Personal Reading Log (Dropped Reads) 个人扫文记录（弃文）

1 回 Echoes [Infinite] 回声[无限] Frozen Superman冻感超人Danmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 96.2kFavorites79.9kClicks/ch199.9kGifts

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I read in the newspaper that the character design of the main character in the storyline is embarrassing, the emotional line is too deliberate, the identity of the boss is very casual, and the speed from being exposed to being arrested is very fast and low. The word "monster with murderous intent" appears too many times. It can be seen that the author wants to create a character. Obviously, the author does not have the strength to write this character, and the villain character is too simple. Oh and also, the protagonist's subsequent efforts to save the villain are disgusting. Is the character of the protagonist in the first dungeon the same as in the later ones?

2 再 If I Don't Win the Championship Soon, I'll Inherit a Trillion-Dollar Fortune 再不夺冠就要继承千亿家产了 Heaven's Radiance天予昭晖Danmei (BL)1.6M WordsCompleted 56.6kFavorites72.7kClicks/ch168.6kGifts

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The training game was well written, so I insisted on reading it. But I really don't like the handling of Xiao Xuechen's life experience, or the family relationship aspect. It seems reasonable for my uncle to raise my baby after my parents died, but I always feel that this is no different from surrogacy, except that the difference between using a stranger's womb and that of my biological sister is that. So I was also very tired of the plot where the uncle kept preventing the protagonist from skiing from the beginning. In order to highlight the relationship between nephew and uncle, the author subsequently spent a lot of words writing about the uncle's concern that the interaction between the protagonist and the two nominal fathers was boring. Because I always feel that this is glorified surrogacy... The author needs a child to be the protagonist, so the plot arranges for the protagonist's parents to die early, which is really awkward. When I was following the serialization, I happened to catch up on the running accounts of my nephew's exchanges, so I abandoned the article. After half a year, I finished reading the main text and finished reading the game. Overall, the game can be scored at 9.5 Points, and the nephew line is deducted by 4 points. In competitive writing, I just want to see the protagonist push his limits.

3 御 Beast Taming Begins with Awakening the Insect Mother's Bloodline 御兽从觉醒虫母血脉开始 Dudu Xiaodu嘟嘟小度No CP1.2M WordsOngoing 21.1kFavorites28.7kClicks/ch29.9kGifts

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How should I put it, Shuangdian did not meet expectations, and the more I looked at it, the more inconsistent it became. To be honest, the combat is not exciting and boring, and the combat power is not clearly graded. The heroine has no personal charm at all, and is even arrogant with a hint of stupidity and greed. Her golden finger is the insect mother's identity, and this gift of being close to God fundamentally leads to the plot's lack of real conflict. Insects naturally have a high affinity for the heroine, and may even betray the contractor because of this. I don't like this plot setting very much. It's like there is this code program embedded in the gene, and it will start running when you meet the heroine. I think this is unfair at the privilege level. What is the difference between this and poisoning? What does it have to do with what kind of person the heroine is? I don't see any difference between this golden finger on the heroine and others. The heroine even doesn't care about learning basic knowledge. Isn't this arrogant? The insect-type pet beast's affection for the heroine is too programmed, and it's hard to tell the truth from the lie. I can only read it as a mindless article.

4 艾 Aibei's Easter Egg 艾贝的彩蛋 Zhen Lizi甄栗子Romance536k WordsCompleted 75.1kFavorites180.8kClicks/ch102.1kGifts

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Although the article is relatively early, there is no obligation to tolerate it. The audition story Solitaire made me sick to my stomach. First of all, the plot doesn't stand up. How did the heroine smooth out the relationship and get a private room? Why did the heroine go to jail? Why did the heroine appear just when Diaosi No. 2 Was about to be fucked by the prison guard? Why does the plot have to weaken the heroine's physical strength? The advancement of the plot relies purely on running accounts, which does not reflect the strength of the heroine at all. Also, when the prison guard molested the heroine, why was the heroine so sure that giving the film a Band-Aid would make No. 2 Soft-hearted and "save" her? What, it all depends on the halo of the heroine, right? Then he kept giving charm to the loser No. 2, What kind of black-backed cub/so handsome... There was also a description of the expression the heroine made before the audition, and then the man in the assault suit thought it was lethal and didn't care... Later, there was also a description of the heroine's cute wink after observing the female characters No. 3 And 4... What on earth was she cute about... In the first chapter, the heroine even killed a person alone, but as a result, she started to reduce her combat effectiveness when entering the main text, and kept staring at the heroine, right? Does this count as tricking readers into killing them... [Rolls eyes]

5 凶 The Haunted House Landlord’s Management Game 凶宅房东的经营游戏 Ashes of the Green Lamp青灯烬No CP935k WordsCompleted 57.2kFavorites55.4kClicks/ch169.7kGifts

Curator note

The first time I read two chapters, I was persuaded to quit. Later, it turned out that I started reading from the third chapter. It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. The protagonist of Dihualiu is too stupid to look directly at. The plot relies entirely on the aura of the protagonist and the intelligence of the supporting characters to advance the plot.

6 御 Beast Tamer, I’ll Work to Support You 御兽师，我打工养你啊 Granny Nine-Tails九尾婆婆Romance1.4M WordsOngoing 67.8kFavorites64.5kClicks/ch446.9kGifts

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There is no need to watch Xiguang after it comes out. The rest of it was written just to play with Liu Xing's jokes. The mascots and bosses appeared one after another. The IQ of the entire team is estimated to be no more than ten years old, which can only be said to be inadequate. The crisis can be overcome by making jokes. The so-called fragile body, so being frequently injured by the dragon's aura, has become the only life crisis. It's outrageous! You are in a different world. You can write more exciting plots, but you have to write comedies, which is a waste of story background. The story should indeed serve the heroine, but when the author starts piling connections on the heroine to enhance her "strength", it becomes boring.

7 人 Human, You Can Lean on a Bird's Chest 人，你可以倚靠鸟的胸膛 Xingyu星愉Danmei (BL)773k WordsCompleted 176.5kFavorites150kClicks/ch197.1kGifts

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In fact, I don't want to give it even one star. I feel like the author doesn't know what the universe is... All the other little animals in the article are very cute, except for the protagonist Shou. It can be a real bird that transforms into a human, but it cannot be a human that transforms into a bird and then a human. A working man who has worked for more than n years in his twenties is showing off in bird skin, no matter how good-looking he is.

8 满 A Max-Level Commander Rescues People Online [Hologram] 满级指挥官在线救人[全息] Crazy Dog疯狗狗Romance471k WordsCompleted 522Favorites230Clicks/ch1.3kGifts

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This one is even more disgusting and can be called vicious. The author can't wait to package the heroine as a gift and send it to the bed of any male character who can be named, and then seize the heroine to play the role himself. Although she is a full-level commander, one-on-one battles with the male protagonist rely on plug-ins; although the female protagonist has made investigating the cause of her brother's death a daily routine, she was exhausted after meeting the male protagonist. She fell naked in the bathroom while on a business trip and was rescued by the male protagonist. The female protagonist did not feel guilty. Why are you so embarrassed? But it turns out that you are embarrassed to be wearing a suspender when you play the role of an anchor. You, the author, have really worked hard for the male protagonist. You want to make the male protagonist not obscene and the female protagonist be virtuous. [Rolls eyes] What about the brother who arranges for the wife to be kidnapped later? Can't you write about childhood sweethearts? Can't we write about the mutual sympathy between masters who fell in love with each other at first sight? Oh, actually the author just wanted an excuse to satisfy her sexual fetish. In the game, you can say that it is for the mastermind behind the scenes, but outside the game, the scene where the three of them ride a motorcycle together, with the heroine sitting in the middle, is really weird. The female protagonist's chest is pressed against the male protagonist's good brother's back, and her hair rubs against the male protagonist's chin. The two of them are in a different mood, but the female protagonist is completely unaware... Where is the shame of facing various female anchors changing clothes for live broadcast? [Rolling eyes][Rolling eyes][Rolling eyes][Rolling eyes][Rolling eyes] Are these things related to the main plot? There is a threshold for being a protagonist these days, okay, I'm really convinced...

9 我 My Wife Is Cold-Hearted 我妻薄情 Green Radish Skirt青青绿萝裙Romance2.2M WordsCompleted 277.6kFavorites479.8kClicks/ch2MGifts

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The main text gave Chen Danruo 9.9 Points, and the 0.1 Point deducted was because the author racked his brains to arrange this male protagonist who was just okay. Extra-10, if Chen Dan returns to modern times, he is no longer mentally retarded. The author uses a 20-chapter extra to seize the heroine and fall in love with the Celestial Dragon hero. It's really disgusting. A woman who reached the top of power in a feudal dynasty, achieved great success, and died of her old age returned to modern times and suffered from PTSD. She was timid and could only find the arrogant male protagonist of the Celestial Dragon to be coquettish and fall in love with her (I still have the reincarnation of memories. Ancient and modern people are given privileges. I really love you, the author)... I guess my brain was eaten by zombies when I was writing the extra story. It's my fault that I was insensitive at the time. The book was about the growth history of the female protagonist, but it was named "My Wife is Unkind". Haha, what does it mean? Why did the author feel wronged for the male protagonist? [Eye roll]