
[Naruto] The Ideal Flower Burial
[火影]理想的花葬
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- Completed
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- 387k Words
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- No CP
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- Modern Era
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72Chapters
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It was so satisfying to read the ending from more than 40 chapters in one go... It was inevitable that my nose would feel swollen at the end. Although the teacher said that Luo Luo in the main text is already in the "completion tense", the growth of Luo Luo in this fanfic is more memorable to me than other "growth-oriented protagonists" I have read. Not to mention the transformation from a sword in the Warring States Period to a human being, even from the first chapter, Luo Luo is gradually changing... He has learned pain and love, and learned how to be a human being. However, even if it's painful, even if it's love, you have to go all the way stubbornly. This is not exclusive to Uchiha. Rolo is really a... Very Uchiha Uchiha. At first, I thought he was calm and indifferent, until the teacher wrote about his obsession and hard work, how dazzling and Uchiha Luoluo...! This attitude of being unable to compromise with reality, this arrogance of being unwilling to compromise, Luo Luo is indeed the child brought up by Izuna and Madara. This is what a villain protagonist should look like. As I was reading, I seemed to be able to keep seeing Luo Luo say "I don't want to endure it anymore." Therefore, when I saw the teacher choose to start the ending with the Chuunin exam instead of following the original timeline as many fans prefer, I completely felt: This is the real Luo Luo. After seeing the light, who can endure the rotten world for even one second? Determining to wait until the Chunin Exam seems to be the author's biggest compromise (laughs). Luo Luo did have a moment where he came alive in words. The confrontation and entanglement of beliefs between Luo Luo and Shisui/Itachi/Obito/Sasuke also shocked me... The teacher did not follow the easiest way and send them away one by one according to the original work, but actually analyzed their characters and allowed them to find new possibilities under such a premise. Shisui didn't die in Nanga River, Itachi didn't kill his clan members, Obito didn't know the Infinite Tsukuyomi, and Sasuke hadn't had time to grow up yet and didn't have so much pain. But what they did was simply what they would do "under the circumstances." Especially Obito left the deepest impression on me. He is still the stubborn Obito who can't let go of himself or the past. Maybe he has always been accompanied by Kakashi in this world, but his self-analysis in the chapters of playing Abi still made me happy. Later, Luoluo told him the truth about that night in the cave, which was exactly what Obito himself would have thought... This is really wonderful! The reason why this fanfic shocked me so much is that the teacher did not choose the traditional "cheating". Luo Luo is just an ordinary person. He does not have the power to turn mountains and seas like Madara and Hashirama. He has no system, no time travel, no thinking and foresight from another world like other fans. The only advantage he has in the feature film is one: time. Before Itachi/Shisui/Sasuke/Obito were born, he had already received training and guidance from Madara/Izuna. During the three generations after the establishment of Konoha, the former ninjas were sleeping underground. He took advantage of this period of time when he had no companions and no enemies to grow, and he studied hard. The success of Luo Luo's plan was not due to other reasons, but to the layout and foreshadowing he had made on and off for decades. As if Black Zetsu spent thousands of years fabricating lies for the ninja world, Luo Luo spent his entire life and spent two lifetimes trying to catch up with the real geniuses and wise men. The last successful piece of the puzzle was also completed by the Mangekyou Sharingan: Luo Luo broke the information gap created by Black Zetsu. This ability designed by the teacher is really just right... It is difficult to gain Luo Luo in battle. It just gives a Susana, a must-have ticket for Uchiha to participate in the later battles. It is also mostly unused outside of combat. However, the only time it shined was when it laid the foundation for Luo Luo's victory and gave Luo Luo a platform to compete with Black Zetsu on an equal footing. Is it a big hang? I think it is or is not the case. It is outrageous to see the timeline in the original work that covers a huge amount of information. You must know that the battle of ninjas is a battle with poor information. However, this is the only way Luo Luo can make a comeback without forcibly destroying the balance of combat power. Now, they are equal. Opposite Luoluo and Madara are Black Zetsu, who has created an information gap for thousands of years, and are the accomplices of the wise men of the entire ninja world. What Luoluo got is the ticket to stand on a fair stage with them. Luo Luo is the most miserable original Naruto fan protagonist I have ever seen. Looking at all the fans, there is probably no one who has been close to death three times like him: the first time he lost his life, the second time he was penetrated through the neck and then used Izanagi, and the third time he was finally spared his life by Madara's hands. He has always been miserable, the entire ninja world is against him, and his allies have different intentions. When he chooses this path, he is destined to walk on the thorns of pain. However, Luo Luo does not feel that he is pitiful. Death is an information gap that can be exploited, and the alienation of his allies is just a motive that can be exploited. Even all those who have brought him pain, Luo Luo will eventually let them obtain eternal happiness in their dreams. This kind of vitality and persistence that seems to be a demon are really very attractive to me. Uchiha Roro wants to take advantage of his fate even if he sees it! To be honest, I was really, really excited when I saw Luo Luo with a knife running through his neck and lying on the ground telling Minato and the others about his ideals. It's like there's a picture moving in my mind. What was the villain's realization and emotion about life before his death? Maybe so. But what followed was Luo Luo's fighting instinct to seize the opportunity immediately after confiding. It was such a joy to watch Luo Luo dying and being knocked down... I've watched the final ending several times and I'm still a little confused. The change of perspective is as beautiful as a movie shot. I really like the ending chosen by the teacher for Luo Luo. Luo Luo knows that he cannot be the savior. He cannot project other gods and cannot completely control the will of others (perhaps because Luo Luo has never been a knife holder before, he has always been the knife. This knowledge makes him unable to make the best use of other gods). Luo Luo is and can only be a knife that helps Madara/Izuna realize his ideals. Luo Luo's final struggle is not his selfish desire as a human being. And Madara, the ruthless and ruthless Uchiha Madara who gave up everything, seemed to have a touch of tenderness towards the sword on the eve of the arrival of the moon: after all, Luo Luo was the only person who accompanied him from the beginning to the end. So Madara would say that he saw Sasuke who looked very similar to Izuna, even if it wasn't actually that similar, but this is what Madara once admitted to the blind Luo Luo: You will see Izuna's appearance, even in the infinite moon reading. Madara will say that your kindness has been repaid, which eliminates Luo Luo's regret for leaving Madara alone and blames himself. He allows Luo Luo to go to that dreamland without regrets. Luo Luo is stubborn about the infinite Tsukuyomi. The reason is simply that 1 Izuna let Luo Luo follow Madara forever, 2 Madara promised to let him see the appearance of Izuna, and 3 the world of Infinite Tsukuyomi will be a peaceful and perfect world. The first two were satisfied by Madara's mercy, and Luo Luo could finally go to his beautiful dream without nostalgia... Regarding the other gods used by Luo Luo in the end, this is also where I am most confused about the ending. What kind of other gods did Luoluo use: I think he wanted Madara to abandon all fighting spirit and become a more complete god than the Six Paths Sage with selfish desires. Because after Luo Luo experienced everything, he understood that people will eventually have fighting spirit, and Madara is inevitable. As long as the fighting spirit exists, Tsukuyomi will not be a perfect and peaceful world. So he used other gods to make Madara lose such thoughts. Madara may have accepted it, so he gave Luo Luo, who tried to disobey him, the last mercy, because he found that Luo Luo just wanted to contribute to the beautiful world in his dream. Maybe Madara didn't accept it, because there are still ninjas in the dream world with A-level missions. This may be just a false peace where everyone survives. War and pain never disappear, but they just don't come to Luo Luo. Or maybe, that technique was not from another god, and Luo Luo did not activate it successfully. He just gave Madara a possible chance to dream. Madara walked to the crow and also to the tea house. This was Luo Luo's perspective. There were Senju, Uchiha, and a family of three making snacks. However, Madara never appeared head-on in Luo Luo's perspective. Because Madara is a bystander, an outsider, a person who cannot appear in Luo Luo's subconscious. In the end, I really liked the confrontation between Rolo and Nagato. I have read many fan stories, and most of them had Nagato side with Naruto in the end. The Nagato in this article is really something I have never seen before. When I first saw it, it was very unbelievable that he chose Luo Luo, and even took the initiative to sacrifice his life for this even after knowing that he had been assigned a life. But when I thought about it carefully, I felt that it was indeed reasonable. Nagato found that everything he did was just a repeat of another person who had failed. Now he was going to fail, but before he died, he could still contribute to another effective plan that brought peace. The plot is really complex, bold, and equally shocking. It's a pleasure to meet a fellow teacher. After reading it this morning, I kept thinking about what to write, so I wrote out everything I thought. I hope the teacher won't think it's too verbose. Looking forward to seeing you again on the Internet!
Uchiha Madara cosplayer who didn't appear in the last world line, will he finally appear in this world line 🐶 Speaking of Kamijou, it seems that there is no Uchiha Madara and other ancestors. I really want to see Luo Luo and Madara fighting side by side on the battlefield, and Luo Luo wearing a visor is called Uchiha's trouble dog!
The third war has come to an end! Summarize the different trends between the current work and the original work and do a little personal analysis! 1. Obito line. The biggest difference in this article so far is that Obito returns to Konoha. Although Obito is back, there are too many doubts about Obito and it is completely impossible to clear him up. How did he survive under the boulder? Where did the material related to Hashirama's cells that filled his body come from? Who saved him with this substance? What happened during the missing months? These are all questions that cannot be answered at all after being washed by genjutsu. Judging from the value of Madara's genjutsu, it is estimated that Yamanaka's secret art will not be able to dig out this information from Obito's mind. The fact that he is currently under house arrest should be the result of the struggle between the Fourth Generation and Uchiha, otherwise he would have been used as experimental material by Danzo and Orochimaru. But for such a long time, he has not been trusted by the people he loves in the village he wants to protect, and it seems that Ye Lin's death has been hidden for now. Obito's wave may be bigger. It is unclear whether this place will switch to Eye of the Moon. It's also possible that Kakashi and Namikaze Minato helped him untie his knot. However, the combination of Obito Mangekyō Sharingan + Wood Release is still quite powerful in combat, and I don't think the upper management will keep him locked up. Maybe there will be a turn for the better later with the help of the fourth generation. It depends on whether the time bomb explodes to get the Eye of the Moon or whether it becomes Konoha's new generation of Kage-level combat power. 2. Dark line. Luo Luo here in Uchiha is equivalent to the ecological niche of the original Shisui. I wonder if Houdou Zang will recruit him. The difference between Luo Luo and Shisui is that he doesn't have much love for Konoha or Uchiha. He stays in Konoha now and has no objection to the Will of Fire just because of his past with Hashirama Tobirama. He joins ANBU for Uchiha just because of his love for Izuna and because of his last wish to care about Uchiha's future. Compared with the Eye of the Moon, everything can only be compromised. So even if Danzo wants to kill someone, Luo Luo can definitely kill him and then defect. 3. The Nine-Tails Rebellion Luo Luo is different from the original Obito performing Eye of the Moon. Obito took advantage of Kushina's pregnancy to free the Nine-Tails, which led to the Nine-Tails Rebellion. I personally feel that the purpose was more to cut off the past than to collect tailed beasts. At this time, Obito actually still had a chance to turn around and everything could turn around, but in order to cut off his retreat and prevent himself from wavering, he devoted himself to the Eye of the Moon, coupled with some love and hatred for Namikaze Minato, and then launched the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Luo Luo does not have so many emotional factors. Sasuke has been born and Kushina's pregnancy is not far away. The three tails have not yet been reborn. It is not wise to attack the nine tails who need the final seal at this time. Therefore, I feel that the chaos of the nine tails will not appear in this game. Of course, if there are other factors, then it will be regarded as my analysis is wrong hahahaha. 4. Uchiha genocide line Finally, there is the Uchiha genocide line. At present, it seems that Uchiha radicals are already showing signs, but with the mature combat power of Luo Luo entering the fourth generation of ANBU, it should be alleviated. However, the symptoms are not cured, and the focus is still on the high-level game. It is difficult for young talents like Luo Luo, Shisui, and Itachi to enter the circle of power. However, because of Izuna's last wish, Luoluo would definitely not take the initiative to help exterminate the clan like Obito, who had no feelings for the clan. And if the Nine-Tails Rebellion does not happen as I guessed before, then the Uchiha clan, which has been immortal for four generations and is not suspected of controlling the Nine-Tails, will not be eliminated from the center of power so quickly. With the neutral Fugaku mediating among them, it will still be difficult to annihilate the clan as long as Itachi doesn't have a sudden whim. The boss's writing is still very good! It's so exciting every time I watch the updates! Waiting for the next update 💪 💪 💪
Will Izuna be reincarnated by the broken earth in this book? Expect
Guess Issei Shisui was given away by Luo Luo 🐶 Always treat others differently!
Spending one right eye to gain insight into all possible hidden dangers in the future... It's really worth it, at least there won't be anything like Black Zetsu's backstab.
I feel like it can be seen as an if line. Was it Shisui who used the Sharingan to change Luo Luo's will, causing the infinite Tsukuyomi to not happen? 🐶
Oh my God, the flowers are finished!!!! I have been following up on this article since a long time ago, and even wrote several long reviews because of the teacher's plot. Now that it is finished, of course I have to submit a long review! At the beginning, I would be scratching my head every other day, but by the end I was able to enjoy it every day and it was so enjoyable! This article is really perfectly written. I really like watching the plot and being a fan of the main drama. Unfortunately, I have never encountered such a delicious meal before. I am really happy to encounter this article and meet the teacher...! I don't know if Luo Luo's Warring States Past will have any extras, but the main text alone is already very complete! Instead of writing about the Warring States period, only a few words about the past are interspersed in the main text, but it also leaves a lot of room for imagination. Naruto Episode 720 This article also has 72 chapters! What a perfect number! Not only does Luo Luo, as the protagonist of the villain, have a complete character arc, but everyone who opposes the protagonist also has their own highlights. The final battle was not a one-sided crushing, and everyone tried their best. This is really very original! For example, two of Luo Luo's former partners, Ningzu Raido and Yamashiro Aoba, used their knowledge of him to assassinate him. Everyone, no matter the supporting role or the protagonist, has their own independent thinking, and the collision of everyone's thoughts is very exciting, such as the debate and antagonism between Luo Luo and Shisui, and the suspicion between Itachi and Luo Luo. They are all written with great tension! I would like to call this article the fanfic that has the most original style of Naruto!!! And the insertion of the if dream in the middle was a stroke of genius. I have been regurgitating those paragraphs. It seems that ever since Danzo was killed and Luoluo began to reveal his unknown side to people he knew well (Shisui), the whole plot became more and more absorbing. It's fascinating... To be honest, I just like to watch this kind of plot where a familiar person takes off his mask to reveal a strange face that you have never seen before. This kind of drama is still so cool... I have repeatedly savored the plot of Senju Tobirama shouting Uchiha Roro. It's really cool! Although it is a pity that there is no plot in Shippuden, after all, how could a butterfly as big as Luo Luo not set off a hurricane in the world? It would be unsightly to force the timeline to Shippuden. Showing his fangs in the chuunin exam just now is the result of Luo Luo's repeated endurance XD Sensei's plot control is perfect, and paired with the excellent writing style, it's simply delicious... Every time I see Sensei's battle descriptions, I really feel like I'm watching an anime, the storyboarding is so strong! Madara is also full of force in this article. Even if he only appears in the last part, the pressure is not overwhelming. Everyone, including Luo Luo who is standing next to him, is afraid of him. Izuna, who can truly stand by his side and always support him, has left long ago. In the end, he brought infinite Tsukuyomi to the world alone... It is also very sad to see Luo Luo shed tears. The last paragraph describes Luo Luo being moved and hesitant by his parents' selfless "love". This is really touching... A knife that has no father or mother and only knows how to kill can truly feel the warmth of home brought by its parents after being reborn. To be honest, I thought he would kill Noriko Inaba after the Chunin Exams to avoid being disturbed by his emotions, but I didn't expect that he would throw them into the heretic golem and let them take them into the dream world without disturbing the layout. Noriko Inaba and Luo Luo's descriptions of family life seem to always contain metaphors, but the love and warmth are real. In that infinite Tsukuyomi dream, will Noriko Inaba and Maki live a happy life together? Thank you teacher for bringing such a wonderful story! I don't know if Sensei will continue to write about Naruto, but I will always follow you!!!
Absolutely amazing... Absolutely amazing... Such a perfect article... Boss, why are you so good at writing...
What a disaster it is for a fourth-generation couple to have a child. This time, there is no Obito to stir up trouble secretly. It turns out that Danzo covets the position of Hokage, but Luo Luo may be pushing the situation and adding fuel to the flames. But with the super mobile Yondaime + Obito Kakashi, Danzo, you can choose your own way of death right now. Even the third generation can't protect you this time. My wife is delivering a baby, aren't you trying to trick someone into death? Tsk, tsk, tsk