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1 时 Shizhou Yan TurongDanmei (BL)354k WordsCompleted 784Favorites774Clicks/ch203Nutrition

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"A big dog that neither parent wants, is attracted by the neighbor's arrogant cat master. He tells him to get lost but can't help but stare at him from a distance. . . The cat takes care of him when he is sick, the cat buys him food when he is hungry, and the cat stays with him when he is sad. "Okay," the dog decided, "You are so fierce but you are kind to me. I will follow you! From now on, you will be my home!" 9.0 I like the writing style, I like the campus setting, I like the tsundere cat x clingy dog fighting each other CP, I read it in one go~ It's so cool! Campus writing about growing up together and becoming adults in society is my weakness, especially about the ambiguous entanglement of two cowardly and brave boys. I can't get enough of this sour and sweet emotion, no matter how many times I read it, I will never get tired of it. Although the plot development is cliché, the characters are distinctive, charming, and have brains and mouths. It makes you read with gusto and pleasure, and makes you want to keep reading. I also like the author's description of the protagonist's state of mind, that kind of lonely and fragile state of mind, but knowing that he has no room for willfulness, but because he is favored by the other party, he only acts coquettishly in front of the other party to win favor. So annoying! In fact, it is a bit regretful that the author did not detail their college life and life-long events after adulthood (ahem, getting a marriage certificate), but the emotional line of their chance encounter in high school, pursuing each other, living together and establishing a relationship still made me enjoy reading it! I still lament that this kind of writing style is flexible and smooth, and the author can write characters with full personality, and also knows how to make appropriate use of bloody plots. However, the good writing written by the author is not popular. Although it can't be said to be a masterpiece, it's still very interesting!

2 离 Divorce ZhizhounanDanmei (BL)254k WordsCompleted 1.6kFavorites1.2kClicks/ch861Nutrition

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"The city mouse broke up and fell in love. He decided to go to the countryside for a change of scenery and see the scenery, but he didn't expect to be fascinated by the country mouse. The two mice were very sticky. As long as there is each other in the city and countryside, they are home." 7.0 The writing is mediocre and slow-moving, but sometimes you don't necessarily need a carefree plot to taste the emotions. I won't say that the writing is bad or good: the charm of the characters, the development of the plot, and the sweetness of the emotional line are quite good. It's just that the author's writing style is relatively immature, and it feels like a bunch of unnutritious details and unnecessary verbosity written just to fill a page when an elementary school student writes a summer diary. No matter how big or small things are, they should be described to the readers one by one, and the scenes that can be described in 10 words should be written into a 1,000-word article. In the latter part, after the protagonist was awkward because of his friend's needless meddling, he decided to confess his affection to his boyfriend again. He sang "The Moon Represents My Heart" in front of a group of married straight men and kissed him deeply for two chapters after singing. This is someone else's birthday party! So weird, so embarrassing. I was so embarrassed by the author's disgusting trick that I felt goosebumps all over my body. If the author hadn't kept reminding me that this squeamish love interest was a middle-aged man in his forties, I really wouldn't have guessed. In fact, I can still digest it all within one chapter, but the problem is that the author likes to spread out this kind of pretentious plot and write it slowly to test the reader's endurance. The characters are quite simple and thin. Although the charm of the characters is smoothly expressed, it does not feel like the author is trying to write about a mature man in his forties falling in love. Instead, it feels like a middle school student and an elementary school student falling in love for the first time. It's cute, it's sweet, it's sweet, but it doesn't have the sense of involvement of a real person. It's more like a little girl's dream about the love story of a man in his prime. If you compare the main text with the latest extras, you can feel that the author's writing style and description of the characters have improved. It's not too awkward or too verbose, and the character's mentality and thinking are more in line with the attitude that one should have at that age. In fact, when evaluating the extras alone, I would give it a higher score of 7.7 Than the main story. Overall, I quite like this story. Although I almost gave up on it earlier because it was too slow, clunky, and wordy, once I read the ambiguous relationship between the male protagonist and the straight guy, it became much more interesting. But apart from the sweet daily life between the two of them, there are no other highlights in this article.

3 不 Unequal Relationship Yan TurongDanmei (BL)169k WordsCompleted 174Favorites227Clicks/ch105Nutrition

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"The old cow wants to eat young grass, and the young man wants to feed the young cow. They are not equal in age, economic and career, but with a hot love, they can warm up the heart that has been frozen for many years." It can be regarded as a short but not long side story about Brother Qi and his young husband in "Cheng Er" + the full text is free, so I don't plan to rate it strictly. It has more than 4 stars. If the story is unfolded and written into 500,000 words, it will be a solid 5-star story. The sour and sweet relationship between the two of them is no less than that of Qi Laoer and Cheng Er. The character of Brother Qi is full of tragic beauty. When he was young, he experienced too much and sacrificed too much in order to survive, and his life became an empty, lonely and heartless man. Except for money, interests and his younger brother, nothing could enter his long-dead heart. But after meeting Qu Yue, his cold walking zombie was slowly awakened by the other person's infatuation, and he slowly and timidly fell in love with this man who was 15 years younger than him without saying a word. Although he is an old fox who knows how to pamper his lover, he does not know how to express his melted heart to his lover except for material satisfaction. On the contrary, his little husband feels that he is indifferent and that no matter how hard he tries, he can never get into his heart. In fact, compared to the emotional line between Qi Lao Er and Cheng Er, I think the sour relationship between Qi Lao Er and his young husband is more touching, but it is a pity that the twists and turns of their relationship are not as detailed as the younger brother CP, although everything that should be written is written! It's still very complete, but I'm just greedy and want to see a more complete and complete HE. If you want to watch "Cheng Er" but don't know if it suits your taste, you can start with the story of Brother Qi. Although it is a short story, it is full of content and touching emotional lines. It strengthens the character creation in "Cheng Er" instead of weakening it. (You can check out the locked chapters on the author's website. I strongly recommend everyone to check it out. It's worth it [bad laugh])

4 程 Cheng'er Yan TurongDanmei (BL)554k WordsCompleted 581Favorites781Clicks/ch596Nutrition

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"The scumbag in the younger years looks at the scumbag in the upper years. The bunny tries to ride on the paper tiger, but the little rabbit can't get off the tiger. Don't think that you won't be caught in the upper years. Otherwise, you can ride it for the rest of your life~" 9.6 Front: Spicy! Middle: Great! Behind: Sweet! Why is no one reading good articles? This Wen Bure is really a mistake for mutual attack lovers [crying] The two protagonists are the young playboy Neptune and the upper-level ruffian and villain, the scumbag overcomes the scumbag and the evil takes over the evil. The young master is smart and coquettish, the boss is boring and coquettish, the two of them are coquettish and spicy, only because the other is weak and only because the other is serious, I watched it with gusto! I love the author's writing style! He is flexible and flexible, writes characters with strong sexual tension, and knows how to capture the details. He is not afraid of writing about physical attraction, and he also knows how to write about emotional pull. The supporting characters all have their own stories and lives. Some people may think the plot is too high, or the author is too wordy, but I like this kind of characters who have a sense of existence beyond the scope of the protagonist. Although the two people are messed up, they have their own principles and ideas. Because of their growing environment and their own problems, they both have different expectations and understandings of emotions, causing their emotions to diverge. After hurting the other person because of his own shortcomings, he realizes that his selfishness and unreasonableness have caused an indelible shadow on the other person. They sincerely want to be better to each other because they don't want to hurt this scarred beloved again. This kind of sweet and sour plot of the prodigal son returning home and chasing his husband in the crematorium was very enjoyable and enjoyable to watch, especially as the writing in this article is delicate and vivid. I can feel that they are sincerely working hard for their lover, becoming stronger and more patient, and thinking about each other. I really like the growth and adjustment process of the main characters over the years. Most of the articles only stop at one stage of the protagonists' lives, but this article deliberately allows readers to see them grow from teenagers and young adults to two adult men who still maintain their original youthful enthusiasm for each other. I really like this feeling of falling more in love with someone as they grow older, and I also like how the author writes that when Nia is the same age as Nia when he first met Nia, but because of the company of his lover and his own accumulated experience, he has a completely different feeling than Nia despite being the same age as Nia. (Let's clear things up first: the heartless man at the top and the rotten cucumber at the bottom. Before they decided that they could only tolerate each other and no one else in their lives, the article did write about their "interactions" with others. Not much, not deep, and it is in line with the character's mentality and logic at that time, so although I have CP mysophobia, I feel uncomfortable watching it, but I can accept it. I don't think it is a red flag, but I still say it politely) If you want to watch "Cheng Er" but don't know if it suits your taste, you can start with the story of Brother Qi. Although it is a short story, it is full of content and touching emotional lines. It strengthens the character creation in "Cheng Er" instead of weakening it.

5 剑 The Sword King Begins to Let Himself Go YouqinjunDanmei (BL)249k WordsCompleted 5kFavorites4.8kClicks/ch2.7kNutrition

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"The boss wants to retire, the boss wants to find a boyfriend, the boss gives up on himself and ends his level 99 role, and starts the second episode to chase his boyfriend (Xianxia version)" 6.5 The plot is mediocre and boring, but the setting is quite interesting. The relationship between the protagonists is the most exciting part, especially the physical interaction between the young lovers. The author writes Xianxia with a subtle modern flavor. Although the story is not special, it is not cliché. The problem is that the author's writing is not strong. He only follows the plot dryly but is not very good at creating atmosphere or describing the emotional fluctuations of the characters, making the interesting parts boring. I just read more than 200,000 words, but it feels like I have read more than 400,000 words. After reading it, I have no feeling or impression of the plot and characters. Except that the main character is cold-faced and sullen, and likes to call the grumpy girl "brother" in the next year, which is very exciting. Good writing will use the five senses to create a real feeling and make the readers emotionally involved. In this article, it is difficult for me to think of the appearance and characteristics of the character except for the very flat "baby face", "cold" and "long hair" because the author's creation is too simple and not three-dimensional. Example: There are several different sects in this article, but the author will only briefly describe the clothes the Demon Lord wears as black and red, while the Sword Lord originally wore white. Most of the supporting characters are not even qualified for this basic description. The attributes can only be distinguished by the author's direct name or sect. Excellent writing will describe the quality, feel, and pattern of the fabric, use the five senses of the character to create a three-dimensional sense, and use subtle details to convey the reader's perception and thoughts of the character, instead of simply using verbs to report things to the reader. If you want to describe a character's good figure, you can look at his long legs and broad shoulders through the eyes of another character, and feel the strength, temperature and feel of his tense body, or the sweaty palms of his hands when he is panicked. The details of this article are mostly limited to the verb stage and rarely describe the emotional interaction of the characters in a deeper way. For example, "gently rub" can be expanded to "Although he knows that he is not light, he is still like a big cat that only plays coquettishly to its owner, pressing down on the person under him regardless of the severity, making the clothes loose." The strongest part of this article is the relationship between the protagonists, because it is only during the close interaction between the male protagonists that the writing begins to detail the characters' feelings and emotions, giving them a sense of flesh and blood. There is really nothing to say about the emotional line. The two parties are in love with each other from the beginning to the end, but one party is very conservative, and half of the writing is won by the other party. It's not high or low, it's not bad or bad, it's sweet but not deep, it can't satisfy the taste buds, it's just an ordinary sweetness. It's a mutually offensive article that can be read in times of literary shortage, but when I read it, I felt like I hate that iron cannot become steel. The characters in the story are actually not bad, but the writing doesn't convey the feeling. It's quite enjoyable even if you don't read it carefully. The plot is draggy, but there aren't many words. Just skip to the part where the young lovers are having sex with each other. Overall, it's not particularly good but not particularly bad either. I can continue to work hard to develop a more distinctive writing style. To be honest, if the author took the part where the boss retires and finds his young boyfriend as the center of the story and write a sweet story, I would think it would be more interesting, because the parts of practicing cultivation, getting rid of harm, and doing chivalry are really boring. . . It's better not to write, because people won't be able to read a short article that has difficulty reading only 200,000 words.

6 响 Loud Cannon, Muffled Cannon Huahua ErnieDanmei (BL)330k WordsCompleted 3.6kFavorites4.7kClicks/ch3.1kNutrition

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"It's easy to fall in love with someone, but it's even harder to love someone." One is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Is this really necessary? 9.7 Pretentious and mean-spirited, tough-talking and arrogant are not my type, and I don't even have time to complain. . . But! ! Good writing has exceptions! ! And this article is that exception! ! [Please] I don't usually read such sour stories, because most of them are not pleasant at all and only offend me by being treated as a mindless masochist for no reason. I don't like the boring industrial sour smell. If you want to torture me, show me their involuntary struggle. They know they are making mistakes but don't know what to do. Although they are physically and mentally desperate, they still persist in resisting themselves. The reason for being happy or unhappy is not because the character is written in a super rational way or because he is addicted to love and cannot be cured, but whether the author has successfully expressed the true feelings that are consistent with the logic of the character's personality. This article did it. It made me cry in embarrassment, cry happily, and when I was satisfied, I immediately ran back to Chapter 1 and finished the second chapter. Not only because the protagonists are really cheap and really indebted, but also because they realize their own distortions. Although they desperately accept the consequences of what they sow, they never really give up on each other. I feel hatred, anger, self-loathing, and even the despair of giving up, but I still can't let go. Just because I can't let go, I decide to do my best to seek help for my lover and myself, slowly improve my attitude, and bring the relationship back on track. Although sometimes I really don't understand their attachment to each other, I can sympathize with their pain and confusion. They hope to be loved but mistakenly hurt their lover. I don't understand their decisions, but I can respect their efforts. Well-written sadistic stories understand this. The reader does not need to really agree with their views or actions, but the reader must be allowed to feel their struggles and plead for their future. Really, really like the CP of this article. Their characters are neither perfect nor thoughtful but very human. Being annoyed with them doesn't stop me from sincerely cheering for their efforts. I also thank the author for his conscientious article. Both the main text and Extra Chapter 1 are free. If you are like me and find most abuse stories boring, then I suggest you start reading from the side chapters, and then go back to the main text if you find it interesting. (Personal feeling) In fact, starting from the extra chapter does not affect your perception of this article. On the contrary, you can taste the sweetness of their hardships. Because their thoughts and ideas are written very delicately, it is not possible to understand their deep thoughts or the contradictory and complex emotions that the author wants to express after just one reading. Their thoughts and mentality must be pondered and digested in order to taste the feelings of this character.

7 全 The Whole School Thinks We Are Mortal Enemies Flick Crown and Press SwordDanmei (BL)472k WordsCompleted 1.8kFavorites2kClicks/ch538Nutrition

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"Romantics insist on falling in love with pragmatists, it would be strange if they don't BE" 3.8 The character settings are similar to Bian Nan and Qiu Yi in Goudan's "Wolves Walk in Pairs", but this article does not present the feeling of "rivals turned lovers" at all. The characters are not three-dimensional, the emotional line is shallow and they have low self-esteem. One is pretentious and mean-spirited, the other is tough-tongued and arrogant. There is not only no ambiguity between the two protagonists, but also no personal charm. I read other reviews that said it was very interesting, so I kept reading just to see them get back together, and after reading that part, I felt that these two BEs were even more interesting. It can be felt that the author really wants to let readers know that he is knowledgeable, and from time to time he will pull in a bunch of science, English or medical words to increase the number of words. Although I like to read articles with my brain in mind, good writing does not make readers think that it is intellectual because it has a pretentious character. The most important thing is, does the author understand what makes a good article? When trying to be clever, did you successfully express the character's emotions, control the rhythm of the plot, maintain the character's setting and personality, and write a story that allows readers to be emotionally invested and empathize with the character's situation? The rhythm of the story is unstable, and several chapters are a reprint of the plot of the previous chapter (Chapter 20/21 + Chapter 61/62). The plot segments are not well written or perfect, but they like hard transitions, making the emotional and story lines endless and awkward every time. 1) Senior year of high school In this part of the main perspective, You Ming is unilaterally pursuing Chi Ye passionately, and the more the author writes, the more bland and emotionless he becomes. Chi Ye's sense of presence is very low. It feels like You Ming is anxious for him and moves for him, while he himself is like an outsider, following You Ming's rhythm heartlessly. It is written that there is a "tacit understanding" but no real feelings. 2) University level It is shorter and less interesting than the part written in the third year of high school. In addition to foreshadowing the plot of the breakup, the industrial sourness is forcedly written and there is no emotion to express. The author did not write about the life adjustment and relationship development between the two of them during the three or four years they lived together. I don't know why the author refused to describe their daily life, but only dryly recounted their four-year conversation. This way of writing makes it difficult for people to sympathize with them. 3) Reunion after breaking the mirror Rather than love, I think the author wants to write a story about "doctors are so great, we should cherish them". If we must write this "touching" plot, can we at least make the protagonist a self-impressed and naughty man who is not so disgusting? I really don't like the author letting You Ming send him to Chi Ye's door again, giving Chi Ye a chance to "reunite" without any reason, but he didn't describe his psychological growth and didn't feel that he realized the harm he did to his ex. I also want to tell the author that there is a narrative technique that is often said in English, "Show, don't tell" or show, don't tell. Honest advice? I think you should focus more on crafting a solid story rather than showing off your linguistic knowledge.

8 你 You Go, You Go! Ten HeartsDanmei (BL)405k WordsCompleted 2.6kFavorites5.7kClicks/ch815Nutrition

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"The gentle and scum-financing dad accidentally raised a "straight" baby. Baby, your dad is going to fuck you, so prepare your ass." 8.3 He Baobei: We are straight men. Dad Lin: Be a straight man or touch your butt, choose one. He Baobei:. . . Touch the butt. The relationship line and setting are similar to "Earthly Lover", a fast food story about a financial sponsor father who accidentally started raising a little husband. This one is a bit more sweet, but less serious and mature sour. Na Wen's gentle scum is the younger generation who is kept, and this Wen's gentle scum is the younger generation who keeps people. If you like the taste of gentle scum, you can give it a try. The author's writing style is very deft, but so deft that the writing style is a bit confusing and casual. There are a lot of typos and I feel like I am not very good at proofreading the manuscript, because the descriptions of many situational dialogues make people confused about who is present, who is doing what, and who is saying what. It feels like the author just typed up the manuscript and sent it directly, without considering whether the writing effect is comprehensive from the reader's perspective, whether it is logically smooth and easy to read. Scenes with more than 2 people are not easy to read, but if it is the world of a father and a baby, and the author has written a very natural and touching ambiguous play between boys, I will give it 100 points. I really like the sweet moments in this article, but the reason for their "breakup" and the hasty "reunion" process are inexplicable and blunt. It made me feel that the sweet and crispy feeling that I had been enjoying suddenly hardened and stuck in my throat. Although I still like the taste, it has become hard! It's so uncomfortable! The author is very good at writing about intimate interactions, but he doesn't quite know how to write about delicate and nuanced emotions. I can read their physical movements, but not their emotions for each other, because the author didn't describe much about the character's artistic conception, and only wrote a very flat description of "he is very gentle, he is very loving". It was really difficult for me to digest the part where He Baobei and Lin's father drew a clear line and "broke up" because it was so hard. Forcefully pull down their EQ and make them talk harshly. After reading Chapter 70 of sharing the same bed, wearing underwear on each other, you touching me and I touching you, don't tell me that you really think that your "straight man" character who yells "Daddy Lin, I love you" is completely unaware that something is wrong with him for a long time. And the "getting back together" part doesn't feel like he has sincerely reflected on his childish escape and made a serious and mature decision to get back together with the person he originally wanted to abandon. I can only feel that he passively realized that he couldn't live without Father Lin, and why couldn't he live without him? I don't know, he's so gentle and handsome with his butt raised. Apart from this heartache, the plot is bloody and a bit funny and violent. The first thing the characters do when they have nothing to do is slap, kick, or fist them. It's that weird flavor of "entertainment" excitement pumped into the evening series before the dry dialogue. Overall, it was quite enjoyable and enjoyable to read, but some parts at the end were hard and childish, which detracted from the sweetness of the article.

9 天 Natural Enemy CinnabarDanmei (BL)618k WordsCompleted 7.6kFavorites17.9kClicks/ch10.3kNutrition

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"It's fun to play Infernal Affairs with a vampire and a witcher, but when did you guys talk about it?" How come readers don't know?" 3.3 -0.5 Stars: The label of mutual attack is deceptive. It can only be said to be the main attack, a double-strength article. -0.5 Stars: The plot and emotional components were not well controlled. [Plot 95%] [Emotional Line 5%] The relationship between attack and reception develops a bit inexplicably. -1 Star: The ending falls apart. The plot collapsed. The emotional line collapsed. My heart also broke. -1 Star: The IQ, strength and presence of the protagonist, supporting characters and villains fluctuate high and low, and the tool humanity is very strong. Fantasy writing is quite difficult in Jinjiang, especially the style of mutual writing, so I was tricked into joining as soon as I looked at my resume. The author's writing style is actually good except for being wordy. The pace of the first half of the story is fast, making it easy for readers to overlook the various bugs in the story. The vampire vs. Witcher version of [Infernal Affairs] played by the characters was also interesting enough and piqued my interest. Although the setting logic was full of bugs, it made me choose to be temporarily mentally disabled just to watch the characters plot and fight with each other. Although the author has carefully told the ABCD development of the main story, he seems to have completely forgotten to lay out the emotional lines of attacking and receiving. Except for their first meeting and living together in the early part, and the naughty interaction after their official relationship at the end, the development during this period is minimal to non-existent. The development of the love line is like suddenly jumping from A to J. Where did the middle part go? [Lie flat] I can feel that the author actually wanted to keep the relationship between the two of them low-key, because there is a very subtle relationship between a vampire and a witcher as an enemy and a prey. The author may feel that the horse cannot be defeated too early, but he wrote a plot about living together and sleeping in the same bed. He also gave them enough reasons to defeat the horse, but he refused to let the IQ and EQ be online. The result is that as a reader, you can see that their emotional state has reached the stage of development, but the author insists on not showing you their emotional development and state of mind. And I don't know why the author wants to create a homophobic straight man, but inexplicably forces him to bend for aggression but at the same time makes him afraid of aggression. Just like Schrödinger's gay [question mark], he can be both aggressive and homophobic at the same time. The supporting characters are not very well created. Their purpose of existence is just to promote the story line. When they are needed, they are written into one or two paragraphs, and when they are not needed, they disappear without a trace. Although it is not of ultra-thin paper quality, it is still a non-three-dimensional paper figure. The ending is a bit hard to explain in one sentence. I always feel that all the vampire characters who have lived for hundreds of years have lived in vain [Cracked] It is completely impossible to feel that these characters are over 30 years old. All of them are just to make Gong lose his IQ in a few highlight moments. Maybe the author got tired of writing Infernal Affairs and suddenly decided to change the genre and go to Castlevania. It has really developed to such a ridiculous extent! It's so outrageous that it's a bit funny! [Covering face, laughing and crying]

10 纯 Please Check the Pure Love Succubus Attack Unknown SignalDanmei (BL)604k WordsCompleted 7kFavorites6.9kClicks/ch8.9kNutrition

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9.4 The author's writing style is like being passed down by Gintama, and it is a kind of silly quality. It will first trick you into hahahahaha, and then make you cry out unpreparedly, and then it will make you cry unpreparedly. The writing is more serious and thoughtful than most dramas. Readers who have watched Gintama will be familiar with the rhythm of telling the story in a serious way, and it is a wonderful story that can make you laugh and cry until your eyes are swollen at the same time. The author's imagination is very special, and the details of the alien species are also detailed and interesting, especially the insect swarm! I really like the Zerg society and logic described by the author, and I particularly like the shaping of the author. The charm of the character of Little Fluffy (Shou) lies in the contrast between his ruthless appearance and the cute and cute interior. His true character of being clingy, fond of being loved, and a little sinister as he is slowly pampered by Little Gummy (Gong) is really touching. He is an emperor born from the [maternal] insect nest. He looks like a top A among ten thousand people, but in reality he is a sweet O who is not favored in black and white. With his wisdom and ability, he became the O Emperor who originally belonged to A, and he sat in a more stable position than the previous A. I don't usually eat CPs like Zhuang Ox Soft A, but the relationship between the two (at least in the first half) is really unexpectedly sweet. I also want to say that although this is a sci-fi interstellar setting, the game interaction written by the author is more exciting and beautiful than most e-sports articles. (Laughing) But Gong's character creation can't keep up with Shou's strength. Gong plays a fake fool with a love brain in order to please Shou, and he is serious and handsome from time to time. In fact, it is a quite unique and likeable portrayal. However, the subsequent violent development and his "stupid love warrior otaku" maniacal speech made his already cowardly character become more selfish and unreasonable, which made him less popular. I especially look forward to Shou reflecting on his complicated and contradictory feelings towards his mother and the nest as he gives birth to his own caterpillar. I think this plot is actually more interesting than the love line between him and Gong, and it can strengthen the shaping of the two protagonists. At the end, I didn't really see Shou's thoughts in this regard, which felt like a waste of the highlight of the story. It's a pity that the author chose to develop the weaker alliance and attack as the center of the second half of the story. This attack is not a completely unattractive character, but he is much weaker than what he was made into. Although the author tried his best to give Gong a tragic and pitiful background and tried his best to write the story logic as smoothly as possible, the turning point of Gong's thinking still has the taste of industrial cruelty. It is not a mother-son relationship like the one between Shou and his mother that silently impresses the readers, but an outrageous ocean of blood plot forced by the author to make readers pity Gong. The forced plot is not sweet, and the forced plot is not good either. Just because the charm of the character itself is not enough to carry the development of the plot, the more you read, the more disgusted you will be with what Gong does. (I can understand why some readers who are loyal to the article will abandon the article in the background part, although I still feel that the overall article is strong enough and worth reading. For controlled readers, it may feel a bit unfinished.) It can be said that the first half of the evaluation is S, the second half is B, and together they are SB haha (bushi). The overall evaluation is A.

11 有 Sick One Point, Two Points, Three PointsDanmei (BL)168k WordsCompleted 1.7kFavorites2.5kClicks/ch500Nutrition

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"I'm not worth your wait, but without you I'm only half a person." . . Two desperate mandarin ducks, they found their partners and themselves" 6.0 Frankly speaking, I don't know how to evaluate this article. Maybe it's because my taste is more flexible in writing. Even if it is dull, it still needs to be humorous. The author's writing style is elegant but a bit like writing a report. He tells you the origins of characters and events in a boring way. It's like an art film. You can feel that the author has a theme and many delicate thoughts, but it is presented to the reader as a series of restrained fragments, and the superfluous things are cut out. It feels like what the author wants to convey is not a three-dimensional and complete world but fragments that can trigger emotions one by one. I like articles with relatively even compositions. The combination of sour, bitter, sweet, spicy, color, fragrance and aroma is what I think readers will pursue, so I usually don't like short articles because short articles are rarely written comprehensively. It cannot be said that the writing is not good, but that the writing is not interesting. Rather than clips that easily impress me, I like three-dimensional worlds, flesh-and-blood characters, and stories that have a beginning and an end. This article is sour with a little sweetness and bitterness. It is a very melancholy and helpless story, with a sense of passivity. Before dying, I was forced to face the regrets of my life, and had to seriously pursue the happiness I wanted and make up for my mistakes. If this kind of sweet and sad story about breaking up and getting back together is well-written and the plot and emotions are well written, I would really like it. However, if you only focus on the emotional moments of the characters without properly foreshadowing the plot, controlling the rhythm of the story will only give me a kind of pretentious embarrassment. In fact, I quite liked the character of the protagonist and the plot of this article, but the more I read, the more bored I became. It wasn't until the second half that the small world of the two protagonists finally expanded, and their family backgrounds and family relationships began to be explained, giving them a three-dimensional feeling besides being two miserable mandarin ducks. I also want to say: This is an abo article, but the abo part is very superficial and feels quite perfunctory. It is simply an accessory to create an atmosphere/create intimate contact. You could leave it out completely and the storyline wouldn't change much. It was put in so that the author could facilitate the progress of the relationship between the protagonists, and it also added a bit of beauty because of the connection between pheromones. Because I clicked on it immediately when I saw it was AxA's mutual attack, I felt a little bit cheated. (Cry)

12 大 Heavy Fog Yan LiangyuDanmei (BL)338k WordsCompleted 285kFavorites350.1kClicks/ch300.7kNutrition

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7.5 I like animalistic characters, so I picked it up as soon as I saw the introduction. Although the elegant and low-key style on the cover thought it would be suspenseful and fantasy, the writing style and the emotions of the characters are quite direct and heartwarming, which is different from the cover and introduction (good reviews). The protagonist and supporting characters all have unique personalities and are lovable, but I still have to say that although it looks like a group portrait at the beginning, this article is not actually a group portrait. The perspective of the first 10 chapters is relatively scattered, giving the impression that both the deputy CP and the main CP will make progress, but after the plot develops, it only focuses on the two protagonists, and the deputy CP has no other progress except for the introduction of the secret. The creation of supporting characters basically stopped at the beginning. There is a subtle contradiction in the focus of the first and second sections. It's as if you were originally presented with a main dish and two side dishes, but the other two side dishes were quickly taken away and you were only allowed to eat the main dish. It's a bit stingy, showing it but not eating it. Personally, I feel that the author could have sorted out the beginning of the plot better, because the first half of the setting and science writing is too long-winded and a bit discouraging. It turns out that this idea is not very scientific, and the explanation is not very convincing. Instead of wasting more than 20 chapters of explanation, it would be better to skip to the main plot (the growth of the protagonists, relationship development and family rupture/frustration) in one go. If the two protagonists were a little less charming, the story would actually be a bit unsustainable, because the main plot part was not written well enough and it felt incomplete. After each plot point reaches the climax, the ending is suddenly cut off. There is no follow-up and no real completion. There is a beginning but no end. While reading, every time the plot finally got a little bit interesting and I started to feel satisfied, but when I read the next paragraph, I realized, eh? What am I missing? [Loading]Why don't you continue talking? The rice bowl looked big, and I thought I would be full. But after I finished eating, I found that the bottom of the bowl was empty, giving the appearance of richness. Good writing requires that characters, emotions, and plots be written well. But to be honest, in "The Fog", except for the characters, which are written with more flair, the other two are well written, but not three-dimensional and complete enough. There are emotions but not real emotions. If you don't add extra chapters to evaluate it, it really feels like you are only reading the front end of another story, stuck in a very subtle part. Although I have read 340,000 words, I feel like I have only read 150,000 words. It's okay to add an extra chapter, at least it has a decent tail, but this extra chapter should be in the main text, and the part where the extra chapter is broken is also subtly incomplete.

14 信 Pheromone Exclusive GuzhengDanmei (BL)299k WordsCompleted 130kFavorites159kClicks/ch115.6kNutrition

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8.5 …Personal advice: Don't make paragraph comments! Really don't make any comments! At least for the first time, feel the plot for yourself, don't comment! The commentary is full of violence, and the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes. None of the characters are perfect. I came to read this abo article to see their adjustment process, not to endure all kinds of moral education and be scolded for being a love brain if I am happy about their relationship progress. Although I can understand my dissatisfaction with Gong and A in the cliched and bloody plot, they scolded each other within a few paragraphs, and they also loved and pity the equally crazy little O constantly, and the baby's screams were really annoying. … This article is suitable for readers who want to read abo articles but don't like abo settings. The protagonist is an iron-clad heartthrob named B, but accidentally, he is attracted by another iron-clad person A who is superior to him. Iron tree A bloomed first, but because it was not right at the beginning and did not wake up early, it was bound to pursue his wife in the crematorium. He learned to restrain himself, bow his head, and respect, so that he could be loved by the person he likes. I like to read the abo setting book because I want to read about abnormal and persistent love and attraction. Human nature has been transformed into animals, but because of human nature, we are still willing to restrain our animal nature and accept domestication. Especially AxB love, it tests A's natural control over B's partner who cannot be labeled. Compared to AxO Love, I feel much better. The protagonist B is like an ordinary person who accidentally stepped into Abo's crazy world. He is a misfit but full of the charm of gentleness and security. Just because his thoughts are more ordinary, more sane, and less crazy, the more A/B/O lunatics around him want to take him for themselves and turn him into a small castle that only opens the door for themselves. The only Iron Tree A who can successfully ascend to the top of this castle that no one can conquer is because he failed earlier than all the suitors, and he is also more able to use his brain, think in other people's shoes, and lower the naturally arrogant attitude of A from the perspective of ordinary person B. He slowly and step by step proves his sincerity in a regular way, and finally enters B's heart. Although, I still feel that the turning point is a bit hard, because this B is really a bit of a heartless asexual person. Although he claims to be a straight man, he really writes that he has no interest in either the opposite sex or the same sex. He only has a mentality of treating himself as an outsider, looking at the crazy scenes around him but not understanding and not interested in understanding. Although the author's writing style is dull but full of cold humor, it is not a shortcoming, but it is not suitable for readers who are used to reading 10 lines at a time. Although the writing style is simple and straightforward, it is the kind of story that uses one line to express the emotions of the plot that other authors use 5 lines to express. It's a story worth reading twice or three times. Overall, it's a good story. The first half has a non-CP/BE flavor, but due to Gong's firm tolerance and Shou's silent impression, it slowly turns into a HE second half. But when it comes to being emotional, it's not quite so. It is a very sensible and restrained love story, and it is a very comfortable but uncomfortable read about the values ​​​​of a mature adult.

15 你 Your Ex-Boyfriend, I Took Over Sun-Dried Bean PasteDanmei (BL)893k WordsCompleted 50.7kFavorites58.1kClicks/ch63.2kNutrition

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"After reading the author's other articles, I will come back to make up my own ranking list. Fu Jia Nan Lion > Mr. Jing sneaked away > Men's College of Physical Education > Your ex-boyfriend 3.0 Let me start by saying that neither the setting nor the characters are particularly my favorite (the scheming Green Tea Attacker with a dark upper abdomen x the stupid little wild dog with low self-esteem). Although the plot setting (retaliation for the scumbag ex-boyfriend and poaching) is quite interesting, the character's mood is too thin and superficial. From the beginning to the end, the most serious characters are complaining about each other in their hearts, but there is no real and flesh-and-blood feelings. The more I read, the more boring it becomes because it gives the impression that the protagonist and supporting characters are just tools that can be brought out at any time to create an atmosphere. I originally thought that the author had two major weaknesses, but in this book I discovered that there is a third one: 1) It's a "high IQ" plot, but the characters' IQs don't appear to be high. There is no "high IQ" plot (if you don't count Gong's green tea Tai Chi), but Shou is a 100% pure fool who thinks he is awesome. Personally I don't like it very much, it's so stupid that it's a bit retarded. 2) Don't focus on the main cp and the main plot. I wrote so many guest sub-CPs that I couldn't get into the main CP. I wouldn't say that this article is the most serious mistake. At least compared to the guest role and deputy CP part of the article in "Taiyuan Men Da", it is smoother and does not keep drawing into the main plot to disturb the development. 3) I like to write characters with special symptoms, but I can't write characters with symptoms that are realistic. Instead, they seem to be deliberately pretending. Sishui's "autism" is like Tang Yu's deafness, and Qu Nan's "bisexual personality". The author did not succeed in writing them as flesh-and-blood people with flaws. There is no sense in the article that they are forced to adapt to a world of "ordinary people" who basically don't understand or treat them well because of some factors beyond their control. Instead, what is written is that normal people play the role of "abnormal" people. Quite fake. In fact, if the names chosen by the author for Sishui's (?) Younger brother and his younger brother's official counterpart were not subtly similar to Gu Miao from Goudan's "Sa Ye", I would not use Sa Ye as a comparison. An autistic relative has a secret base in a ruins, and became autistic after being abused by his father. These coincidences are really subtle. But when writing about autism, if he couldn't describe the feeling of being really miserable and helpless like when Gu Fei took care of his sister in "Sa Ye", the author would rather write Brother Sishui as an ordinary brother-controller. Otherwise, just pick a name that doesn't remind me of sister Gu Sanshui at all. The sense of realism is not enough. It would be better not to write it, but it would be one less point of criticism. The overall feeling is that the author put in too many time-wasting words to fill in the word count and falsely lengthen the weight of the article. There are at least 300,000 to 400,000 words of dialogue and boring things that are not important. In fact, not writing it will make the plot of the article more stable, more solid and meaningful.

16 回 Return to Zero Mu ShengDanmei (BL)613k WordsCompleted 26kFavorites21.5kClicks/ch25.5kNutrition

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"Two bosses look at each other, win back their destiny, and flirt with each other and favor each other." 8.5 It's not a perfect work, but I think it's worth giving it 4 stars. There are few themes in the world from infinite flow back to the origin, the characters and plots are well written, and the writing style is also very good. The beginning is very attractive, and the suspense and excitement make you want to keep reading. But the rhythm at the end is a bit messy and the ending is sudden, but the ending is still satisfactory. It's just that the ending is a bit harsh. In fact, I hope that the mood of the two male protagonists can be described more delicately, because the two minds move too fast, and as an ordinary reader, sometimes I can't keep up with their rhythm. Many of the small interactions between Mr. Xiao Sheng and Mr. Yunzhou were originally missed or incomprehensible. After reading Black Swan, and then returning to zero, they became more obvious and easier to understand. -For new readers who don't know whether to look at Black Swan or Back to Zero first: Xiaosheng Zong and Zhouzhou in Hui Ling are the original versions. Their characters and thoughts in Hui Ling are more innocent and more obvious than Black Swan. They have already evolved several versions in Black Swan. Without a basic understanding of Return to Zero, it would be a bit difficult to grasp their ambiguous relationship and their development sooner or later.

17 刀 Cutting Mountains and Rivers with Swords Don't Fall, Don't FallDanmei (BL)611k WordsCompleted 21kFavorites21.3kClicks/ch9.7kNutrition

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"The flower of the high mountain falls in love with the weeds on the edge. Can two people with completely different backgrounds make it to the end together?" 3.4 If I only read the first volume, I would give it an 8.0. The suspense atmosphere is super strong, the two protagonists are both powerful and IQ-worthy, and the ambiguous relationship and emotional lines are full. The rhythm of the story is also well managed, and the interactions between the supporting characters are also enjoyable. The setting and situation of the main cp are also similar to Goudan's antidote cp, and I like this flavor. But if we evaluate it as a whole, we can only say that the author's writing style is unstable and cannot handle a large-scale story with many details. The weakest part is the Machiavellian palace line starting in Volume 3. In fact, the questions in Volume 3 already exist in Volume 1, but this is just because of the author's strengths: suspenseful exploration, domestic excitement, and fighting scenes, which are enough to give the protagonists highlight moments and emotional plots, making the flaws in the author's writing less obvious. The character's strength and IQ are unstable, rising and falling. When I read the first volume, I thought this problem was limited to the bad portrayal of the villain, but in the third volume, I found that this problem also extended to the description of the two protagonists. There are less lively bickering, not many highlight moments, but more bloody scenes, making the protagonist and supporting characters seem a bit useless. . . Brainless. . . The development of Volume 3 really left me speechless. . . How can a good story character collapse like this? . . In fact, the author's writing style is good, although it is a bit stiff, but the basics are there. However, it goes straight to the point of bloody abuse without properly developing the details needed for the background of the story's characters, which only gives the reader a reluctant and inexplicable contradictory feeling of industrial sourness. The logic doesn't make sense, and the emotional foreshadowing isn't well written, but it requires readers to empathize. . . It's a bit overwhelming. [Changed] The more seducing the front part is, the more opportunities the back part will give people to squirt. It's no wonder that the author advises readers to quit and lock their comments at the end of Volume 1. Although I still like this article (if I don't use my brain), it's enough to pay to stop at Volume 1.

18 凑 Make Do Three Bowls PassedDanmei (BL)790k WordsCompleted 20.8kFavorites20.7kClicks/ch40.1kNutrition

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The top story in my heart in recent years is truly sad and heart-warming. A very humanistic story. A story that conscientiously tells a story and makes characters other than the protagonist flesh and blood does not go straight to the rhythm of Se Se, but creates a complete world for us readers to experience. I also really like the love line between the Demon King and the little fairy boy. They are both doted on by the elders and crazy by the younger ones. It is a truly erotic and fragrant story about each other. After reading the three stories of Sanwan, I think Makeshift is the best one written by the teacher. It is a story that is completely different in style from "Alpha" and "Hunboy". Some people come to see The Demon King and the Little Fairy Boy because they can't get enough of the experiences and flowers, but I hope that the new readers who come to see the story can also cherish the CP of "The Old House is on Fire". Two old antiques worked hard to talk about love under the watch of the younger generation, which included laughter, tears, pain, and even madness. (... I also want to say that the name of the demon clan is so special and cute... I really like the majestic and soft howling demon emperor)

19 伏 The Southern Lion of Fu Family, Senior Brother and Junior Brother Sun-Dried Bean PasteDanmei (BL)579k WordsCompleted 19.2kFavorites21.2kClicks/ch18.8kNutrition

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"After reading the author's other articles, I will come back to make up my own ranking list. Fu Jia Nan Lion > Mr. Jing sneaked away > Men's College of Physical Education > Your ex-boyfriend 9.6 Qian Qian tried to read the author's other works but couldn't get into the trap until he read Fu Family Senior Brother and Junior Brother. The subject matter is the rare lion dance tradition, and it also contains my favorite setting of the brothers. But what made me read the whole article in one breath is that the author's emotional lines are so delicate and nuanced, and the stories of the brothers and sisters are warm and touching. The lion dance part is also very dynamic, and you can feel the characters' hard work, sweat and tears. I also really like the connection between the protagonists, two partners who have been together since childhood, and dance together to form a giant lion. The characters in the plot are a bit classic, but because the emotions of the characters are so well written, even those who are not natives will sympathize with the difficulties of the two protagonists instead of feeling that they are hypocritical. I really like the unconditional protection of my senior brother to his junior brother, and I also like the close relationship between the Fu family and the class. A senior brother who looks like a big rooster leads his three junior brothers everywhere to eat, solve problems, and try his best to fulfill the dreams of the master and his junior brother. It is cute and heart-wrenching. When reading other articles by the author, there are actually two major weaknesses: 1) It's a "high IQ" plot, but the characters' IQs don't appear to be high. 2) Don't focus on the main cp and the main plot. I wrote so many guest sub-CPs that I couldn't get into the main CP. But maybe because the timeline of Fujia Nanshi is relatively independent, and there is no need to force a "high IQ" plot, just focusing on the emotional line of the main character and the interactive atmosphere of the lion dance family/martial arts school makes this article more solid and touching. I didn't get halfway through the book without being annoyed by the inexplicable developments. If there are other readers like me who like the author's flexible writing style, but have been unable to get into the trap because of these two major weaknesses, they can try reading the story of Ji Ba and Fu Mao Mao in Fujia Nanshi.

20 体 The Male Leader of the Sports Academy, Why Do You Mess with Him [Athletics] Sun-Dried Bean PasteDanmei (BL)890k WordsCompleted 19.1kFavorites20.1kClicks/ch31.4kNutrition

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"After reading the author's other articles, I will come back to make up my own ranking list. Fu Jia Nan Lion > Mr. Jing sneaked away > Men's College of Physical Education > Your ex-boyfriend 6.3 After reading the author's other articles, I feel that the author has three major weaknesses: 1) It's a "high IQ" plot, but the characters' IQs don't appear to be high. The development of the plot is a bit confusing, which is not to say that the writing is not good, but that it is written without thinking. Once it develops into things outside of the academy, the way the characters deal with things is not like what real people would do, but instead has an industrial feel that only exists as tool people in the movie pushing the plot and enhancing the excitement. In fact, if readers don't think about it carefully, they won't think that the logic of the plot characters is a bit retarded, because the author's writing style is smooth and flexible, which can cover up the embarrassment of illogical logic. If you read it as a light-hearted article with no brainers, the problem is that the author does not deliberately write it to be stupid, but that the author cannot express the high-intelligence and refreshing article he wants to write but insists on writing it with a sense of satisfaction. 2) Don't focus on the main cp and the main plot. I wrote so many guest sub-CPs that I couldn't get into the main CP. The guest characters of the deputy CP really take up too much text. From time to time, they will appear to disturb the main CP and distract from the development of the main plot. I feel that many parts would be fine if placed in extra chapters, but they are included in the main text just for the author's self-promotion, which can easily dissuade new readers. 3) I like to write characters with special symptoms, but I can't write characters with symptoms that are realistic. Instead, they seem to be deliberately pretending. Tang Yu's deafness, Yao Dong's muteness and drunkenness are more like tools to create an atmosphere than symptoms. The writing is not true, but it is pretending to be fake. Come on. Especially Tang Yu, who likes to turn off his hearing aid but can notice and clearly hear the words of people around him, which is a bit contradictory. I actually really like the author's Northeast Attack x High Mountain setting of parachute bamboo horse, but it's just that. . . The beginning and background development of their relationship really feels like they are tied together in a subtle way. That is, if neither party is temporarily mentally retarded, neither party will develop. My situation as a child was also a bit outrageous. Although the author's writing style is really comfortable to read, and the ambiguous interactions between the characters are cute and ridiculous, the plot and character logic kept me going (Subway old man looking at his phone. Jpg). I have read three articles by the author, and the feelings in both articles are of different types, silly and sweet. At least Yao Dong's character is lovable. It's quite comfortable to read on campus, at least that's why I finished reading the article. To be honest, I don't understand why the author chose to include some messy and poorly written plots about an undercover drug dealer and being intimidated by a local dragon. Maybe it's because I've written so many articles about gay sports buddies that I don't know what to write to add some excitement to fill up the word count?

21 牙 Yaro Chang SansiDanmei (BL)579k WordsCompleted 18.2kFavorites26.8kClicks/ch28.1kNutrition

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"Click here to watch She Niu x She Leng fell in love, but was forced to take economics courses. . . It's not easy to make money! 7.3 The writing style is a bit dull, but it suits the author's dry humor, so for me it's not a shortcoming but an advantage. Readers who are just used to reading ten lines at a glance may find the author a bit verbose. In the first half of the relationship, the relationship progressed very quickly because both of them were inexperienced iron trees, but after they became enlightened, the two quickly entered the wedding period. Moreover, both of their careers are related to looking at houses and buying houses, so they continue the atmosphere of newlyweds buying a wedding house. It's fun and sweet, but because there are no big ups and downs, there is no impressive reason, other than a deep understanding of the importance of financial independence. The emotional frustrations of the supporting character and deputy CP are even more exciting than theirs, but the author didn't write much about it, so there's nothing to watch. Only towards the end, the deputy CP's bloody emotional line was suddenly explained in a chapter or two. Although I really like the main character's non-bloody love line, the two of them, Tieshu, who were originally enemies of each other, managed to develop a tacit understanding that even a married couple of 10 years can't match in less than a year, but they are a bit lacking in the kind of true feelings that make people empathize. The story lines of the first half and the second half are a bit separated, because the first half mostly focuses on the development of the character relationship and the protagonist's state of mind. Although the protagonists still have sweet interactions in the second half, they are a bit distracted by the ups and downs of the real estate market, and there is not much detailed attention to their emotional line. What is presented is the sweet daily life of the two of them, but there is not much written about the stage when the two of them are slowly getting together, as if they jumped straight into living together for ten years after they realized what they were doing. The author didn't detail how these two people accepted each other's good and bad qualities, which I felt was a pity. I always felt that their happiness came a bit too suddenly and too easily. Although there are indeed some such lucky couples in reality, hahaha. Travel through this story point. . . If it were not added, the story would not be affected much. The protagonist is so adaptable that you wouldn't think of him as an ancient person, just an antique who doesn't understand technology. My personal feeling is that the author can make better use of this time-travel point to develop the character and strengthen the character creation, but maybe because he is aware of too many logic bugs, he doesn't want to write it in detail. The ending was a bit rushed and confusing, although the author managed to bring the main line of the story to a logical and smooth conclusion. It gives the impression that the author was bored and had no mood to continue writing, so he forced the plot to the "climax" point of the end, but before the plot characters could fully recover, the reader was pushed out of the door, turned off the lights and locked the door. As an office worker, I actually think this article is quite interesting. You can learn a lot after reading it, haha. However, if you just want to see two men fall in love, the blahblah content of this economic real estate is a bit too high. It should still be said that the ups and downs of real estate, economic knowledge is the main course, and the emotions of the characters are the side dishes. Overall, I quite like this article. Except for the fact that one of the protagonists is a time-travelling person, this is an ordinary story about a cold couple in the Sheniu Club falling in love and making money.

22 景 Mr. Jing Ran Away with His Ex's Baby in His Arms Sun-Dried Bean PasteDanmei (BL)484k WordsCompleted 11.4kFavorites15.1kClicks/ch15.4kNutrition

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"After reading the author's other articles, I will come back to make up my own ranking list. Fu Jia Nan Lion > Mr. Jing sneaked away > Men's College of Physical Education > Your ex-boyfriend 9.3 Beautiful! Nice! It's really beautiful! I'm a local dog and I love watching! [Poor] In the age of heavy love, the silly dog cry bag A attack x The frivolous and arrogant fox who has many worries but is very doting B suffer (Although the author likes to use cats to describe Shou, he really looks like a smiling fox) Both are lovely and eager to be loved. The first half describes their first encounter. The two (self-proclaimed) sea kings fished back and forth but only caught each other, and kept losing their horses. It was cute and ridiculous. The breakup in the middle part is a bit inexplicable, but the second half of the plot explains the reason well. Originally, my only dissatisfaction was that the breakup came so hard and suddenly, but after reading the second half and knowing Shou's background and the passage of eight years, the timing and logic of the breakup became much smoother. But I still have to say that the reason for the breakup could have been better laid out. It always feels like the author chose not to detail the important foreshadowing in the first half in order to maintain the turning point from the sudden breakup to eight years later. Personally, I feel that the author could have included Shou's teenage situation, which would have made the article more touching and the moment of the breakup more effective. As someone who first read the author's Sports Academy series but couldn't get into it, compared to the author's newer popular Sports Academy series, I feel that this early ABO article is better written and maintains a more stable rhythm. I don't know if it's because there are too many characters and sub-CPs in the Sports Academy series, and the author's writing is also wordy, but in this article I never felt that the rhythm was unstable or that the guest characters made the main plot line collapse. From beginning to end, the author pays close attention to the emotional lines of the protagonists, and does not inexplicably insert irrelevant things. In fact, the author copied some of the plots and just changed the character names in the new article, but it's true. . . Still no better than this article. Perhaps because the story can play out independently and is not limited by the setting of a series, these plots do not seem so baffling. The number of words is far less than the average 700,000 to 800,000 words in the Ti Yuan series, but no words are wasted, and the book reads more fully. Demining: This is an abo setting and also includes the details of male pregnancy and childbirth. Readers who want to eat abo but can't stand mpreg are recommended to skip 104~105. I usually can't stand male pregnancy, but I still think it's quite delicious. There are the details that should be included, and the details of persuading people to quit are less written or understated.

23 双 Two-Way Domestication The Best Purr in the Cat WorldDanmei (BL)791k WordsCompleted 10.1kFavorites7.8kClicks/ch17.8kNutrition

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"The yandere supports his brother and the devil x the crazy brother controls the dog. I have never read such an orthopedic pseudo-orthopedic with such an unethical taste!" 9.8 Super nice article! ! The author's writing style is the most unrestrained that I have ever seen in Green River. From the first chapter, I was shocked by the author's courage and imagination. However, this article is not suitable for readers who like three righteous views and positive energy. . . One is yandere, one is crazy, but strange. . . When two people are together, they become balanced. The emotional line of the protagonists can actually be said to be sweet from beginning to end. It is sour and bitter because of the conflicts between the protagonists, their respective mental illnesses that need to be restrained, and the darkness surrounding them. The relationship between the two protagonists is just that: [Cracked] "I can't be your brother, male mother, psychiatrist, life coach, male god, favorite toy, best friend, and worst master at the same time." [Hugs thighs] "Why not?" It's so embarrassing and funny, but it also makes my heart hurt for them. The setting of a little mad dog rescued from a "dog" fighting ring is actually quite common (the antidote, slashing mountains and rivers with a sword), but the author's description of social filth and the sinister nature of human nature is the most realistic I have ever seen, making me really believe in the existence of this little mad dog. Articles that like to write such bloody plots usually write too bloody stories, but fail to consider what kind of society and what kind of environment can create such incompatible and dangerous people who are not scrupled by the law. Compared with other similar articles, I can feel that the author has seriously considered these link issues and tried to write realistically and delicately enough to make the puppy's shaping and encounters real. My brother's unconditional love and tolerance for his younger brother is really touching! I also like my brother's psychological journey very much. It is an imperfect and not very happy but very real process. I can sympathize with why he loves and hates his younger brother, is hot and cold, wants to cut off the relationship but cannot be cruel. Although I may feel upset at times while reading, because the logical thinking and mentality of the characters are well written, I will not feel bored with the characters, but will feel heartbroken and worried about the past that they cannot change. Must say it! I would like to thank the author for his thoughtful and sweet story about Emperor Lai and Minister Dai. It really made me read it satisfactorily.

24 俗 Earthly Lover Shi NingDanmei (BL)439k WordsCompleted 9.1kFavorites10.6kClicks/ch10.4kNutrition

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"The gentle scumbag's "straight boy" baby was accidentally adopted by the sponsor's father. Dad, your baby is going to have sex with you, so prepare your ass." 8.8 Chen Baobei: I am a straight man. Dad Lu: Then who had sex with me? Chen Baobei:. . . Don't settle old scores. The emotional line is similar to the setting [you go, you go! ]'S financial backer dad accidentally started raising a young husband in a sweet and refreshing fast food story. This article is more serious and mature, sour, but less sweet. Na Wen's gentle scum is the one who keeps people, and this Wen's gentle scum is the one who is kept. If you like the taste of gentle scum, you can give it a try. The emotional line is suitable for a second-story novel, because their awkward first encounter and cohabitation development are told later in the story, and in the front, Mr. Chen finally begins to express his love for Professor Lu and pursues his sponsor father. It is quite interesting that the author introduces the plot of the story upside down in this way, although it reduces the effect of Mr. Chen's mental change because he was silently moved by Professor Lu's sincerity. There are no big ups and downs in the storyline, just because the two people have basically established their relationship, and they are just correcting and balancing the unequal contributions between them. From Lu's father's unilateral sacrifice and Chen's awkward response, to Chen's learning to cherish Lu's father, and Lu's father learning to be loved by Chen's baby. Professor Lu is a very sexy mature character. His restrained caution and tolerance really made me understand why Chen Baobao felt that this man must be loved and loved. But his character is too calm and self-disciplined, which is very suitable for real life, but when it comes to novels, he lacks that kind of enthusiasm and stimulation. It's not that it's not good to shape, but it's not easy to write with a sense of satisfaction. Also because Mr. Chen is not a really crazy little wolf dog character, he is more like a naughty and arrogant fox man. He cannot completely pry off Professor Lu's respectable shell and have a passionate love affair with him. Their greatest excitement lies in their career and family lines, and their love lines are relatively sweet. But I still have to say that Chen Baobei's "I am a straight man" statement is really funny. They attack each other and favor each other. It is a sweet and reassuring text from beginning to end, and it also has a sense of humor. It can be regarded as a fast food article, easy to eat but not boring. The protagonist's logic and emotional lines develop smoothly and naturally. Although it is sweet, it does not make people feel that it is brainlessly sweet. It's just that maybe it's more bland and boring compared to other crazy articles, right? (Although I think it's easier to digest if I eat something bland and sweet sometimes)

25 暖 Warm Wind Late Sun Luo LangDanmei (BL)799k WordsCompleted 2.3kFavorites1.1kClicks/ch5.6kNutrition

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"Long-lost childhood sweethearts, a civil servant and a military general, work together to help the empress win the kingdom" 9.3 I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, and their relationship and experiences are also very touching. Although I feel that the historical situation and palace intrigues are a bit too much, especially the second volume, which is a bit delayed, but if you have the patience to read it from beginning to end, it is still worth reading two or three times. The villains are relatively simple and clichéd, and some of the supporting characters are very well written, but sometimes you forget who the protagonist actually is, either because the supporting characters are too eye-catching or because they take up too much of the text. The writing style of Dada is really great, but I still hope that Dada can pay more detailed attention to the protagonist's story line, because I feel that the most complete part is actually the journey of the sixth princess to gain the kingdom, while the hatred and resentment of the Chi family are overshadowed by the important events of the family and the country. I always feel that the ending of the Dong family and the Xiao family is really a little bit different. . . Too light an understatement? In fact, throughout the entire article, we expected Chi Jiehui to have a stronger reaction to Wan'er's life experience and Xiao/Dong's insult to the second sister. We also hoped that Guan Lin would have more interactions with Wan'er, but we only tasted the sweet and sour taste of this in the last chapter. . . And I also felt that the ending came a bit too suddenly. . . Because what was written was the story of the sixth princess becoming the empress, not the story of Guan Lin and Chi Jie.

26 怪 Weird Show Drunk and AsleepDanmei (BL)350k WordsCompleted 2.1kFavorites2.3kClicks/ch269Nutrition

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"Two Slender Pretty Boys" has crossed over from a beautiful girl manga to a bloody adult horror manga. 5.3 The protagonists are two incompatible, feminine and beautiful men, traveling in a world of ugly men and smelly women. I still think the nickname "wife" is quite good when used on men, but throughout the whole article, the name "wife, wife, wife" has turned into a lily-flavored nickname, which is a bit jarring. Makes me feel like I'm looking at women instead of men. Although I also like Lily, when I read Danmei, I still prefer men who look like men rather than men who look like women. Although the background is Jianghu, it is actually a record of a murderous and rapist group. It's more like a Chinese chat room than a martial arts world, where monsters and ghosts in human skins blend into the crowd to bully the weak and endanger the common people. Actually, I don't mind this. I quite like the classic horror and fantasy atmosphere, but it just doesn't fit the Jianghu label. However, I still have to say that the author relies too much on plots of bloody violence and sexual humiliation to stimulate readers and make them emotionally involved. Overuse may lead to numbness. There is not much suspense reasoning, and the protagonist does not use his brain to push the plot. Instead, he is plotted, plotted, and plotted again by the villain. After fighting hard until half his life is left, he unlocks the villain's solution conditions and receives clues to develop the story line. The author also likes to give one of the protagonists a situation where he has a million female fans, but the way he writes it is to give the two protagonists a chance to show off their affection. This is really frustrating. It turns out that Qin Meiren already has a male official partner and she is a divorced man. Can you please stop writing these messy and clichéd things that are disgusting? The protagonist is more resistant to injuries than Superman. An ordinary person would be crippled and killed early by his injuries, but he could stay alive and kicking after lying in bed for a few days, giving the villain a few chances to stab him to death. It was unrealistic to match his slim and handsome body. Although they are all paper figures, it somewhat destroys the reader's sense of involvement in the text. I can feel that the author's taste is too strong. The supporting male characters are all cruel and weird, the supporting female characters are despicable and disgusting, and have no sense of charm at all. There are many sinister ghosts. Although some supporting characters are normal people, they don't have a strong sense of existence. In fact, the author's writing style has indeed improved a lot compared to the prequel, becoming more flexible, and the picture description is more beautiful. It's just that most of this progress is limited to fight scenes and a slight sense of ambiguity in the protagonist's dialogue, but the characters and emotions created are still not very sympathetic. Maybe it's because the author's description of the relationship between the characters is too shallow or plain, giving the impression that the characters have this reaction just to advance the story line, rather than truly being a natural reaction of a flesh-and-blood person. Although the author's writing style is considered to be top-notch, I am not surprised that this article has been relegated to Jinjiang for almost ten years. From the setting of the protagonist, the plot of the story, and the description of the supporting characters, this taste is really difficult to digest.

27 大 Eighteen Years of Big Dreams Drunk and AsleepDanmei (BL)245k WordsCompleted 1.8kFavorites4.2kClicks/ch273Nutrition

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"The girl in the well whose world suddenly collapsed at the age of 18 found out how terrible the reality is. Good and bad are all mixed up. The only one she can rely on is her wife." 5.0 I originally collected "Strange Play" first and then read it as a sequel, but then I discovered that there is a prequel. My obsessive-compulsive disorder, which likes 100% of things, was triggered, so I decided to read "Eighteen Years of a Dream" first. In fact, the title of this article is quite suitable, because this story is not a love-hate dispute, or a story of awe-inspiring justice, but the psychological growth process of the protagonist: from a cute baby who has been kept in the dark for eighteen years, he is forced to face the bloody things done by the people who raised him, and he also learns to get out of that humble starting point and find his own way. The strongest part is the first half, because the young couple interacts the most. Qin Meiren's warm and tolerant but a little awkward character is really cute, making people want to keep watching their daily life. In fact, the second half should not be said to be weak, but it is. . . How to say it. . . Dry? If we can say that the first half is like a sweet nurturing story, the second half is like a fable full of blood and moral theory. It's not that it's bad, it's that it's not very attractive. The only reason that kept me reading was the small interactions between the young lovers, as if someone had drawn a series of little tortoises in this dry textbook. Although the writing was dry, it at least gave me some fun to turn the pages to find the tortoises. It's not without reason that this article has been in the cold palace of Jinjiang for more than ten years. Although Ji Baobao's character is quite likable, soft on the outside and strong on the inside. On the outside, he is a delicate young master, but on the inside he is a tough guy who is more stubborn than 10 cows. However, his character and thoughts are a bit dull, and the development of the story from his perspective also makes this article dull. The author's writing style is very stable, and the story development is also very stable, but... . . It's like chewing a piece of wood. It has no taste after chewing. Overall, the question this article wants to ask readers to consider is actually quite interesting: How is black and white good or bad determined? How do you decide whether a person is a good person or a bad person? If a person is unconditionally good to you but unreasonably bad to others, how do you judge him? But the way I chose to present it, and the supporting characters I wrote. . . Not very emotional or sympathetic. I don't know whether it's because the protagonist is mostly passive, a bystander who usually stands in the crowd and observes silently, or because there are so many dead people and they have no sense of existence. . . The feeling it gives is a helpless "oh okay, someone died again." If you ask me whether this article is worth reading: This article is completely free. If you have plenty of time, are not afraid of blood and violence, and have no other articles waiting for you to read, it is still a good way to pass the time. (Supplement: I have just started reading the second biography, and I just want to sigh that the dual perspective is really much easier to read [covering my face and laughing] If the first biography is not interesting, the second biography is much better, and even the writing style of the dull Ji Baobao and Mumu has become more flexible)

28 战 Prisoner of War Deep Forest FanyingDanmei (BL)851k WordsCompleted 1.5kFavorites810Clicks/ch768Nutrition

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"The sworn brothers who were sent from the sky work together to settle the world's major events. The considerate wise king and the virtuous and loyal general and his husband work together to honor the world and beat away all the stinky old men." 10.0 I can only shout: treasure article! ! Fans of Qiangqiang will regret it if they don't read it! From beginning to end, the plot does not drag on at all, and each chapter develops the story line or the character's state of mind. From the characters, rhythm, plot or writing style, I don't think there are any issues that can be criticized at all. On the contrary, it makes people want to read and replay to reflect on the development of the two protagonists. The IQs of the protagonist, supporting characters and villains are all online, and they all have their own reasons for doing things, whether good or bad. The author explains the motivations and purposes of the important characters quite thoroughly in this regard. Readers can actually figure out what is not written out because each character is fully developed and their logic can be figured out from the character's perspective. The emotions of the characters are also written very delicately and expressed very touchingly. When I read it, I really felt that no one is purely evil, but fate plays a role in making people. People cannot choose the environment or family in which they are born, and it is even harder to choose their enemies and friends. The only thing they can choose is their own mentality in facing everything. Although the story cover and introduction have a strange BE flavor, this article is sweet from beginning to end! The two protagonists are 1v1, there is no guessing, no unnecessary bloodshed or emotional frustration. The emotional line has actually stabilized their relationship very early. The bitter part is because they have their own psychological shadows, and they also need to let go of the darkness and find their own beliefs and the path they want to take. On this road, the two young lovers will never abandon each other, protecting and keeping each other warm. I really don't understand why such a good article has been hidden [covering my face, laughing and crying], maybe it's because the cover and title really look sad, although I can only say that the more I read, the more excited and happier I became.

29 纨 Dandy Deep Forest FanyingDanmei (BL)278k WordsCompleted 228Favorites992Clicks/ch493Nutrition

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"No matter what world we are in, we fall in love at first sight, but it's really torturous to be able to see but not touch." 6.8 The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl version of prisoner of war cp. In fact, the "This is not a fun article!!" Part of the original text should be put here. If the original text makes me feel better the more I read it, the if line makes me more depressed the more I read it. . . It's no wonder that the if line is less than half of the original text, and the ending is a bit rushed (although I really like the author's ending). . . If it's uncomfortable for readers to read, it must be even more uncomfortable for the author to write. The main storyline of this article assumes that Xiao Fang was not abducted and did not meet Xiao Wei early. The families on both sides are still alive and well, but they have become a bond between the two people, preventing their relationship from blossoming and bearing fruit. Although this is the case, it is still unavoidable that they fall in love at first sight and are in love with each other, but they can't show off openly and openly, but secretly flirt with each other. Just like the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl separated by the Milky Way, they can only look at each other from a distance, and they can kiss each other for a long time. The joint storyline of the if line is still the same as the original text. The problem is that the characters' positions, backgrounds, and experiences are different. It feels like a remake of a classic drama with the same name but different actors, story rhythm, and director style. You follow this remake because you like the original show, but the taste is not right. . . If we evaluate this article independently, it actually does not provide enough foreshadowing. Many storylines require reading the original article to understand the logic of the characters. Readers who have not read the original text will find the development of many things baffling. Moreover, the background of the characters is different from the original text, but the key points of the original text are still promoted. Although the story logic bugs are smoothed out as much as possible at the end, it is still. . . It's very hard to recommend. After reading it, I didn't have the urge to read the if line again, but wanted to rinse my mouth after recalling the original text. . . But I still have to say that it is quite interesting to see characters who died long ago in the original novel alive and well in this novel. It can give the two protagonists a different side from the original novel, which I still like. However, the supporting characters in the original text have been weakened a lot. They have been written from living characters to plot tools, which makes people feel a bit regretful. It can be seen that the author wrote this article for the idea of ​​"dandy version of Xiao Fang", but it is better to write a modern paro. . . Just because the setting of the imperial court is so depressing, there is little room for the characters to express themselves freely. As a reader who likes the original text, although I think the if line is well written and there are still some highlight moments, it is a bit inferior compared to the original text. . . Readers from the original text should lower their expectations and treat this as a side story.