's stubbornness also felt more like an XP setting and lacked character arcs.
Instead, I prefer the extra story about being rejected at a young age. I like the character setting very much, the subject takes the initiative, and the straight ball is very suitable for driving.
The advantage is that it is good for quick reading without thinking, and although it is a bit boring in the middle stage, it is useful.
3X is not smart enough. Putting aside the moral sense, it's quite cool to be able to accept the multi-party relationship when there is no real talk. You can skip to watch Rich House, the story of the original owner's misfortune is relatively convincing. 12 Is not good, 34 the story is okay, 5 the early stage is awkward and the original owner is pitiful at the end, 6 is okay. You can watch the Dog Blood Shura Field. The real world is ugly, and there are nonsensical jokes about amnesia and stupidity. Shou can still talk to NPCs without recognizing him for credits. Gong is symbolically jealous, Shou makes fun of the breakup. 3456 Story is okay. After watching it, I found that I had seen it before and had no memory points. All the Shura Fields were made up by my imagination. It was quite fun to lose my mind and watch the middle part. Multiplayer Shura Fields + Wallpaper
The three bodies thought it was a body-switching fake sword story, but it was actually an ordinary funny horse story. The characters of all the branch protagonists were quite distinctive, but the story was quite boring. On the emotional line, I am a bit loyal, and I am a bit detached from my personality (it is more difficult to immerse myself in reading and drama), and I feel very sleepy in the later stages. It is a sleep aid. The overall story is relatively bland, the past of the two people is revealed in one stroke, and the love story is also a smooth one. The various characters have distinct personalities, but the story is average. There are many parts that are fun to slap in the face, but it is too off-line. Those who like it will like it very much and find it interesting, but those who don't like it will find it just average. Fuji brush
It's very flat, and it becomes more and more flat later on. I fell asleep many times while watching it. Especially the friends who traveled through the group together were a bit like sparrows having a meeting, which was lively but watery. When I was not feeling well, the people around me were warm and healing. The whole story is like a fairy tale, everyone is positive and warm and dreamy. I didn't find it sweet, it was more that the atmosphere where everyone got along was warm and interesting, but when it came to the villain's low IQ tactics and the repeated role of the protagonist, it became a bit boring. It was fine before the surgery, but it was really uncomfortable afterwards. But the extra episode was okay, but it was a bit uncomfortable to insert the extra episode into the main text. The writing style is very good, it feels like a long flowing stream of water, which is quite warm.
Booking all is a waste of money. Just look at the early and middle stages and get a feel for the copywriting. The back is getting more and more delicate. Although it has been emphasized that some entanglements are normal, it feels more like the plot requires it. The school magazine's book has a vague feeling of being half-assed, and all the other works by the author... Are difficult to comment on. The writing is interesting, and the content suddenly moves towards documenting a painful period in the past.
The angle of the story about a double-standard husband doting on each other and being sweet and brainless is okay, and it's a bit like a tool for everyone. Shou is a standard early character in a tragic book about beauty and power. She wants to cure him. In the early stage, she relies on this momentum to express her good will. It doesn't feel like watching two people fall in love, it feels like a beautiful and strong man is being attacked by his redeemer, and he encounters a mermaid who is good at heart but strong at the outside and comes to heal him. Regardless of the setting, he only remembers the ice cream. The daily interactions in the early stage are quite relaxed and can pass the time, but the plot later is too weak to watch. Without a synopsis, it's difficult to jump into the plot. It's recommended to start at the boring point. The confidential content of the copywriting is also a setting shell, and the relationship with the characters is quite weak.
The first part is okay, I have high expectations for the writing, the first part is very fragrant, but the subsequent parts have a mediocre look. If I stop updating for too long, I will update intermittently at the end.
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