The writing is average, and the plot is too jumpy. It feels like the protagonist randomly refreshes a scene to start a plot, a conversation happens and then nothing happens [cheek-holding][cheek-holding][cheek-holding]
As of 20 and taking 10 home, it was still good-looking. I thought Guihong Luoxue had improved, and the writing was better than when I wrote Rabbit. However, it turned out to be the work of my own crazy xp. The previous character descriptions and plot logic are all very good. Since 20's basement was discovered by 10, the story logic has become messy and confusing. For more than 20 consecutive chapters, you lie to me and I lie to you, you hate me and I hate you. Occasionally, I find that you love me and I love you, but you always beat me and I beat you. The motivation of Chen 20's behavior has never been explained clearly. The background of the story and the principle of dreaming, scene changes, and psychological description are all in a mess. It feels like writing where you dream. The one who is sick is not Chen 20, but Gui Hongluoxue who let himself go while writing the article. Chen 10 also touches on it later. The story cannot suddenly reverse, but there must be some foreshadowing to make people feel that there is a reason, and there is a trace to follow, right? It feels like Gui Hongluoxue slapped his forehead and said: The logic here is too smooth, let's reverse it! Then it became that 10 deliberately lured 20 to the bait, and 20 deliberately let 10 fall into a dream. The reason also felt like it was made up, and it was too uncontrollable. Chen 20 kept saying, don't worry, believe me, I have a way. Chen 10 has been doubting whether this will work or not. In the end, no one knows what Chen 20 can do and what trump card he has left for himself. Every time 20 said there was a way, I wanted to ask, Gui Hongluoxue, did you really write 20's final solution? The shortcoming of Gui Hongluoxue is that it cannot use psychological description to explain the logic of the character's behavior. This was the case a few years ago, and it is still the case a few years later.
The front part was pretty good, but a little Liu suddenly appeared in the back, and the emotional line was delayed without development. In addition, my friend Lao Shi always comes up with ideas, always emphasizing his identity as a psychiatrist and also emphasizing psychological counseling. As a result, he says and does things that really smear the image of psychological counselors, which is simply gossip. For a counselor to gossip about a client like this proves that the counseling is poorly done.
This is the most regretful novel I've ever read in Cigarettes and Wine. It's not about the writing style or the logic bugs, it's about the fact that I felt that at the end, the protagonist didn't seem to love me anymore. Even if the final outcome is a mutual confession, I still can't get rid of the empty feeling of "Mom and Dad are divorced". The two of them broke up before they had been dating for long. They didn't pursue each other, and they didn't want to accept their feelings. The emotional intensity was suddenly gone, and it didn't come up in the end. The key point of the broken mirror and reunion is not only the broken mirror, but also the "circle". If the circle is not powerful, why do people think that they can stay together forever? It makes me feel that if one day they have enough life, it would be normal for them to want to separate.
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