Derived Fanfic (Omnivore's Current I Naruto Version)
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All five stars! Naruto Mingke Xingyue Hunter's Full-time Stealing Pen, British and American Tennis King Volleyball, all involved. If you like the plot and good writing, you are welcome to tweet! Eat both inside and outside the station!
Super delicious... This is what I want to see the little couple chew!
Warning: Although the protagonist is kind in nature, he is still a little bad guy. He will play a lot of tricks, but he is still cute!
The way this person portrays the protagonist is simply amazing, I just love it! And the updates are very diligent... Yamiami!
It's a great drama about Naruto, it will be fun to watch it with your brain! The writing style of the boss is superb and the battle scenes are also superbly written! Able to write memorable battle scenes in a very short space of time! It makes people have storyboards directly in their minds! If you love dramas, don't miss this one!
The protagonist is a philosophical native Uchiha, who is one year younger than Obito at the same time. If I say too much about the protagonist, it will be a spoiler, but it is very non-mainstream character setting among Naruto fans! Well worth seeing!
According to the text, it is a rare infinite Tsukuyomi ending. To be honest, I have hardly seen any Naruto stories with a true infinite Tsukuyomi ending. Those who engage in infrastructure construction, reform, and scientific research, and those who take the villain route to do infinite Tsukuyomi are either forced themselves or will be evaded, but if you think about it carefully, there seems to be nothing wrong with infinite Tsukuyomi (?)
All in all it's well worth looking forward to! I count on this bite every other day!
And after reading this article, I couldn't control the desire to write a long review and analysis. It's so refreshing and happy!
It hurts so much and tastes so delicious... The full text of the text is so contagious that Uchiha is completely defeated... [Lie flat] Every Uchiha in this article can't get what they want... It's so sour and bitter...
The heroine Saya is Madarazumi's younger sister. After the death of Kenmura, she was reborn in the Naruto era. The author is very good at writing the psychological activities of the characters. Xiaoye had never seen Naruto's time traveler at the beginning, and her originally solid modern views were directly crushed by the ninja world... Xiaoye during the Warring States Period was really miserable, as was Madara and Izuna... So was little Sasuke after the genocide in the main timeline... The Uchiha in this book are really a bunch of little bitter melons sitting in a row, which is too painful.
The emotional line is all the way, Saya is a beautiful piece of Uchiha wood, the kind of typical Uchiha who will feel like he is provoking me when I see the male guest open his screen. In fact, if Brother Ban comes off the field, everyone will find that they haven't even touched the starting line [glasses]. Unfortunately, there seems to be no orthopedics (regrettable exit)
Curry Monster is awesome... Oh my god I can't stop laughing...
The love attack and defense battle between the chuunibyou prince-type big bow-knotted お and the gorgeous girl manga heroine Atub! The corners of my mouth have never come down from laughing and my face is so sore SOS!
If you love reading funny stories, how can you not read Curry Monster!
Although it is pre-received, I am really looking forward to the release of this book! This meme alone attracts me so much!
The author's last article was about Nobutsatsu, the Judge of Gods, and his writing style is guaranteed! Moreover, the setting of True Ancestor is really very rare in JJ! ! Wow ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah looking forward to the official release! ! !
Second editor:
My God, I saw that there were 100,000 deposited manuscripts today... Such a diligent author... Oh my god, I really want to crawl into the author's manuscript storage box... I can't see the deposited manuscripts and I have ants crawling all over my body...
CP Spot Fei! Very interesting idea! The main perspective is from Gate 2. This Gate 2 is more cheerful and casual (?) Because it is well protected by its brother.
A group of four who have had most of their life trajectories changed because of the time travellers! Therefore, the characters of the four characters are much less bitter and resentful than those in the original work. This can be seen from the fact that the coconut cake brothers have not opened the kaleidoscope...
Everyone in the original world was happy... It would have been even happier if there was no Black Zetsu...
Currently, I just happened to go to the original world Banban to find Men Er! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up talk!
Good meal +1! This is originally a joke between the second-generation disciples (?) So far, Yangchun Line is the best for me (* ̄ ̄)
Yoko is an old man and old woman who will die early (?) And will probably die soon after reaching adulthood. Judging from the teacher's warning, I guess it won't change the direction of the original work much. If you don't like to watch the barrier of death be!
But who am I! I am the ultimate omnivore who claims to be invincible from all mine points. Hehehe! I just ate it up! This girl is still too cute and she was also Yamiami in her childhood!
I am eagerly looking forward to the fourth battle extra-ing!
I knew I could get a good meal just by scrolling through everyone's columns (?)... It was so delicious that all of them came to me and ate it up...
The protagonist is the heir to the HK superpower black organization. Due to his high charm, many male guests have attracted the Shura field. The tutoring group is like students, and the literary group is more adult-oriented.
Sister 4 directly gave me a successful charm judgment... Such a charming woman, I fell in love directly...
All those who love to read all directions should read this article, okay!
Good luck! The cute coconut cake heroine who judges the gods! Swords take up a lot of space! It also brings a bit of insect master element!
The main plot of the novel is infrastructure and love, and the first and middle stages are very good to watch! The ghostly Takema Nanako and the fighting and fighting Tensei Baimao are very touching!
I personally like the pulling feeling in the mid-term! Oh, people live just to see this (satisfaction)
However, it's a bit regretful that the hostess didn't follow up in the later period, but the flaws are not hidden, it's a very interesting article! I just enjoyed reading two articles by the boiled fish boss!
However, because it is an indigenous Warring States period coconut cake, the heroine was still a little aggrieved when she did not grow up in the early stage, but in the later stage, it will be fine if she breaks the shackles of her thoughts! It's still fun afterward!
Tasty! In fact, I personally feel that this article is more delicious than the one above, but I don't know why my collection is not as good as the previous one. It's hard to explain.
It's also mainly about infrastructure! I personally feel that this book on infrastructure is more reasonable than the previous one! It's great to watch!
The Judy created in this book is really delicious! The description of the emotional line of the boiled fish boss is still amazing... Every article is very delicious [please]
This article has always been about time travel. Alas, this is the choice that all time travel protagonists have to face. Is it more painful to cut off the bonds of this life or to give up the past relatives and stay?
Let me have a good meal again, wow!
Delicious waste dog + sword setting! The plot is a bit thin but the characters and writing are outstanding! It's a delicious meal that you can finish in one sitting!
The writing style is my favorite! Just eat it fiercely! (Plunge into the bowl)
Boss, I really want to read your new articles! (Rolling)
This is a book that I have been following for many years but have not been able to finish. Currently under revision
I feel that the teacher has lost much enthusiasm after being unable to keep updating for a long time due to physical reasons. The current progress is about one-half to two-thirds. I personally feel that it is difficult to implement smoothly, but the early content is already very interesting!
There are really too few stories about the main character Shirou that combine Britain, America and Xingyue in such a unique way! Still recommend it!
Regarding the portrayal of Shirou, which deviates from the mainstream TV Asashi male protagonist image, the author has a lot of rigorous research on what he said. If you don't like this, it's better not to save it, but anyway, there are a lot of cheating articles in my book list, so I will recommend it! I didn't read this before just to keep my A (face covering) but now that there are so many serialized articles, it doesn't matter!
The main plot is to solve the problem of the integration of the two worlds. The Dead Apostles camp here is considered the biggest villain (?). In addition, there is also the Magic Association who is fighting openly and secretly to stir up trouble. The civil and military fights are very exciting, and the collision between the superhero and the magician is quite brilliant!
The slight flaw is that Bateman's opposition was so fierce that it was a bit OOC... I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, but I personally feel a little uncomfortable. But other than that it was great! The young couple has a very passionate relationship! There is also a polyamorous plot that the masked superhero has to savor!
99 For young lovers!
Very delicious three-in-one... Xiao Chu Xiao Chu, we love you!
The heroine is Chu Zihang's niece, and her strength is unparalleled. She is at T1 level in both actual combat and gaming.
The timeline can be regarded as the beginning of Day Talk + Full-time Pirates after the dust of the Dragon Clan has settled. The integration of the worldview is very beautiful, but the update frequency is touching (just look at this author's column to find out)
Highly recommended to take a look! I really like the description of the battle here! In the early stage, dragons + stolen pens accounted for more, and then they switched to full-time jobs.
Kindergarten principal, why don't you continue writing (crying)
I actually dropped this article before! This article is a super wonderful article that combines the dragon's stolen writing! This author writes Lu Mingfei so well! It has both the down-to-earth flavor that goes deep into the bone marrow and the edge of Chairman Lu! Boss, boss, you are really good at writing!
This is a small volleyball article with a small amount of black basket mixed in!
The protagonist is the main attacker with the Black Basket Hawkeye setting! He is a super athletic guy who has been shining in sports since he was a child, but he is also a radio guy!
This little greenie is so cute! A handsome guy with a gloomy appearance, excellent grades, a very good brain, but a completely dull radio type! The kind that would be scared by the dog and dare not come down from the tree!
I think the most eye-catching thing about this book is the emphasis on team friendship! Nowadays, there are many variety show stories about the big devil protagonist who is my enemy as long as I win the game, but this one is different and gives people a bright feeling!
Although Souzhen is very talented, he always enjoys the feeling of fighting side by side with his companions! At the beginning, it was because Diguang's group was not the same as him, so he decisively withdrew. He was a good kid who paid special attention to his companions!
If you are tired of reading about the main character of the Big Devil, come and read this book! Come and take a look at our dog-phobic radio-type natural genius Cannianchi Noodles!
Wow, I was pushed to read this book! I love long stories!
There are many private game integration settings! Kuromatsu Kurohagi Undercover Metropolitan Police Warning (but my heart is always in the red) If you can accept it, you can have a great time watching it!
It's written in flashback! Every time you meet a male guest again, you will dream about memories of the past! Needless to say delicious! The teacher still has a lot of cars in Hongbai (hiss)
Here are the loyal dog Scotland, the tamed young tamer Zero, the patient Kurohagi, the first love Kuromatsu, the accomplice Gin and the meta teacher Aka!
I've seen a lot of Ke Tong. Teacher Chi is responsible for meta breaking the dimensional wall. Teacher Chi, do you have any clues? (Hand the microphone)
After thinking about it carefully, Teacher Chi is a very reliable person that Currie is famous for keeping his mood stable and his IQ online no matter what happens. He is really reliable, Teacher Da Chi!
Personally, I think the best emotional lines are Xiao Ling's copy and the Akai line. If it's more emotional, the Hagi line is also good, but it makes me feel a little uncomfortable because of the brainwashing plot ()
As for the ending of this book, I didn't quite understand it... It was a bit messy, but overall it was very well written! Full five stars!
So delicious, so delicious... Kitano Yushou, you are like a god... So sad, so painful, so delicious
The first part is the Uchiha Uzumaki hybrid Shisui in the if parallel world, and the second part is the original line Shisui
Shisui's Shisui who pits himself against each other is delicious, Itachi Shisui who is the benchmark of the original Sa Itachi is delicious, and Madara Shisui who is an alternative grandfather and grandson is also delicious (especially the latter part of the second part is so delicious)
[Come on] Kitano Boating [Come on] Kitano Boating [Come on] Kitano Boating [Come on]
An incredibly beautiful book! I only watched the part about Death, and I personally felt it was quite good! I didn't watch the pirate part after that because I wasn't too interested in it. Personally, I feel that the fourth generation Itachi, the first generation and the second generation fit well with the characters and there is no OOC! Development is also interesting! You can take a look!
The dragon head guillotining you is as bad as digging a hole and not filling it (but you are better than the pit girl, at least you can dig the hole deep enough to bury me.) Although I often dig holes, the articles Nai He writes are really delicious.
This is a story about a person who travels through Mito with no memory and only retains his political instincts. She is a true feudal eldest woman, a terrifying palace-fighting political woman. She is underage but has been admitted to the Third Palace and Fourth House (?), And likes to train dogs. Although it's a scam, it's already delicious enough to have 400,000 words.
(After looking at this book list, there are quite a few deceptive articles. I have been really hurt by you, you evil people) (How can you still read so well after being deceived? I will think about it again and again and pray that you will come back and continue writing...)
This book is really, really great! Background setting, writing, plot development, and emotions. Hexagon Warrior! We are currently counting down to the end. The author should be used to writing a chapter for a while and then taking a break.
Every copy of this article is quite original, at least I can't find meal replacements anywhere on the internet! It spans Japanese comics, tokusatsu, and American dramas and movies, covering a wide range of topics but still easy to understand even if you haven't seen it!
Tsurukawa is really a very charismatic person, full of mysteries that attract people to explore and make people involuntarily give sincerity! I have to say that the friendship between the five police officers in this book is much easier to write than many CP books!
However, I need to be warned that what the author means by "he" may be different from the public meaning of "he". Currently, there is foreshadowing of the protagonist's death in the ending (or it is laid out from beginning to end). If you can't accept it, don't read it. It will be very heartbreaking.
There is no doubt about the gold content of Kitano Xingzhou [Hold your fist] Teacher, I would like to call you the god of foreshadowing [Hold your fist] [Hold your fist] [Hold your fist]
A perfect combination of very funny daily life and the main storyline! Although people will scream in pain unconsciously after being separated from daily life, it makes people feel very comfortable!
This is a cute Xingchuan who looks cool in the early stage and complains inwardly but later lets himself go and create a world!
Anyway, highly recommended! Everyone comes to see this cute little Hoshikawa Wasabi!
Attention to lightning protection! ! The protagonist is Danzo! ! I also made a lot of mental preparation before I clicked on it. After reading it, I sighed that it was indeed a mechanical squirrel!
This is Danzo who links the Demon Slayer World in a dream! I have been going back and forth between Demon Slayer and Naruto worlds since I was a child, so it is definitely different from the original Danzo!
Although Danzo still made the same choice at many key points and had similar emotional knots, the highlight of this book is the huge difference in the future caused by the detailed changes Demon Slayer brought to Danzo.
Because he helped the Demon Slayer Corps kill ghosts, he formed a deep friendship with Master Rin Taki's generation (although Yin Jade himself did not admit it), and under the influence of the protagonist's family, he subtly became a root leader who is not very similar to the original work. At least he is more humane than the original work (?)
Recently, I feel some ingenuity of Squirrel in it, such as Danzo accelerating the development of productivity in this world by learning from Demon Slayer, which has more advanced productivity. I think this design is a very clever way to complete how the original work achieved a leap from the Warring States Period to the modern era in seventy years! God has come!
If you can accept Danzo as the protagonist and like serious dramas and steady writing styles, be sure to read this book!
Shock! After reviewing the classics, I suddenly realized that I didn't order them all! Make up for it quickly
The center of the delicious scumbag Guang Ge has a previous work but it can be enjoyed without watching the previous work. What I recall the most is the copies of Naruto and Mingke. Different worlds have different flavors of scum.
There is no need to say much about the authority of Mr. Mingmu Yin. As long as you get this flavor, every article written by Mr. Mingmu Yin will be delicious. In other words, this style has almost no meal replacement. If you want to eat this kind of food, you can only find it in the teacher's column [Lie flat]
It pales in comparison to the one below... Because Xiaoshio has always been a minor... Tianyin's place is too scary with the full gravity position (especially Tianyin himself). It is delicious but the lightning points are also very obvious... Tianyin is the only STK in the group (the kind that Danzo himself would be scared of) and has a married but not widowed husband... Omnivores will eat very happily, but they may not be friendly to non-omnivorous hearts.
Because I read the following book first, I was not mentally prepared and was severely shocked by the gravity-based men and women in it... The staple food is in AiDian. If you can read two books for six yuan a month, what else can you say? However, the author has temporarily stopped updating, so you can wait a little longer.
Not only does Amane favor girls, but he also unconsciously attracts many boys who favor girls... (Sigh) If the teacher hadn't clearly written that it was impossible, I would have really wanted to eat the Yamanaka Father and Daughter Donburi (eyes moved) (whistle) The current progress is at the beginning of the Fourth War, and Amane is still the Sixth Hokage rushing to the shelves.
But to be honest, Kakashi has been persecuted by the author. I dare not read this book until what he says and does later on...
A rare perspective of Kirigakure Village! Xiao Chao is really cute and has slowly grown into a very powerful person!
The author's writing is very original! The plot is also very smooth! The author put it in afd at the end!
He is the staunch president of the Tailed Beast Lovers Association, so he doesn't care much about other people except Isofu and the people he cares about. The point of demining is that he is not very friendly to other villages except Sunagakure Village. If you care, watch carefully!
But it's a really nice article [please]
Oh, yes, although Xiaoshio's love is basically with Isofu, I still fell in love with Kimimaro... (Is this right? It seems wrong, yes, yes, yes, yes)
Edited again:
After reading another book, I realized that the author was quite restrained... Is it a sequelae of reading the previous book? I always feel that when Koushio is 16 years old, Kimimaro Chojuro and others will have to recommend themselves to pillow mats and crawl into bed... (Covers head) Amane is still too energetic and not suitable for children! It feels like Xiaochao would cover her eyes when she saw the Tianyin set, look at the group of people through her fingers, and then shout that they are vulgar!
A very well written article! Very delicious! The kind that can be chewed over and over again!
Kana is the woman who can be my sister. Jpg
OE, but if it's a love line, it's considered a full line of BE until the end of the text.
But there will be more extras! There is probably a love line extra line at the moment!
Although there is a system, Kana's will has never been influenced by external things. Everything she does is what she wants to do and she does it. The fact that she is not coerced by the outside world is great!
The BE of all emotional lines is also her own choice. Although it hurts the readers, it should be regarded as TE for Kana who pursues the uniqueness of feelings.
What particularly touches me personally is that when Neji is likely to regard himself as the only one, Kana chooses to let him establish more connections with other people because life would be too sad if a person regards someone as the only one (careless). You are really charming Kana-nee [please]
It's breathtaking that all the members are patriarchal... Such heavy emotions, it makes people feel so good.
It's a shocking and delicious Brother's Twist. The writing is quite exquisite. It's a type that I personally like very much.
It's delicious, no need to say more, okay [eating melon]
Second editor:
I recently watched the New World episode and it made me so happy... I want to rewatch it and write a new recommendation!
It's related to lobe, well jj I can't stand other lobe fans, but this one is a pretty good integration of the worldview...?
200,000+, It can also be regarded as finished (if you look at the author's latest update, this one may also be a scam)
It's not even Yuan Geng (Fu forehead), the former professional tennis player traveled through time and is very powerful [Like]
You can watch it as finished (How can I fix the love story extra that I want to see in your comment section?)
Although the male protagonist is described as being like a primary school chick who has been talking about finding a girlfriend, in reality it is not that at all. It is more like a child with an adult core pretending to be a normal middle school student. The girl he is obsessed with is the young Yanagi, the one he falls in love with at first sight is Yukimura, and the beauty contestant falls in love with Fuji at first sight. He has never had any contact with serious girls (except for his younger sister)
Because he is a professional player, it is inevitable that he did not take the junior high school competition seriously at first. Later, he was convinced by Yukimura (?) And then he started to take up the matter seriously. Moreover, because the thinking of professional players lacks some sense of passion, he looks further and cares more about (Yukimura's) physical health and future career lifespan.
Anyway, you can still take a look at it and just treat it as finished. The more I watch it, the more I feel that Yukimura is a cp, and Yanagi might as well eat it up
The main plot is to destroy the winery, and there is less about the basketball game. The captain is the main character, but it is a group portrait. The writing style gives people a very down-to-earth feeling! Good looking (like)
Fate update, but the author is at least still writing... It shouldn't be a scam...? (Probably)
An author with a very distinctive writing style, highly recommended
Although this update frequency is impressive and you can't tell from the column whether it will be a scam in the end, but————This person is really good at writing about Chairman Lu! ! ! Just like the other article in the column, it would be a loss if you don't read it! ! !
Where else can I find an author who writes with such a Jiangnan flavor!
Well, at least the first chapter is over (eyes move)
Why are there so few good-looking Wangba fans... Anyway, they are very good-looking.
Players are simply terrifying mud monsters, torturing opponents and teammates equally.
Wow, Boss Xiaomou, you are really good at writing. Each line has its own characteristics, and players have their own growth in each line.
Second editor:
Xiaomou Boss should be finished in the near future! This summer is coming to an end. (Lie)
If you like Disco Elysium style text, please don't miss it!
Hibiki is a caramel bread dog who is so cute without even realizing it! The following suspected spoilers are just my personal thoughts. If you don't want to read spoilers, please don't expand!
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Alas, following the teacher's lof update, I feel really mixed after reading it all the way.
The first part is very interesting and funny, but the closer to the ending, the more painful it becomes.
At present, lof has been updated to the end of the text. The boss be thinks that I am really a little bit dead.
The teacher's worldview setting is very complete, and even such unscientific game settings are finally rounded out by science.
24 Skills, 24 sugar buns disappointed with the world, 24 connections, but only one chose to give up restoration, Hibiki Tobikawa. This is Hibiki Tobikawa who has more ties than any other World Destroyer.
This caramel Pomeranian will rub people's hands when they are depressed and stand up when they are in trouble.
There is no need to provide him with a good living environment or anything else when raising him. This is a dog who is afraid of being alone. As long as he doesn't feel lonely, he will give his sincerity.
A very well written article! It can be seen from the text that the author has covered a wide range of topics! He has his own insights in social sciences and humanities! It's just that the updates are irregular and a bit annoying [please]
CP is brilliant!
I read this a long time ago! It was shocking at the time, and it's the same now when I look back on it! But the teacher's writings tend to be more of a stream of consciousness, with a lot of sugar hidden in the gaps between the words [Please]
The heroine is a bug in Fumino's world, an invincible science student. In the main world line, the Tanizaki brothers and sisters love each other. In addition to Ango, the heroine in Fumino's world line has a whole scumbag (?) Attitude that does not respond and is not responsible and only likes to write questions (Actually, Ango's line does not count as a response, but she was tricked by a naughty child to surpass all the male guests to achieve a certain achievement: D)
Personally, I like the line where everyone has memories of the parallel world, the Black Ran line (the little boss is so cute!) And the last Ango line!
There are dungeons of Naruto Demon Slayer and Onmyoji (I skipped this part and I am not sure if it is Onmyoji). It is probably because the connection is too close, so there are no volumes. There will be additional questions inserted in the middle (actually, even if it is an if in the dungeon), so it will appear a bit confusing, but after straightening out the logic, it will be clearer!
Teacher Baishatang is forever a god!
The salty fish detective is not actually the sixth person in the police academy. The protagonist of the police academy chapter has always maintained a relatively distant state and has no heart-to-hearts with anyone. Only Yuga is close to him in a sense (by virtue of the fate of a bamboo horse sent from heaven). The protagonist's behavior seems to be wanton and lawless, but in essence he is still a person who will use 100% of his efforts to repay the kindness he receives.
In fact, from the proportion of the police academy chapter, it can be seen that the subsequent plot is a bit rushed. It may also be that the teacher changed the outline to save Hagihara Kenji, so the later development can be seen as a bit overwhelmed (such as Haibara Ai's plot adjustment), but the flaws are still not concealed! I will always give Teacher Baishatang a hundred favors!
And there is still Teacher Baishatang's most distinctive non-CP emotional line! Haga Hagiwara and Kagemitsu are both delicious with different tastes! Yamiami!
Teacher Baishatang's masterpiece! Very good He Xue makes the reader's brain spin!
I personally like Teacher Bai Shatang's writing very much. The plot design and writing style are very excellent, and the emotions described are also very delicate and vivid. What follows is a spoiler for the main plot.
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This article is the one that I personally feel is the best in the spin-off that combines comics, forums, and plot development.
I feel that this should be the perfect combination that Teacher Bai Shatang carefully studied and wrote after practical exploration in the previous passerby wine.
The main development line of this article is that the kid He Xue, an international student, forged a deep friendship with both parties in the battle between 221B and Moriarty. With the help of comic plug-ins and the protagonist's own maximum layout ability, he also ushered in he without any danger.
In fact, what is more interesting about this article is the emotional line between He Xue and everyone. Although there is no cp, every emotion is very sincere. He Xue, who has been treated as an outcast by his parents since he was a child and has been constantly being demanded, meets someone who truly cherishes him after making the choice to study abroad. In Group 221B, Sherlock Watson and Mrs. Hudson both regard Lanny as family, and the Moriarty family gradually treats him as a "trustworthy friend" from the initial wariness (especially Louis (pointing)).
Alas, I have to say that Louis and Lanny really look like children who are secretly in love but are afraid that their elders will find out! This kind of writing without cp is more delicious than pure love, which is also a major characteristic of Teacher Baishatang (thumbs up)
However, a small flaw is that the parallel time and space plot was not further developed (maybe I didn't understand it). It is helpless that the story between Xavier and the American version of Fuhua ended in tragedy.
Anyway, highly recommended! Undoubtedly five stars!
Baishatang Teacher Chicken Legs are here!
This article of Passerby Real Wine is probably the teacher's first attempt at the comic forum style, so it seems relatively immature, and the plot is obviously lacking. The early and middle stages are good, but the later development is a bit confusing, and the ending is hasty but understandable.
Anyway, you can take a look! The plot is reasonable and the writing style is mature! (But personally I prefer Salted Fish Detective)
Hand drying room we love you!
Teacher Fang is really a very talented and powerful writer. Whether it is this early article or the more mature Chuunibyou later, you can see the aura in it.
This article mainly focuses on the progress of the emotional line, so it does not focus on the plot of the confrontation with the organization, so it only gives a passing score, but in terms of the depiction of emotions, I will give Teacher Fang a one! Hundred! Faint!
Of course, early authors inevitably had immaturity in their emotional descriptions. The ups and downs in the relationship between Ling Dong and Ling Dong were mainly due to Jing Guang's death in the early stage (this was a hurdle that could not be overcome after all), and the estrangement in the game in the later stage (although Dong seemed inconsistent in many things, he was quite serious about the game). In the end, the game and reality merged and his younger brother was successfully resurrected, which is gratifying and congratulatory [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
All in all, it's still highly recommended! Come on, come on, let me fall in love with this sinful woman in the hand drying room——!
[I will write the evaluation of the second grade disease carefully after re-reading it]
Mechanical squirrel, you are the god who combines the worldviews of Britain, America and Xingyue!
It is not difficult to tell from this book list that I am actually a Yuepi (face covering). It is rare to see an author who can so perfectly combine the world view of Xingyue and other worlds. Mr. Mechanical Squirrel, you are really a god (fall to the ground)
Detailed and rigorous settings are basically a common feature of mechanical squirrel novels. The plot description may be a little dull, but the development is absolutely logical. As for the emotional line, this book also develops quite naturally. I recommend it!
The first in the mechanical squirrel teacher's curse series!
I actually don't remember the exact plot, but it should still be fun!
Wait for me to chew the cud another day [shy]
The second part of the Mechanical Squirrel Teacher Curse Series!
An article that combines Steins; Gate and Shuai! Quite rigorous science! Very much the personal style of the mechanical squirrel teacher!
Mechanical squirrel type moon & comprehensive British and American! It also brought a little good sign!
What impressed me most about this article was the lack of taste [shyness]
Don't be fooled by Xiao Ming's secondary drama in the copywriting and text! This article is really beyond imagination, okay? [Please] I love this article so much. Wait until I take the time to write about it one day.