The author seems to have something wrong, it's still a zz problem.
The article itself is very exciting, I like the British and American protagonists the most, I often re-read it. The original setting of the whole article is very cleverly combined with the skeleton of the original work. The Disco Elysium jokes and some jokes that pop up from time to time are very interesting. The plot is logically logical and the famous quotes are properly quoted. It is obvious that the author has a good literary background. It is so comfortable to watch. XP is a blessing for the weak/high IQ/exceptional people!
Tasty, yummy... The transitions are excellent, very cinematic, there are no flaws in the plot, and several major plot points are handled brilliantly. Now I am looking forward to the extra story. After Sheila comes back, the hallucinations should also come back. How will Matsuda and the others deal with it.
Supplement for three brushes: read less of the comments, there are lethal amounts of cat sculptures (although I also support cat sculptures, but there are really too many...) And spoilers.
The early stage is very comfortable, and I prefer plots where the protagonist can think clearly. What feels more awkward is that for some reason there are always similar plots in the back: the protagonist faces the professor who is embarrassed/tangled/under control. And it happens repeatedly. It makes me uncomfortable to watch and I can't take it at all. The professor from the main point of view treats the protagonist like a pet (although it may be that the protagonist thinks that the professor is very powerful...?). Only by changing the perspective can you know that he actually has deep feelings for the protagonist...
The later stage was also a bit too detailed. Reading the copy, I felt that the main point of enjoyment should be the protagonist's investigation or the protagonist's strange cognition. As a result, this part was missing a lot in the later stage, and the ending was also inexplicable. To be honest, I had no impression of this ending at all during the second playthrough.
The protagonist has a dull self-awareness and faces every day in a daze. In fact, he is a gray man-eating flower, a bit like a behind-the-scenes mastermind, very comfortable and comfortable. I had to worry about the setting a little bit in the later stage. When the Basic Deduction Theater came out, I could clearly feel that the author wanted to create multiple universes but set it up with He Xue. I don't know whether it was a bad ending or was influenced by the comments, so I just made it one world and one He Xue... Anyway, except for the unpleasant parts, the protagonist is really cute.
There are so many extras, so I would like to ask the author to write more similar articles...
I like this article very much. The characters are solid, the description of the war is wonderful, and the response of the masses is not summarized in just a few sentences. The logic of the entire article is very clear, but the background seems a bit too simple. There are gasoline lamps and steam armor, but the rest of the steampunk productions are almost not mentioned. Sometimes I ignore that the background they are in is such a technological level.